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Posted: 3 years ago

Res 🤗

Haaye, kya showdown tha yaar. Felt I was watching it, waha baith kar aur popcorn khaate khaate.

The intensity was chef's kiss, and I could see the shivi from the screen fighting and yelling and being physical (different wala) and the everything about this ts was super cute. And TS ke naam pe novella likh diya tune behen.

But that being said, mehnat dikh rahi hai and i really want to read more but mujhpe rehem kha ke usse short story mein likh de pure chapter mein nahi.

Also, I got yjhd camp fire vibes from this, all friends going somewhere out, falling in love, moving on, and growing up.

Haaye

The fact that you write so well yet be so modest, imma hit you with a stick i swear one day. And Haan, agar iske aage ka kuch mil jaaye toh

Kuch chotu sa bhi chalega.

Rishita being so supportive and reading between the lines is all so cute because she's my fav PS character so... 🤗and it would be great to have a reunion aur dekhe ke ye sab saalon baad kaha hai, but of course, upto you.

Thank you for penning this down, and breaking your head for it but itne saare appreciation comments ke baad tujhe toh pata chal hi hoga ki worth it tha.

Agli baari jaldi likhna aur mujhe tag kariyo.

☺️

Edited by Gadbad_Ghotala - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Updated!

Part Two : Page 18


Final set of Tags!


Soooo sorrry if I have forgotten anyone...I will soon create a permanent list of UNs to tag! 😳


Give it a shot if you want to. 😆❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Unres (after ages)😆


Jealous Shiva is always fun to read...

Okay!! Starting from the start...

Shiva not leaving a chance to be around Raavi and trying to talk to her is cute...Like I found it cute...😆

The bonfire description gave me "YJHD" vibes...I imagined this scene like that ....

Poor guy Siddharth has to bear the burnt of Shiva ki jealousy.....Though he didn't meant what Shiva thought but kya kar sakte hai....Shiva is jealous😆

I am glad Raavi didn't held back and the two end up kind off saying what they were feeling from long time not everything though ......

Aww that Sid guy seems like a sweetheart asking sorry for something jo iski galti thi b nahi.. but again bere comes he great angry Shiva ......Damn ladka jealousy mei aag ban jata hai..😆

Rishita is not just a good friend but surely gonna be an amazing bhabhi ...She knows Shiva better then Dev.

Coming to the final showdown...It couldn't have been better Ritu.....

The angst, the hurt and the confession everything came out so well.❤️

Loved this whole different take on Shiva and Raavi.❤️

Edited by Nicky-nish - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Ritu, I absolutely loved it. I'll come back with a full review later. ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Itna achha likhogi or bologi ki ab or nhi likhungi to kaise chalega madam

Jelly Shiva>>>>>

How beautifully you described each and every emotion behind the dialogues, one can literally see the whole scene in front of them by the description.

I loved loved your writing Ritu❤️

Edited by Pritha_31 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Res? Maafi? Pweassseee?????? Because I was sleeping, then studying. Just checked IG. Ok? Then I ran for IF. 😒😭

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Posted: 3 years ago

Okay, I got my butt here.

Imma read and comment sooooooon!


also Hola Sathya!!!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Two words - Holy Guacamole!!


What was that? What did I just read?! I could envision the entire scene playing out as if I was watching it on a screen. Kind of like the scene between Kabir and Naina in Yeh Jawaani Hai Deewani. Ah, the angst, the heartache, the tumultuous emotions.. you penned all of it down so well.

Amazing job, friend!


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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Res? Maafi? Pweassseee?????? Because I was sleeping, then studying. Just checked IG. Ok? Then I ran for IF. 😒😭

Main gussa hoon ab. 💔

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Posted: 3 years ago

Uhm Jealous Shivaaa is

and Raavi doesnt hold back I love itttt❤️

also I dont know about specific Harry Potter references I might have missed, but they have me major Ron-Hermione vibesss ❤️ will go back in a bit to find it 🤣

I loved both you updates this was a treaaaat to read ❤️

You should writee more ❤️

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