Arylie FF: Second Chances - IMPORTANT NOTE - Page 21

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Posted: 3 years ago

😔 yes, yes glimpses of the real Aru. Gadheda ...abhi aur karnaame dikhayega. My poor Imlie. Bechara confusiyawat hai. Hai Kaun - angel or the devil.


This was the first time of course that I have written a fight scene. So glad you enjoyed it. Real fights I imagine are very quick and over within minutes, so wanted to keep the action short and relevant.


As always, your reviews make me 🤣 especially all the strikethroughs. ❤️ YOU 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Chanchal_tvd

Omg omg!


"As if doing so would repeatedly move it faster" hahaa!!! So damn relatable!!🤣


"Aryan Singh Rathore is begging him"....I want one ...please please...god...u hear me...I need one!!😭🥺


M...This whole rescue scene you wrote! Damn I tell you...its nothing less than a first rate work!! I mean it so engaging...all the visuals...those panic stricken moments..i was so intrigued! Taaaliyaan bajti rehni chaiye!! 👏👏👏


Then that hospital scene! Dr. Verma U rock!! I love her! No wonder Imlie feels comfortable with her...she is all love!❤️


Aryaaannn!! He held her handdddsssss... Oh my....murder me M....I was so smitten by this!


Imlie !!!! Bhagwaan shakti do! My heart breaks for her...sucha poor soul! Koi nahi imlie destiny haina! Youre life is up for something very very beautiful!😭❤️


Thoda jaldi aa gyi yeh doston ki toli! M jaldi isko rathore mansion me shift karao!!! Jk!!! They are love...the fact that you actually considered their meet ups often makes me wanna danceeeee!!!!


Annnnddd....my phavorite part!!!😂😂

Maaahiii!! Gawd mahi how are you so adorable!

"Also known as the BABY DADDY!"

M...you make my dopamine levels go all silly! *Prays secretly for this to be medically accurate...after the week 4 fiasco*😉😂🤭


Also... Let me know If I am I the only one who shipped...only for a sec ...#MARYA!?😆😆😆

You are powerful with your words! That small eyelock...that small finger gesture made me ship them!

Well it wont happen again!Lol *tries to hide face under the blanket*..

Ik u'll be like: Haila! Aisa toh maine soch bhi nahi tha!🤷


Chalo...bohot hass liya...ab apun chaltay!😎

Next part aane do aane do!!🥳


Par pata hai...aaj maine jaan bhujke late padha....after all that practical crap! This made me feel good! Uske liye...for the one hundredth time....THANK YOU!😳❤️


BYYYEEEE!!!!🤗


Yes so far your ship occupancy is 1 unless someone wants to step up to join you. But Mahii is adorable, 🤷🏻‍♀️🤷🏻‍♀️🤷🏻‍♀️


Hand hold: not sure if he'd have done that had she been awake. But the whole incident did really scare him within an inch of his life. And ASR is never daunted by anything, he never begs anyone ....until now. If he was confused before ... SMH.....I feel for him and her. Him because he is confused and her because he confuses her with all these mixed signals.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Update chapter 14. Enjoy!! - Love, M


https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/chapter/26912

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Updated Chapter 15. Enjoy!! 😃 Love, M


https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/chapter/26925

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Posted: 3 years ago

Chapter 14



Lol whom aru is kidding with? He doesn't want his family to get attached to her yet he chose the room from which he can niharo-ing her anytime he wants from his own room. Isn't that developed in a habit too? 9 months niharo-ing her. After 9 months When she won't be there anymore ain't it gonna sting? And here ghochu asking these ladies not to get attached. Idiot.

I loved dadi! Dadi asking every damn correct kushchin. Lol dadi thought he's gay 😂 you know in fifty shade people used to think ML was a gay! Even Anastasia asked him in their first interview are you gay..something like that. Good lord aise hi dom hei..ab fifty shades ki parchayi bhi agayi. ek play room milegi kya? 😜 red red wala. Four poster bed ke saath 😌 (meri imagination mei asani hogi)

Btw M mere future mei bhi yeh same dadi wale KUSHCHIN aney wali hei I'm sure now. Very soon ammi kaki will start predicting these or asking these to me 🙂


But seriously this woman! She's the coolest dadi one can ask for. I'm sure maahi has some connection with her genes 🤪 daaadi kahi jake namaq ishq ka to nahi khel ayi na? Also i have this pheeling once she finds out all these thoughts her grandson having and the affect imlu have on her. She might just go and buy that girl some Victoria's secret lingerie. And send pics of those to aru 😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣 anything is possible for her. Or locking them in a room, sending two glasses of badam wala doodh every night. Might give viagra too I'm sorry but dadi's character got me real excited 🤣 I'm just so in love with her. Make maahi her granddaughter . Ops isse aru ki behen ho jayegi but who cares i just want daadi now 🤗Having a dadi like her ish goaaaal!


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Posted: 3 years ago

Chapter 14 :-


Okie! M my genuine kushchin time


So see i know Aryan never stayed calibrated...and he has got THIS HORSE FAAAKING DOM ATTITUDE . So this got me curious, had he always been like this when he was with that bish too? You know like this dom attitude was always there ...during their sexy times. Or that time he was more happy being a sub in bedroom activities? Dhoke ne dom bana diya? 😲😲

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Chapter 14 :-


Okie! M my genuine kushchin time


So see i know Aryan never stayed calibrated...and he has got THIS HORSE FAAAKING DOM ATTITUDE . So this got me curious, had he always been like this when he was with that bish too? You know like this dom attitude was always there ...during their sexy times. Or that time he was more happy being a sub in bedroom activities? Dhoke ne dom bana diya? 😲😲


I think Natalie was definitely the leader there. He was younger and she was his first. The things she said to him when she broke up with him have left long lasting effects. He craves control because he lost it when she cheated on him and left and he could do nothing. 🤷🏻‍♀️ That is how I see him. I honest to God did not even draw a comparison to Ana asking Grey if he was gay until you brought it up 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 it just seemed like the perfect way for Dadi to play some more mindgames with him. 😂😂 Yeah Dadi and you must have been related in some lifetime. You are too similar. 😂😂😂


And finally, you are echoing Destiny. Dude who are you kidding? That is why Dadi says nothing in return when he gives her the usual don't get attached waala lecture. 😀😀

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Posted: 3 years ago

Hullala!


Aa gaya aapka jeeta hua sipaahi!😉😆


"Her voice had taken on that tone that mothers often used when convincing a headstrong child"....simply amazingg😃


"He'd never wanted to let go off her hands" hayee mai mar jawaaan🥳


Baby Rathore! OMG! Sucha dil melting moment! Protect them at all costs!🧿🧿❤️❤️🤧🤧


M....the one who read Imlie's report at the hospital! Who is he again?🧐🧐🧐🤨🤨🤨🤨


Daaadiiii!! Ek ek sitti toh mai marungi dadi ke liye!!!🤣

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That entire coffee convo was the best best part!!!

I literally fell off my bed and hurt my elbow! Ahh it still hurts!!! But aye haye maza hi aa gaya!!


Its official! Mahii is Dadi 2.0😂😂😂Destiny(story wali nahi meri destiny) aisi dadi sabko dena!


Zor se bolo....

Hamara neta Hamari dadi kaisi ho?

Aru ki dadi jaisi ho!🤣


No

This was awesome! We want more Aru Dadi convo!! Damn destiny ka aadha kaam toh dadi ne hi kar diya....jai dadi ki!🤣🤣


Uuuff! Bohot hass liye!

Earlier today I felt cheated!! For I learnt every effing thing for chem pract and ta da? They were sharing all the answers! Yeh exam tha ya mazak tha bhai?🤷🤷

Im what even a board pract was that?

Plus I missed my bus by almost two mins...stupid local...never on time!😡



M...aapne voh saare ke saare stress ke peeth ma koni maar di!!

Boleto sukkoooon ki neend soyega apun abhi!😉

Likhte raho! Phoolo phalo!

SHUKRIYA BIDU!🤗❤️


*Laughs again*🤣

Edited by Chanchal_tvd - 3 years ago
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Hey you!😃


Yesss! Dhol bajao koi! Practicals samplay re!🥳🥳🥳

Kaha thi mai? Yep. Chap15!


Yaar bichari Imlie! I cant see her crying! Chal re ro mat abhi rathore mansion mein maze hi maze hai tere! M....doston ko laate rehna ha beech beech me! Pleej


"Your fiance.....her man" umm!!

Destiny U doin it pretty welll!😉


Oh you yeah-butt.......pulling up a blanket! Goner!😆


Is she going to pass out everytime?...Doomed! Yes you are! 🥱


Whats with the nurse!!😂😂😂


Imlie....you are very capable of being a first rated GHOCHU! Brother seriously? U tryna hide those pheelings...na na...not gonna work!! Same goes with you...Mr. Yeah-But!


Just ASR thing....denying all the posibilities of bhaichaara! Ladka ludak gaya hai rey...pyaar me!🤣


Are you planning to write another beautiful graduation party scene M? Thad be a treat to read! Cant wait!😲


Ohh the cold patti rey! Sucha beautiful scene! Loved it!👏☺️


She Enchanted him! He doesnt wanna be Enchanted! We'll see that...tum na bohot bade wale ghochu ho akkkadbagge!😃


But seriously! She is growing like a flower around the cactus!

Cactus with thorns...to keep out the world...but the flower determined to be by his side! ❤️


Ahhh! The mood swings and food cravings started haaaaa! Abhi maza aayegana bidu! 😆


ASR calling for the third time for ice-cream?

Pehle blanket....fir new phone...fir music..fir cold patti...ab sitaphal icecream? Batao kaise na pyaar ho isse! Caring Singh Rathore....jaan ban gaye aap❤️✨💝


And take care of your girl or IMdestiny is gonna hand me my ass!🤣🤣

M ......yeh bohot sahi tha! Had a good laugh!


Wahhhhhh

Kya likha hai yaar yeh wala!

Pchh! How do you this?

Voh letke konsa wala pranaam karte hai..shashwat ya dandwat...jo bhi ho...meri taraf se ek voh wala pranaam for you!!👏🤗

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