💔♥️The Fault in our stars✨: Shivi OS prt5 pg3 - Page 2

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Part5

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Suman: Ae maar..


Shiva: (kneels to Suman's level and holds her and nodding no.. giving a halt to her words). Maa? Yeh tu kya bol rahi hai... MAARKUNDI GAAAY, KABHI GANDA KHOON... kya yeh sahi hai? Tu khud soch... Agar teri koi beti hoti aur usey koi aise bolta toh kaisa lagta tujhe? Yeh Matt soch ki mein abb sirf uski side le raha hu... Mein maa abb bhi tera hi beta hu... Aur hmesha rahunga.. par Maa? Tu hi bata jo bhi kuch Raavi ke saath shaadi waale din se hua hai kya woh agar teri beti ke saath hota kya tu seh paati?

Pehle dev ne usey dhokha diya... Maa woh iss baat se bhi itni dukhi nahi hui thi ki dev kisi aur se pyaar krta hai... Par iss baat se dukhi hui thi ki dev ne ussey bataaya bhi nahi... Fir jab meri aur Raavi ki shaadi hui toh kya mera behaviour sahi tha? Meine kabhi bhi uss sey uske baare mein poocha? Kabhi usey jaan ne ki koshish ki? Nahi... Maa Raavi ne hmesha iss rishte ko jode rakhne ki baat ki hai... Fir chaahe woh shaadi ek din baad ki baat ho yaa abb ki ho... Maa mei khud se jo gussa tha woh uspe nikaal raha tha... Kya yeh sahi hai? Nahi naa. (By now all had tears in their eyes... Raavi stood their astonished as Shiva was speaking for her, here eyes held a twinkle) Maa divorce kaa meine bola.. lekin sunna kise pada? Raavi ko... Mein uske dost ki kahi uss baat pe itna gussa ho gaya ki rishta hi todh diya.. jo baat usey pata bhi nahi thi... Aur woh roz Disha ko mere saath dekhti thi chaahe humaara rishta tab jaisa bhi tha... Par maa fir bhi tab divorce nahi hua tha... Aur apne partner ko kisi aur ke saath dekhna asaan nhi hota.. kabhi bhi.... Aur maa chal fir uske baad sab theek ho gaya tha... Toh meine aur tuune Raavi par IVF ke kaandh mein shaq krliya, divorce papers ka bhi... Par kayi baar naa maa jo dikhta hai wohi sach nahi hota...jaise Kayi baar jo log doosro ko hsaate hai naa, woh khud andar se kab haste hain.. kisi ko naa fark padta hai aur na pata hota hai. Waise hi maa... Kya tujhe lgta hai? Raavi aisa kuch kar skti hai....


Suman: par Shiva..


Shiva: chal tujhe aaj woh baatien bataata hu jo sirf mere aur Raavi ke beech rahi hain aaj tak... Maa tujhe yaad hai naa.. jab hum Gaumbi aur dhara bhabhi ka room bana rahe thei! Aur maal kharaab hone par humaare paas paiso ki kami ho gyi thi?... Tab yeh Raavi... Isne apni maa ke gehne girwi rkhne bole thei... Tu hi bata mein papa ke diye hue kangan ke liya kya kuch nahi kiya uski maasi ke saath par Raavi ne naa maa 1 second bhi nahi lagai.... Uske baad jab usey pata chala ki dhara bhabhi pregnant hain toh Maa.. woh bina kisi cheez ki parwaah kiye waapis aa gayi... Aur mila kya? Taane, teri nafrat... Roz roz ki khitpit.. fir jab abb IVF ka bataaya tha dhara bhabhi ne toh pata hai kitni excited thi woh? Meine dekha tha... Yeh sab baatien aaj tak usne boli? Nahi... Par maa jo ladki itna kuch kar skti hai... Kya woh kabhi bhi aisa ghinona kaam karegi?Nahi naa... Aur divorce papers bhi uss se maami ne dhokhe se sign karvaaye.... Aur iss baat ka mujhe koi saboot pesh nahi krna kyuki agar aap sab Raavi ko apna maante ho toh uske ek baar kehne se hi vishvaas ho jaana chahiye.. bass maa ek cheez kahunga.. agar uska haath hota toh woh naa toh itne efforts daalti, naa uss din lie detector use krti, aur naa hi apne baare mein itne baatien bante dekh bhi yaahan rukti... Abb jo tu bolegi woh hi hoga... Agar tu chahti hai Raavi iss ghar se chali jaye toh woh chali jayegi.. (raavi and all of the others got shocked) (Shiva stands up and holds Raavi's hand) but akele nahi... Uske saath tera yeh beta bhi jayega..


Raavi: yeh kya bol raha hai Shiva? Tu..tu samajh bhi aa raha hai? Yaa bass aise bhi bolne mein laga hai?


Gautam: Nahi Raavi... Beta aaj woh sahi bol raha hai..bhale hi mein yeh nahi chahta par.. aaj woh sahi hai..


Suman: Idhar aao... Idhar aao dono?


Raavi's grip on his hand tightens as both of them move towards her...


Suman: (carresses their cheek) Kya tum dono mujhe maaf karoge? Beta meine tum dono ko hi samajhne mein glti krdi... Jahaan ki mujhe tum dono ke rishte ko bachaane ki koshish krni chahiye thi... Meine todne ki koshish krdi unjaane mein... Kya dono mujhe maaf karoge?


Raavi: (as both of their's heads lie on Suman's lap) Kaaki? Aapko maafi maangne ki koi zarurat nahi hai... Meine aapko starting se apni maa maana hai aur aapko maafi maangne ki koi zarurat nahi hai....


Suman: (Chuckles) Accha kya bolte ho tum log? Woh.. fhai-mil..ee hug aaajao sab wo krte hain..fiir hum sab milke uss anita aur Prafulla se sach bulwaaenge... Meri do.do bahuon ko dhokha diya hai bhai unhone...


All off them smiled as they wiped their tears away and ran into the hug.. where Shiva and Raavi kept stealing glances at each other... They were still holding each other's hands as if their life depended on their partner...


Soon all of them parted away..


Suman: Fhollow me...


All of them Chuckled as they saw the MAHA SAAS doing darmatics.. and went to the temple they had in their house itself..


Suman: Aaj itne time baad humare ghar mein sab khush hain.. toh bhagwaan ko praarthana krna toh banta hai naa?


All of them prayed for the well-being of their family... And were going to leave when Shiva asked them to stand their..


All: kya hua?


Shiva:bass ek minute.. (he ran to his room and came back) k..kuch bo.bolna hai..


Krish: abhi bhi? Kitna bolne laga hai tu Shiva? Sab Raavi bhabhi kaa asar hai.. Tu bhi peticoat chaap no.3 bann hi gaya hai..? (Mimicking Suman) (as a blush rose to shivi's cheeks)


Suman: ae tu meri acting Matt kar haa.?


All of them laughed... Soon Shiva was seen sitting on his knees his hand held out for Raavi.. which brought tears in her eyes all of other's faces held utmost happiness..


Shiva: Raavi? Will you marry me?.........once again (all of them Chuckled at the cute face he was making)


Raavi: (nodes and places her hand in his) I'll marry you..Mr. Shiva Pandya..


She asked Shiva stand up.. he took out the ring box..

And received hoots from the family members.. they were sharing their most important moment with...

He hesitantly puts the ring in her ring finger.. and both of them smiled... None of the others teased them coz they wanted them to enjoy their happiness with whole heart...


Raavi: Ek minute.. aap log yahi ruko.. mein bhi aayi.. (she too goes to the room and returns with the box, she goes on her knees and makes Shiva wear the ring)

I Love you Shiva... (She says softly)


Shiva: I love you too chipkali..( and both of them share a hug and get parted slowly but in less time)


Dhara: (carresses both of their's cheeks) finally.. tum dono ne bhi izhaar kar hi liya par rings kab laaye?


Shiva/Raavi: Aapko pata toh hai bhabhi/di... Usi din..


Dhara: accha!


Suman: Chalo... Chalo sab abhi neend toh ayegi nhi jldi se... Itne baithke baatien krte hain.. kyu gaumbi? Jaise pehle krte thei..


Gaumbi: haa maa..


Raavi: (as she saw rishita getting confused) arrey! Rishita? Actually kabhi humaari shaadi ke baad hum log aise beithe hi nahi... Hum na pehle aise hi shaam ko usually beith jaate thei baatien krne.. bohot maza aata tha.. tumhe bhi bohot maza aayega.. haina Bhootnath..


Shiva: (happily nodes) Haa bhabhi.. bohot maze krte thei.. chalo...


Krish: aadhi baat kyu bata rahe ho dono?


Raavi: kya?


Krish: toh aur kya... Baatien kam krte thei.. tum dono ek doosre pe hawaayi fire zyada krte thei.. pata hai rishita bhabi.. bhale kitna hi lad lein yeh dono.. popcorn ek doosre ke tub mein se hi khaate thei..


Rishita: Wow! How romantic.. (making Shiva and Raavi blush)


Shiva: bhabhi yeh gadheda toh kuch bhi bak bak krta hai.. aap iski baaton pe dhyaan Matt do..


As Shiva and Raavi ran to the courtyard... As Shiva layed on a cot on his stomach.. raavi sat beside him on the stairs as they sat before the wedding.. their pet places.. since the tradition of this talk started in their house..


All of them had their places.. as Rishita sat beside Dev as she was the only new person in this. Today's talk was mainly teasing Shiva and Raavi, some of all of their's childhood funs.., the planning against Prafulla and anita and the management of shivi remarriage... The Pandya parivaar was seen giggling, talking, laughing together after too long.. Suman sent silent prayers for her children... They all left for their respective rooms to get ready..


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The day paased by happily all were by now in their respective rooms. But our poor Shiva was lying on the cot and Raavi was in room..... Both of them had their eyelock made..... as he felt krish to be asleep, he sneaked into the room.. and saw his chipkali waiting for him... Both of them layed on the bed facing each other... As Shiva pulled Raavi to him by her waist.. her breath hitched..... He kissed her forehead.. as their lips found each other's and soon they touched....their first kiss happened slowly... Yet happily, both of them trying to pour thier love... Soon the parted away and smiled at each other.... They snuggled closer and slept only after setting up the alarm to wake up early as Shiva would run to his cot as Suman had ordered them to stay away from each other.. till wedding..


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