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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Noodles🤗!!! This was such a hatke idea! I have a similar one processing itself in my head, but it's going to be much, much more angsty.... And so this cutie patootie of a TS made me very, very happy!

Truly, distance teaches us some things that nothing else ever can. And I'm glad it was Shiva who took the first step forward, that he apologised first. Will be waiting for the second part! ❤️


Thank you jaan

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Posted: 3 years ago
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2 weeks ago


It had been 1 successful week of Raavi and Shiva acting like love sick teenagers, sharing minute details with each other had become a routine. Shiva’s mobile bill knew no bounds, sleeping on call together was the new set rule. They decided to take everything slow until she returned back home.


The anticipation of waiting to meet each other bought new feelings. Shiva had never been in a relationship before, and this whole concept of dating one would say. Though the two of them are legally married, the feeling of falling in love and doing things that boyfriends and girlfriends did thrilled both of them.


Raavi had wanted to keep their relationship lowkey until she returned back to town. If there was something Raavi truly believed in, then that was evil eye. She wanted to protect her relationship from every form of negativity.


Jagat’s health was getting better by the day, seeing his daughter live so happily and freely added to his recovery.


Raavis whereabouts were still unknown to the Pandyas, but they knew that Shiva and Raavi kept in touch. That was enough to comfort them for now



Pandya niwas



Shiva, Rajkot mein ek naya offer aya hai. Wahan pe stock check karne jana hai. Agar tu chahe toh mere saath aa sakta hai.” gaumbi suggested


Rajkot” that's all registered in his brain. He could finally meet his woman, he thought


“Arrey gaumbi, aap kyun tension le rahe ho. Main jaata hoon na. Aap yahan raho bhabhi ke saath” shiva replied instantly


The speed at which his response came did take everyone by surprise, but the family also knew how passionate shiva was about the store which made them not think too much about it


“Haan beta tu ja, thoda ghum phir lega toh mann bhi halka hoga” suman suggested


“Ji maa. Kab jana hai gaumbi?” shiva asked restlessly


“Aaj raat ko” he replied



Rajkot


Raavi was going restless by the passing minute, it had been over 12 hours since she spoke to shiva. He hadn't sent his classic usual good morning message, neither did he call her to check up on her. Raavi had heard her aunt telling jagat about how suman was looking for prosperous brides for shiva.


She trusted him, but not the circumstances. Fate had never been in her favor, and she didn't have it in her to go through another heartbreak.


Shiva had planned to surprise her in rajkot, he decided to ignore her texts and messages until he reached rajkot.


Will his ‘surprise’ lead to another misunderstanding??


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HELLO BEAUTIFUL PEOPLEEE

i am finally back to write

writers block finally nikal gaya

I have decided to continue my ongoing works

And will try to update small parts consistently

But as i have exams going on simultaneously, incase im unable to do so.

apologies in advance 🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Eager to read this one 😍🤩😘

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