Forelsket - ShiVi TS // Chotu part - page 4 - Page 2

Oooh noodles. This was so beautiful. I can't wait to read the next part 😆

Thanks for the tag😳

That's so beautiful & Raavi needs just that.. She doesn't even need apologies.. She only needs acknowledgement of her hurt.. That's so beautifully written ❤

Noodles🤗!!! This was such a hatke idea! I have a similar one processing itself in my head, but it's going to be much, much more angsty.... And so this cutie patootie of a TS made me very, very happy!

Truly, distance teaches us some things that nothing else ever can. And I'm glad it was Shiva who took the first step forward, that he apologised first. Will be waiting for the second part! ❤️

glad they communicated and i loved it

it was soo cute

Originally posted by: VaishnaviG

Loved the first part Taani ❤️

Softiee shivi are my favourite

Do write some mature content ☺️matlab Thoda Innu sa 🤌

YES YES

i have 1 mature part planned for this one

but lets see how its shapes up

Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

Perfect❣️❣️

Thus word define your work............

Just perfect🤩

thank you so much jaan

updating soon

Originally posted by: Paru95

This is an amazing take on that incident dear😍

I loved the dialogues😳

Waiting for the next part

Loved it🤗

i hope you like the way the story shapes itself

updating in a while <3

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

This was so beautiful ❤️❤️❤️

I loved how Shivi learned from prior mistakes and Shiva took the initiative to call her without ego getting in the way! Looking forward to the next part. Update soon!

i am glad you liked it

updating soon

Originally posted by: Luvs_SanIsh

🥰💕Truly amazing, just love the last line which is so true and speaks volume to any relationship. Can’t wait for your next update 💕💕💕

updating in a while jaan

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Ye itna chhotu chhotu likh ke mera dil jala bas tu!

Aur aangta hai na mereko...😭

NGL, this was so so so good...I thought It'd be sadder than ever but the cute making up was something unexpected and I liked it.

The 'Apna Khayal Rakhna' has my freaking heart.

Shiva calmly listening/understanding/pacifying the person he loves is something I have been manifesting since so long but milta hi nhi.

Update soon haaann. ❤️

Kar rahi hoon update meri maa

I hope you will like how the story shapes up

Im thinking of making it an FF