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Posted: 3 years ago
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Next day of makarsakranti Meety was looking for parth

Meety gets to know manu ka karam kaand and all her kala chitta and completely breaks

And went to her papa smriti and get lost in her thoughts not realizing the time

After sometime

Meetwa reaches home and not finding meety and on enquiring manu is also not found he gets scared and gets to know she hasn't came back from her work

And remember manu ka warning of yesterday about letting meety knows ki she wants him back so she should back off

Meetwa gets scared and runs out of the house to look for meety and calls ram lakhan who informs him about Meety whereabouts

On reaching there he tries to take her back who denies to go anywhere so after lots of persuading they go to hooda haveli for sometime but seeing Manushi there meety rushes out of the house but somehow Meetwa gets hold of her and takes her to Alhawat mansion their on asking a lot meety break down and tells him everything about Manushi

And knowing the manipulative deeds of manu Meetwa started hating her more but cant express seeing his meetys' condition

After lots of consoling he puts her to sleep but meety gets up once Meetwa is fast asleep and freeing her hand went to pooja room

And sits there babita who was going from kitchen see her there and asks the reason

And meety instead of telling her reason request her help

Help in changing herself help to make Meetwa fall for her not knowing he has already fallen for her as she can't loose him

As she meet hooda who has never dreamt of a married life has fallen in love with her husband and can't live without him

Babs tries to make her understand somewhat knowing her sons feelings but finally agree with her as at the end of the she prefers a glamorous gorgeous wife for her son

And if meet herself is asking for this so why should she object

So babs agress to help meety on one condition that nobody should no about this makeover untill she is fully trained and changed into the girl as per the society norms

Meety agrees to her condition and finally feeling a bit relaxed she comes back to her room and sees Meetwa and looking at her she remembers how inthe afternoon she has planned a dupe to look for parth but it has opened manu truth in front of her and how she has insulted her humiliated her

That how she is such a misfit for Alhawats and meetA will never see her as his wife nor will he ever be able to love her

And meety still couldn't digest the fact that more than her didis disgusting truth what hurted her the most was the fact which was the harsh truth that Meet doesn't see her as the ideal match for herself if he would have given a choice than that Meet will not have been that choice ever.

Main janti hu dauduram teri pasand ki chori na hu main aur ye Baat bhi ki Shyad tu kade manne apne dil main jagah bhi na de paaye par k karu apne Iss Pagal dil ka jo teri khushi k liye kuch bhi kar gujarne ko raaji h soch main meet hooda jisne apne aap pe itna garur tha. Aaj tere kahtar apna huliya bhi badalne chali h sirf isliye ki Shyad Shyad meri Iss ek koshish se tu bhi manne apne jeevan sathi k taur pe apna le sirf dost na rahu tere liye

Main biwi ban saku teri

Woh biwi jisse dekhe k najare nichi na ho teri balki tu garv se sabke samne ke ja sake jisne

Jiske chehre ko dekhar tujhe chid na mache balki khushi jhalke tere chehre pe

Tu phir se wo pehle wala dauduram ban jaye jo tu humari shadi se pehle tha

Shyad shayad sab thik ho jaye shayad

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Itne mai nahi hoga. Uske baad janna hai Shivi🤪

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Its an emotional piece. There was another story somewhere na where Meetwa assures Meety that he likes her exactly the way she is? Was it you who wrote that too Monika?

This looks like a prequel to that piece.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is 😭

Please continue ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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oh nooo.. poor meety.. 😭dont change yourself dear.. you are the cutest biwi that meetwa can get.. groom a bit but dont go for a complete change.. like let your hair grow, change the shirt blouse.. thats enough ..

Please do write the second part dear.. this time with flashback of meetwa's povs..

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Monica aj ka episode kaisa lga?

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Posted: 3 years ago
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monika are you miffed with me? tum reply ni kr ri mje ?

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anjureads

Its an emotional piece. There was another story somewhere na where Meetwa assures Meety that he likes her exactly the way she is? Was it you who wrote that too Monika?

This looks like a prequel to that piece.

Ohh yeah … I remember that one too… where she has grown her hair a little.. and he misses her short hair … right?

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jugnu21

Ohh yeah … I remember that one too… where she has grown her hair a little.. and he misses her short hair … right?

Yes... was it Monika who wrote it? I couldnt track it when I wrote the comment.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anjureads

Yes... was it Monika who wrote it? I couldnt track it when I wrote the comment.

let me find that out .. probably monika ya jiggy hi honge …

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