Raavi TS : Serendipity (Chapter 4 updated pg 9) - Page 7

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Posted: 3 years ago
#61

This is such a different and realistic story ❣️

I admit that my shivi heart wants to see them together.but reading raavi's journey from a woman hopelessly in love to a woman standing up for herself and prioritising her self respect warmed my heart.

The last update was so so satisfying.raavi showing a mirror to the pandyas. The dlgs were amazing and so on point.i could imagine the scenario playing out in front of my eyes.

Raavi finally got her fairytale. A loving family for which she had craved for from childhood. You should definitely write more. Loved it ❣️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#62

Love it.

It was awesome

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Posted: 3 years ago
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First of all loved the saying you quoted at the beginning ❤️ A Perfect ending to a perfect story. This is what should have happened in the show also. I really loved how Raavi stood up for herself and decimated the Pandya parivar members especially Suman and Shiva. I was also happy to read that she had Mausapa’s support throughout, Raavi did the right thing by moving away for good from this toxic family and especially Shiva and Suman. It was time to regain her self respect, independence and live life for herself and find real happiness which she deserved❤️


Thank you for writing this beautiful journey of Raavi post realization of how stupid and crazy in love she had been and it was time to move on and make a better life for herself ❤️



P.S: Is it too much to ask for an epilogue of Raavi living happily ever after with her new husband and family, may be introduce them to Mami, Mama and Anita, also the unworthy Pandya parivar😆


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Posted: 3 years ago
#64

Awesome chapter. Awesome story❤❤❤

Loved it

really loved how Raavi stood up for herself and decimated the Pandya parivar members Specially susuma & shiva

Send this to choubeys so that unko kuch dhang k ideas aaye

The dailogues were amazing and so on point.I was actually imagining all this.

Show k writers ko hamare Forum k writers se kuch sikhna chahiye

Won't you introduce viraj & give glimpse of raavi ki happily married life & guilt & jealousy se bhara shiva???

Ek epilogue to bnta hai❤❤❤

Plzzzzzzzzz

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Posted: 3 years ago
#65

I havent cried after reading a fic in a long time.

I’ve read this last prt too many times to count in the last hour and every time I couldnt control my tears. I don’t know if it’s happy tears for Raavi, sad tears because I love Shivi way too much, or like Raavi, tears of peace because she finally stood up and gave back to everyone with logic and facts and no melodrama or screaming .

What a fitting end to the 2022 international women’s day ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#66

Awesome chapter. Absolutely loved how Raavi stood up for herself. I loved this story of yours where instead of staking her self respect she took a stand for herself which we hardly find be it in fanfics or in tv serials.


If you could pls add one more chapter where there is an entry of Raavi's in law's especially her husband Viraj. I really want to read that scene and also see how Pandya's regret seeing Raavi's new family. Eagerly waiting for the next part.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#67

This was just so lovely and heartbreaking at the same time. 💔

Everything that Raavi has faced in her life, everyone she cherished or wanted love from have only disapppinted her or hurt, from Mami to Suman Kaki. And the way she gave it back to them is proof of her growth, maturity and her big heart. Every allegation's rebuttal was evidence that one family almost ruined one girl. But I'm glad she finally has everything she ever dreamed of - a family, sister, brother, and a husband who loves her, trusts her, respects her. ❤️

Can we an epilogue please? One where Viraj comes to Somnath over the next few days, and Shiva & the Pandya Parivaar see Raavi-Viraj together, and Shiva regrets losing her and everything he ever did to her?!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#68

Bequtiful wnding 😍❤❤

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Posted: 3 years ago
#69

Thank you for writing this so beautifully

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Posted: 3 years ago
#70

This was cathertic.


wont ever get this in any itv shows, they will always show how sasural is the place girl lives and die, no matter how much toxic that place is. Thanks for writing and posting this.

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