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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hello beautiful people, here is an OS I wrote at 1:30 am 😂

Genuinely have no clue how it turned out, I wrote this while I was half asleep so please ignore any grammatical errors you come across

And do let me know if you liked this or not 🥰

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Posted: 3 years ago
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“Shiva main tang aagayi hoon tujhse ” she marched into the room frustratedly


“Ab kya naya tamasha karne aayi hai Raavi” he replied irritatedly


She had been making life hard for him ever since she confessed. The woman he loves, loves him back. But fate doesn’t want him to be happy.


“Tamasha? Tamasha toh tune kar rakha hai mere jazbaaton ka” she replied


“Kaunse jaazbaat? Tu jo yeh har din naye naatak karti hai woh? Maine pehle bhi bola hai. Tu saabit kar ki tera iss sab mein koi haath nahi, tab jaake humara rishta aage badega” he tried to explain


“Wah shiva Pandya wah. Mujhpe raati bhar bhi bharosa nahi hai na tumhe. Toh teekh hai, mujhe bhi koi shauk nahi hai tere peeche gid gidaane ki” she screamed louder while turning to leave


“Haan toh ja na! Kaun rok raha hai? Chali ja meri zindagi se, mukti de de mujhe!” He screamed louder


While pulling her into his arms and pecking her nose softly


“Haan toh ja rahi hoon na mein. Jab chali jaungi na, tab meri ehmiyat pata chalegi tum Saab ko” she replied louder while locking her arms behind his neck


“Chali gayi kya mami?” Shiva softly asked


“Pata nahi, itna shor sunke chali hi gayi hogi” she said while trying to look through the translucent window


While shiva slowly slides his grip to her waist, making her suck in a breath


“Shiva kya kar raha hai? Agar woh ab bhi bahar hui toh” she tried to stop him


“Arrey chipkali chod na sabko. Main tang aagaya hoon yeh roz roz ke tamashe ke saath. Mujhe apne khud ke biwi ke saath chup chupke romance karna padta hai” he whined while nuzzling her neck


“Bas kuch aur din shiva, phir sab kuch teekh hojayega.” She pulled him into a warm big hug


“Mujhe acha nahi lagta tujhpe sab ke saamne chillana. Main jaanta hoon ki tunne kuch nahi kiya, lekin Teri woh naagin behen-“


His words were cut off by her lips, those tempting rosy lips were finally sealed on his. Slowly sucking onto his lower lip she slid her hand inside his vest. Carefully leaving wet kisses along the column of his neck


“Shhh now that you’ve left me all aroused and in need, pls don’t bring up my evil sister. It’s equally hard for me shiva, Sometimes I get scared that I may lose control infront of our families” she explained while clutching his cheek


Without wasting a second he pulled her in for another desperate kiss, keeping their hands off eachother has become an hideous task ever since raavi Showed her raveena tandon side


“Shiva?! Kidhar hai tu?” Called suman


“Yaar koi chain se jeene kyun nahi deta iss ghar mein mujhe” he cribbed


“Mera cute sa kaddu, ab ja jaldi.” She said while making space between them


“Ek second” he said before unlatching the door


“Kya” she wiggled her eyebrow


“I - love - you” he pecked her lip after each syllable


“I - love - you - too” she repeated his actions

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Shivi together and planning to oust Mami amd Anita. Haaaye

One track I wished to see since the day Raavi amd Anita had the kitchen confrontation about Gaumbi, sadly writers only make Shiva plan with Bhabima and bros, leaving out Raavi. 💔😡

Haha I could so relate to this though. Not in a romantic way, but pretend fighting by screaming out of sight to get an annoying person out. 🤣

The Shivi twist and the ILUs were ❤️ Cutuu OS 👏

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Taani ❤️

Shivi a chup chupke couple ☺️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is so so cute 😍😍

Shivi doing chupke chupke romance☺️

Loved it 💖

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Chhup Chhup Ke romance supremacy has entered the chat!

Hayyyeeee ❤️

Kinna sona chhotu pyaaru saaaa ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kristmas

Shivi together and planning to oust Mami amd Anita. Haaaye

One track I wished to see since the day Raavi amd Anita had the kitchen confrontation about Gaumbi, sadly writers only make Shiva plan with Bhabima and bros, leaving out Raavi. 💔😡

Haha I could so relate to this though. Not in a romantic way, but pretend fighting by screaming out of sight to get an annoying person out. 🤣

The Shivi twist and the ILUs were ❤️ Cutuu OS 👏

Glad you liked it

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: VaishnaviG

Taani ❤️

Shivi a chup chupke couple ☺️

Yes chupe rustum 😂😂

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I’m glad you liked it

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Chhup Chhup Ke romance supremacy has entered the chat!

Hayyyeeee ❤️

Kinna sona chhotu pyaaru saaaa ❤️

I’m glad you enjoyed it

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