Bhagodi ki Beti | Pre-Leap Dhara|Chap-4 (2) updt, pg 11-03/04/22

Bhagodi ki Beti (AU)

(From the writer of MAAMI KI BEHEN KI BETI)

Index

Prologue: Page 2

Day One: Killer Kaki and Jam sandwiches: Page 3

Day Two. swear words and cute Krish: Page 5

Day Three: Dev Anand and tasty pasta: Page 8

Day Four (1) Shiva Raavi and insults- page 9

Day Four (2) Raavi Shiva and kulfi-page 11

Summary

Dhara Patel is very infamously known as 'Bhagodi ki Beti', in Somnath, ever since her mother ashamedly ran away with her lover, leaving her to her brother and an absent father. Since the age of ten, Dhara does not know what family means, because all she has for a family is her hardworking brother who she hardly sees.

But Gautam and the vanar sena are ready to gift Dhara the best 21st Birthday Gift, she could ever ask for.

A Family Stay at the Pandyas, a full family package for a week, and a wedding proposal at the end.

But will Dhara connect to the Pandyas with the entire week full of kids causing chaos, an always insulting and demanding mother, a very loud nosey relative and a salient but silent friend or call it quits before the week?

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A short story on a new take of Dhara pre leap because I absolutely love and adore my cutie Vanar Sena pre-leap and the bond GauRa have, with each other and with the kids.

This is not going to be updated daily, and I am not tagging anyone because I know for a fact that many do not like Dhara here in the forum. If there is even one person who would want to read this I'll update here, else on wattpad. Thank you

In case you need a tag, feel free to ask.

p.s. will appreciate honest reviews and opinions.

Also, no idea why I feel so nervous adding this.

Link to SHIVI FF (completed) Maami ki Behen ki Beti

To be honest, lots of people USED to love Dhara... It was only after the Danda Kaand and her non-apologies that people began disliking her.

I, for one, would love to read about the original character of Dhara, because isn't that what stories are all about? Taking what's good and making it even better😳?

PS I admit that you might not see comments from me though, because I have Uni in two weeks. 🤪

To be very honest..........

I am not interested in reading dhara......

I liked your previous story but dhara and her mahanta has already very hype and a story on it would be too much to take and specially when you will write i can't even resist reading it😅

I would like to read!! ❤️

Dhara (before the Danda Kaand) was good, and I liked her. She was a lot more fun pre-leap. 👍🏼

I love pre leap episodes and used to like Dhara before Danda kaand her character went down after that.

I would love to read your take on pre leap PS and Dhara (I love your version of Dhara in MKBKB)❤️

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

To be honest, lots of people USED to love Dhara... It was only after the Danda Kaand and her non-apologies that people began disliking her.

I, for one, would love to read about the original character of Dhara, because isn't that what stories are all about? Taking what's good and making it even better😳?

PS I admit that you might not see comments from me though, because I have Uni in two weeks. 🤪

PotterMeow: No worries, I understand and all the very best for uni, personal life>>>>

Odette: No issue bro, completely respect ya decision🤗

Vnuts and Nicky thanks for the inputs.

That reminds me, I gotta know your names and I'm sorry if I've offended anyone

Originally posted by: Gadbad_Ghotala

PotterMeow: No worries, I understand and all the very best for uni, personal life>>>>

Odette: No issue bro, completely respect ya decision🤗

Vnuts and Nicky thanks for the inputs.

That reminds me, I gotta know your names and I'm sorry if I've offended anyone

I'm Sathya... What may I call you?

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

I'm Sathya... What may I call you?

My name's Rochelle, you can call me Roch (Rosh- like Rosh gulla) 🥳

To be honest I used to love pre leap dhara and specially her bond with shiva i used to watch their scenes on repeat but post danda kaand and after that there r many tracks which jst totally ruined dhara for me also i m totally shivi biased

i still believe there is lot of potential in gaura as couple but makers totally ruined it them even as couple

But i can't resist myself to read too becoz of 2 reasons

1 i loved mkbkb dhara version

2 becoz it's ur writing

P.s shyad iss baar mere comments itne regular na ho but will surely give you feedbacks ❤

P.p.s only a suggestion if u can then pls explore dhara and raavi bond becoz both shared same fate yet different though(aacording to me)