~ Reth ~ P-1 - Jia's engagment wirh Prem

[ Guys....please note the Shubhangi Atre isn't name Kasturi but she is called Jia in my fan-fic]

[Also I know there is too many characters, but I promise that it won't get that much confusing cause it will be only focusing on Jia, Prem and Robbie and the rest are just minor cause a fan-fic needs to have villains and many more 😃]

😊 As long as Shubnahgi ends up with Karan- Im good! Lol! I like the characters you've chosen- update soon! Im loving the FF's in this forum so far!

Originally posted by: mimi0295

😊 As long as Shubnahgi ends up with Karan- Im good! Lol! I like the characters you've chosen- update soon! Im loving the FF's in this forum so far!

Thank You

Introduction is very gud. But personally, I think there are tooooooooo many characters in the FF and while reading the intro I had to check umpteen number of times as to who is related to whom😆...

I hope we wont seee sooo many characters as this FF progresses becos I might have to have a map as to who belongs to whom...... Sorry If I had offended u, I didnt mean to do it😃

Krishi

Hi Sapna so u started 😃 .And like Krishi said it is a little bit confusing coz of too many characters .But as the story progresses I think it will be OK .But why did u change Shubhangi's name to Jia any spl reason ? I think Kasturi would have been much easy to rememder SA as .And when we say Robbie Kas so cute isn't it .well as long as SA and KP r the main I don't have any problem .
Best of luck .I am waiting for the parts. 😃

Rosy

Originally posted by: knumnum

Introduction is very gud. But personally, I think there are tooooooooo many characters in the FF and while reading the intro I had to check umpteen number of times as to who is related to whom😆...

I hope we wont seee sooo many characters as this FF progresses becos I might have to have a map as to who belongs to whom...... Sorry If I had offended u, I didnt mean to do it😃

Krishi

Please don't say sorry cause you are right too many characters can create confusion, but just remember Jia will end up with Robbie our Karan Patel. Also I'll try my best not to confuse anyone.
😃

Sapna

Originally posted by: love fan

Hi Sapna so u started 😃 .And like Krishi said it is a little bit confusing coz of too many characters .But as the story progresses I think it will be OK .But why did u change Shubhangi's name to Jia any spl reason ? I think Kasturi would have been much easy to rememder SA as .And when we say Robbie Kas so cute isn't it .well as long as SA and KP r the main I don't have any problem .
Best of luck .I am waiting for the parts. 😃

Rosy

For sure Jia will end up with Robbie our Karan Patel.

😃

Sapna

Before I post the first part - please forgive me if there is any mistake and also some scenes will be a small video clip cause I thought why don't I make it a little different than other fan-fic and also "don't worry at the Jia aka Kasturi will end uo with Robbie our Karan Patel" I hope you guys have fun reading it and the fan-fic - starts of with Jia's dream.



"First part starts of with Jia's dream of her and Robbie getting married, but realty is something else she is getting engaged to Prem and her wedding with Prem will take up in three days from now."

Part - 1

"Click on the play button to view first scene between Jia and Robbie (also in the background plays Dil Ne Yah Kaha Hai Dil from Dharkan)"

[YOUTUBE]http://youtube.com/watch?v=-6UjgEEyvOM[/YOUTUBE]

Jia's wakes up by the noise of her cell-phone ringing - Jia picks up her cell-phone without looking at her caller ID.

"Jia...Please don't disconnect the phone

Jia... please listen to me once

Jia...Please 😭"

Jia hangs up the phone again Robbie calls, Jia disconnects the phone again, but the third time she picks up the phone and hears what Robbie has to say....

"Jia, I know in the past I have screwed up many times, but please give me another chance in your live because I can't live without you" Said by Robbie, who was crying on the other hand even Jia was crying because she can't live without Robbie, but she has too live without him because of what he did to her cousin Niyati, (who loved him a-lot, but Robbie played with her emotions) just to get her (meaning Jia).

"Robbie, its too late for us now cause in three days I'm getting married to Prem - My father's best friend's son, who stays with his mother. Anyways Robbie, its too late for us" Said by broken Jia

"Jia, nothing is too late; You have to make the choices in marrying Prem or not; Your parents can't make the choices for you" Said by Robbie

"Indeed its my choices in making the right decision who is prefect for me and you know I made a choice in being part of your life and look what happened by my choices so now its my parents turn to pick the best for me and they have and its not you but its Prem" Said by Jia and hangs up the phone - On the other side Robbie is shattered by Jia's decision in getting married to someone else. Even Jia was hopeless in turning out Robbie her love, but now nothing is the same because of Robbie's one mistake her entire life changed. She never knew that the man she loved would end up breaking her into pieces between her parents and him. Jia wiped her tears off and ran into the bathroom and turned on the shower and cried herself out.

[At Sabharwal Resident>

Robbie sat in his room looking at Jia's picture while his family decides to go and attended Jia's wedding, but due to Sumit's business meeting out of town. On their behalf Angad and Kripa are going to attend Jia's wedding and if Robbie wants to go then he is most welcome.

Angad decides to check on Robbie, who sounded depressed during breakfast so Angad is walking to Robbie's room...

Robbie sat in-front of his drums and starts playing them crazy and sings a sad song from one of his favorite movie.

(Guys I have to stop here cause i'm getting late for bed and plus I have to go work so I'll continue the reminding part tomorrow after work or before going bed.

Good Night)

Sapna

ooh it's was just so nice..............you must compelete an compelete..............cuz yeh dil mangeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeee..........

loveu..........aishooo😳!!!

Originally posted by: Nisha_106

👏

Nisha

Thank You

Sapna