Changes in the writing team - Page 2

Originally posted by: Winnertakesital

Is he interested in the first place? Mr. Shahi is busy with whatever is coming on Star Bharat Network.

Why did he agree for 3rd generation 😕

The production house had the means to replace Yrkkh with a new show.

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Originally posted by: Winnertakesital

Is he interested in the first place? Mr. Shahi is busy with whatever is coming on Star Bharat Network.

Why did he agree for 3rd generation 😕

The production house had the means to replace Yrkkh with a new show.

Have you seem the trps this show still gets. Star plus know yrkkh can still pull ratings if they just make sure to refresh the story here and there and adjust it. New show wouldn't guarantee that it would keep yrkkh audience and ratings.

Originally posted by: Miss-Behave

Have you seem the trps this show still gets. Star plus know yrkkh can still pull ratings if they just make sure to refresh the story here and there and adjust it. New show wouldn't guarantee that it would keep yrkkh audience and ratings.

I honestly think it's Bhavna and Garima ruining the story trying to make a Kartik out of Abhimanyu. In the early episodes, Abhimanyu was a nicely fleshed out character. Now I see him I don't understand what he is. Similarly the drastic changes in Akshara and Aarohi. All of it is just weird and sticks out like a sore thumb. The story is not organic anymore. It hasn't been for past two months at least.

I m tired of their cute scenes …it does not hold the spark for me and I absolutely bored with kaisha story ab to bas Manish se hi ummeed hai 😒 hope woh phuski Bomb na nikle 😖

Originally posted by: Winnertakesital

The downward trend started once Utkarsh took over and Saba stepped down.

The creative directors are holding the leash tightly. Saba has written the first season, it is of utmost importance that she is given a breather.

Creatives got in Saami Saami dance. It wasn't a dream though it should have been. The entire dance number was too good to be true. I mean after a heavy duty break, Abhira are dancing away without talking to each other about their future. Not realising that their families prestige has gone for a toss. In normal life when a alliance breaks life isn't easy.

The easy going attitude exhibited by Abhira is an example of poor transition by the writers.

I don't think Anisha is responsible for the fall, it all about Abhira straying away. The new writer took the course of the story in an unwanted direction.

Saba wrote BALH. It is a huge hit till date. I won't doubt her writing skills. The creative director is obsessed with her own child hood fantasies.

Why is Mr. Shahi not interfering?

We don't see credits where I am so I find information about the writers interesting. There has been a shift in the story telling and even the way the characters are coming across on screen so maybe it is the switch in writers. This could mean some interference from somewhere...or in response to trps....shame though as good story telling is being compromised. The sequel to the confession episodes was abysmal and all over the place.

I just cannot relate to the Kaisha romance so I'm sorry to say each time I see them on screen I have a good laugh. However, I understand why - the leads are being overworked and so by bringing in another couple it would give them a break. But... why not Arohi? the build up was there and we saw that she is already feeling the lack of love...slowly her icy demeanour will warm up...this is the only character the writers are bring true to! I can only guess they want to make it more believable as well as create domino effect problems for Abhira. First Kaisha, then Arohi + Neil (?)...you know if Parth hadn't been married he would have suited Arohi more but then again opposites attract🤣.

Mr Shahi is too busy producing other shows, namely with his fave Shaheer Sheikh.😆🤣

I don't know if anyone is interested but male writers actually write romance very well. Take Nicholas Sparks his books have been turned into films, John Green (the fault in our stars), Michael Ondaatje, Winston Graham and etc. Many Mills and Boon authors are male with female pseudonym.

Originally posted by: Miss-Behave

Have you seem the trps this show still gets. Star plus know yrkkh can still pull ratings if they just make sure to refresh the story here and there and adjust it. New show wouldn't guarantee that it would keep yrkkh audience and ratings.

I saw 10 episodes of the 2nd generation recently. Everything was in it's place. I realised a young girl is trying to save her orphanage in whichever way she can. Poverty shaped Naira. What a way to begin a fresh story.

The entire introduction track is impressive.

3rd generation characters do not fit the bill IMO. Half of them don't speak.I know SP has OCD about remakes and the writers did put in efforts to adapt the Bengali story as well as retain some basic vibe.

For a good 3 months the leads endured plenty of suffering. Their confession became the climax of the story.100 episodes and all done.

After trps went for a toss the writers are gearing up for separation.

Yesterday I was wondering why Abhimanyu is taking steam. I thought he is advertising some beauty product, such scenes do not add to the story. In the precap all of an sudden the leads are dressed up as Barbie and Ken.

Viewers switch off or change channels when the episode is not upto the mark.

Retention is difficult. The production house is committing blunders.

That is why I asked why a new show cannot come in place of Yrkkh.

Originally posted by: Ekahriz

I honestly think it's Bhavna and Garima ruining the story trying to make a Kartik out of Abhimanyu. In the early episodes, Abhimanyu was a nicely fleshed out character. Now I see him I don't understand what he is. Similarly the drastic changes in Akshara and Aarohi. All of it is just weird and sticks out like a sore thumb. The story is not organic anymore. It hasn't been for past two months at least.

Yes internal politics. I mentioned earlier whether the writers are heading towards a forced shutdown.

Saba has a mind and will of her own. She cannot dance according to the whims and fancies of a junior screen play writer.

Garima wants Harshad to become Mohsin Khan. She should know It is Mission Impossible.

Originally posted by: Dreamygal301

We don't see credits where I am so I find information about the writers interesting. There has been a shift in the story telling and even the way the characters are coming across on screen so maybe it is the switch in writers. This could mean some interference from somewhere...or in response to trps....shame though as good story telling is being compromised. The sequel to the confession episodes was abysmal and all over the place.

I just cannot relate to the Kaisha romance so I'm sorry to say each time I see them on screen I have a good laugh. However, I understand why - the leads are being overworked and so by bringing in another couple it would give them a break. But... why not Arohi? the build up was there and we saw that she is already feeling the lack of love...slowly her icy demeanour will warm up...this is the only character the writers are bring true to! I can only guess they want to make it more believable as well as create domino effect problems for Abhira. First Kaisha, then Arohi + Neil (?)...you know if Parth hadn't been married he would have suited Arohi more but then again opposites attract🤣.

Mr Shahi is too busy producing other shows, namely with his fave Shaheer Sheikh.😆🤣

I don't know if anyone is interested but male writers actually write romance very well. Take Nicholas Sparks his books have been turned into films, John Green (the fault in our stars), Michael Ondaatje, Winston Graham and etc. Many Mills and Boon authors are male with female pseudonym.

You mean to say Star Plus is not happy with trps and interference has come from high command.

I hope Utkarsh closes the loose ends and manages his women colleagues as well. He has a lot on his plate.

Originally posted by: Winnertakesital

You mean to say Star Plus is not happy with trps and interference has come from high command.

I hope Utkarsh closes the loose ends and manages his women colleagues as well. He has a lot on his plate.

I don't know if there is an actual interference but I have seen many posts where people claim they do. It makes sense in terms of money ie trps and often in the West it is done as well but in the form of audience reaction and writers going away, assessing the reactions to find out what works then making changes to reflect that.

Why would he need to manage his women colleagues for?😃 I am sure his women colleagues are capable just as he is. I understand the original writer of S3 was good and her vision translated well to the screen and given the quality of the story, characterisation and cinematography in those early episodes it certainly was compared to how it is now. If I have to hazard a guess, the original story was exactly how it was laid out, narrated to the PH and Channel but the recent story/changes/shifts is or was due to analysation of trps, audience response to tracks and playing to the strengths of the lead actor/actress. Occasionally we see them recalling the goals, motivations and conflicts.....a bare nod to structure.😆

Originally posted by: firewings_diya

+1 anisha track looked forced to me. I really wished if they would have focused on manaksh than bringing family i would be glad.

I really wish to see abhi working and akshu helping him in becoming something than normal drama there are so many other ways to make bonds stronger but unfortunately writer chose this. Which was the reason may be people are loosing interest.

That manksh track ended without any conclusion as abhira are totally busy is solving these lovebirds not so lovebirds problem than concentrating on something important 🙂 i would really to wish to see them focusing on social issues or concentratinv on normal things that bringing up just family issues but i am not sure if its a norm in yrkkh if yes i will just fastforward episodes till i see something good.😆

Oh definitely. I feel I am a kid being forced to swallow the greens aka Anisha/Kairav