Random meows in my head (drabbles only) 8th up pg26 15/2/2022 - Page 21

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Theek hain re! De dungi! Par pehle jo likha hai, uski comment tho de na?! 🤪

deta hoon shaam tak...thoda busy ho gaya abhi 🤪😆

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Posted: 3 years ago

Sathyaaaa🥰

Though i believe Shiva deserves the pain, it makes me sad to see him like this🤕

Raavi😍...uski tho alag hi duniyaa hein🤣...Dragon si choti si chipkali and tower🤣...HER IMAGINATION HAS ALWAYS BEEN COLORFUL😆

The ending is just keeping me hooked here Sathyaa...and will be waiting eagerly fir the next part

Loved this ♥️

You are very gifted dear🤗

Waitingggg😊

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Posted: 3 years ago

Sathya.. First of all taking time outta your schedule and updating is highly appreciable❤️

What you wrote is something many here wanted to see... And you my dear as always did a splendid and marvellous job at storytelling.🤗

Raavi remembering shiva when she doesnt remember anything and that too as villian of her story... Sad but thats what he has turned into. Shiva's worry for raavi..When raavi called him villian... The hope in shiva's eyes that she might have recognized him... Oohh... all of it was so painful...felt so baad for shiva💔Then I remembered shiva's doings.. So yeah.. Moving on🙈

I so wish raavi whenever she gains her memory back to prioritize herself over every nuisance around her. Its high time she focusses on herself.

I so wish shiva realizes his mistakes and repent hard... Now he should be the one to make raavi feel protected, loved and cared for. I hope to see him understanding where he went wrong and how miserable he and his family had made raavi. ts now his time to make himself worthy of raavi.

Btw.... Dr. Abhishek... Uhmm uhmm... Young doctor... Ohky we'll keep in mind😆

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Posted: 3 years ago

Oh wow Sathya! I loved this! Although I do not like the memory loss trope.. but seeing ShiVi through your lens has always been amazing! I love the fact that even though Raavi lost her memory, she still dreams of him.. without knowing its him! I love how the POV shifted from Shiva's to Raavi's! I loved the glimpses of fiery Raavi and worried Shiva! Waiting egarly for part 2!!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: navk

Omg its so amazing

Loved it 😘😘😘

Will be waiting for 2nd part

Glad you loved it! Hopefully it'll be here soon.... 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: VNuts

Loved, loved, loved your update!! ❤️

Raavi's memory loss was one of my first khayaali pulaos.

Raavi being her chirpy self with no pain to remember. I hope Shiva really suffers!! I hope he realises how he's painted himself as the villain in her life through his actions.

When Raavi gets her memory back, I want her to avoid Shiva & make him suffer even more. 👍🏼

Also, will Dr. Abhishek play any more of a role to Raavi?!

Looking forward to the next one!!

Vandana❤️! Glad you loved it! Shiva will suffer, but i think it's not in the way you think he will😆. So I'll look forward to seeing what you think of it whenever I write and put it up😳.

As for Dr Abhishek, he will not be a third angle character, but being one of the only people Raavi now knows, he might make an appearance or two. Or maybe not. I guess you'll just have to wait until I make my mind up about it. 🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Miss.M

Sathya... How did it finish so quick?? Ive read it and I'm going to read it again soon.


I love how you've shown Shiva's worry for her, the internal panic, the fear.. It's something we've all been through and so raw I want to gather him in a hug and tell him it'll be okay. The palpable relief when he realises that he might just have found her and his actions of not watching her.


Then you, have an almost detached Raavi, one who is going through the motions l, not aware that something is missing in her life... And calling Shiva the dark knight who makes her a chipkali from a dragon (i couldn't help but let out a small chuckle despite the gravity of the situation). The hope he has when she says those familiar words to him... My poor baby.


I hope you continue soonest. In the meantime I'm adding this to my bookmarks to re read over and over ❤️❤️

Min🤗! I'm glad you loved it! The fear of losing a near and dear one can be a very transforming experience, I think. Those moments of searching and not being sure of finding teach us our mistakes in a way nothing else ever will. It lets us see our wrongs without the human impulse to be biased towards oneself.

I'm glad you could chuckle in between, because that was the purpose of the whole thing. That's what Raavi DOES, isn't it really? Make people laugh through their troubles😳, hence why Shiva is amused at her rant instead of being too worried about things having possibly gone back to the beginning. Before their marriage and love and all of that.

PS Another re read piece? I'm honored!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Paru95

Sathyaaaa🥰

Though i believe Shiva deserves the pain, it makes me sad to see him like this🤕

Raavi😍...uski tho alag hi duniyaa hein🤣...Dragon si choti si chipkali and tower🤣...HER IMAGINATION HAS ALWAYS BEEN COLORFUL😆

The ending is just keeping me hooked here Sathyaa...and will be waiting eagerly fir the next part

Loved this ♥️

You are very gifted dear🤗

Waitingggg😊

Paru🤗! Thank you for the compliments❤️! And I'm considering you feeling bad for Shiva among them...🤣😳 Raavi's imagination is a very colorful thing, something that perhaps only children will truly understand. In some ways, she's old beyond her years, and in others, too young to survive this harsh world...

I'll be trying to see about that next part soon, although the studying is a priority for now. 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago

Phew! Unressed FINALLY! 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: VaishnaviG

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Position chala gaya mera 😭

Koi nahi mera tho hai naaaa....apan dono me se hona chahiye kisika bas aur kyaaa 🤗❤️

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