Random meows in my head (drabbles only) 8th up pg26 15/2/2022 - Page 20

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Posted: 3 years ago

I read it and I love the idea but me is little sick toh if I don't make sense, you know why.


Its an amazing AU concept, I'd love to see how it goes, Raavi completely forgetting who he is, and he's the sapno ka villain, I can't imagine Shiva kitna toot jaayega ye sunke. Oof.


Also please get her memory back in the second part, it would be so beautiful and amazing to see Shiva finally see her remember him as he is, the emotional turmoil he'll go through oof.


Please don't make her start from scratch w him mera ittu sa dil toot jaayega phir mai kaha se motivation laau to write my chapters 😭😂


Jk whatever you planned will be amazing, but also memory back laao pls ☺️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Sathya, I loved this! ❤️Wish it had happened after the trafficking kaand in the show.
Raavi thinks Shiva is the villain in her dreams, rightly so. Probably whatever humiliation and abuse she had to endure for the past several months has indeed subconsciously caused her to think that way.

I want Shiva to understand what he has done to her and how she became like this. Though the accident was a reason, she has been experiencing trauma much before that. Let this be a lesson for Shiva.

If at all you plan to write a second part, if she gets her memory back, I still want a distant Raavi from Shiva until he wholeheartedly apologizes and need to repent for his actions from the past and the present.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Ye kya natak hai?


Aaddha part kyun diya hai?


Main ro doongi ab 😡😭😭😭


Mujhe chahiye iska dusra theek hai naaa

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Posted: 3 years ago

Omg its so amazing

Loved it 😘😘😘

Will be waiting for 2nd part

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Posted: 3 years ago

Res

Position chala gaya mera 😭

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Posted: 3 years ago

Loved, loved, loved your update!! ❤️

Raavi's memory loss was one of my first khayaali pulaos.

Raavi being her chirpy self with no pain to remember. I hope Shiva really suffers!! I hope he realises how he's painted himself as the villain in her life through his actions.

When Raavi gets her memory back, I want her to avoid Shiva & make him suffer even more. 👍🏼

Also, will Dr. Abhishek play any more of a role to Raavi?!

Looking forward to the next one!!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Sathya... How did it finish so quick?? Ive read it and I'm going to read it again soon.


I love how you've shown Shiva's worry for her, the internal panic, the fear.. It's something we've all been through and so raw I want to gather him in a hug and tell him it'll be okay. The palpable relief when he realises that he might just have found her and his actions of not watching her.


Then you, have an almost detached Raavi, one who is going through the motions l, not aware that something is missing in her life... And calling Shiva the dark knight who makes her a chipkali from a dragon (i couldn't help but let out a small chuckle despite the gravity of the situation). The hope he has when she says those familiar words to him... My poor baby.


I hope you continue soonest. In the meantime I'm adding this to my bookmarks to re read over and over ❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Ye kya natak hai?


Aaddha part kyun diya hai?


Main ro doongi ab 😡😭😭😭


Mujhe chahiye iska dusra theek hai naaa

Theek hain re! De dungi! Par pehle jo likha hai, uski comment tho de na?! 🤪

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: mpks1

Sathya, I loved this! ❤️Wish it had happened after the trafficking kaand in the show.
Raavi thinks Shiva is the villain in her dreams, rightly so. Probably whatever humiliation and abuse she had to endure for the past several months has indeed subconsciously caused her to think that way.

I want Shiva to understand what he has done to her and how she became like this. Though the accident was a reason, she has been experiencing trauma much before that. Let this be a lesson for Shiva.

If at all you plan to write a second part, if she gets her memory back, I still want a distant Raavi from Shiva until he wholeheartedly apologizes and need to repent for his actions from the past and the present.

Akka🤗! I think, when our loved ones make mistakes, we tend to ignore them, to justify them even if they are not worthy of it. And the memory loss was something that would've given a way to overcome that. The mental trauma and stressful life aside, Raavi has actively LET the Pandyas step all over her despite her fairly good moral compass, you know?

But a Raavi who still has the moral compass, but not the memories that made her give them that leeway? I think that's what the next part will be about.

PS The distant Raavi is an idea you have now firmly put in my head. It will be added in to the vague plot I had already. Has been, I mean. 😃

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: sillysatchel

I read it and I love the idea but me is little sick toh if I don't make sense, you know why.


Its an amazing AU concept, I'd love to see how it goes, Raavi completely forgetting who he is, and he's the sapno ka villain, I can't imagine Shiva kitna toot jaayega ye sunke. Oof.


Also please get her memory back in the second part, it would be so beautiful and amazing to see Shiva finally see her remember him as he is, the emotional turmoil he'll go through oof.


Please don't make her start from scratch w him mera ittu sa dil toot jaayega phir mai kaha se motivation laau to write my chapters 😭😂


Jk whatever you planned will be amazing, but also memory back laao pls ☺️

Megs🤗! You're sick🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺? Take good care of yourself, okay?

This Shiva isn't going to break down. This Shiva is going to be a man of action is all I'll say. He's had enough breakdown moments and monologues on his pain in the show, in my opinion atleast. This Shiva will learn to DO the right thing, not just wonder about it, then ignore it🤪.

Also, Raavi won't be starting from scratch, nope. She might not remember him and only know him as the villain of her dreams, but she already has strong feelings about him. Currently anger, par aage jaake kisse bata kya aayega😆?

Memory wapas aayega ki nahin, only the next update will tell you, but my exam timetable just came out, and if I go on gaayab mode, you know what happened to me.... 🤣(Starts March 15th)

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