Shivi TS 18+|| Kuch Iss Tarah || completed (Part 2 on pg 4) - Page 4

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hands down the best ShiVi story I have read in weeks. I an falling short of words to describe how much I liked this story. It had everything I love about ShiVi ... the cutesy, the angsty, the fiery and the connection that can only be explained by the word soulmate. I loved how Shiva was so consumed by Raavi's thoughts ... he was reduced to a flustered teenager. That is exactly the Shiva in my head would behave.


The way he played with her dupattaaa 😒❤️

That was my favourite part ❤️


Loved loved loved LOVED reading this Mandira. I cannot wait for your next story ☺️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Finally! Phew! 😆Gedheda realized what he was going to miss out on.😆 Jealous Shiva is cute! 😆 Raavi knew how to make him confess and the fact he couldn’t see her with that Rahul, made it all the more easy for her 😆

Their secret meetings after confession😍 Shiva doesn’t have to run away from her anymore. As for Raavi, she became clear right after their first hug, bandhi toh tez hain 😆

Glad they finally found each other❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: VNuts

Loved, loved, loved it!! ☺️

Raavi acknowledging her feelings & Shiva being clueless.. Aww!! ❤️

Is there going to be third part soon, where the families find out?!


Edit: Sorry. Just saw the completed!! 😆


I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Clueless Shiva is fun to write as well haha

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Posted: 3 years ago
#34

Hayeeeee!This is so pyaara😭💗

This story is my fav of Pre-wedding shivi from now onwarda✨❤️

You wrote so beautifully🌸

Waiting for your more stories!Write soon🤌🏻💖

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Posted: 3 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: barkhaa_tpm

Hands down the best ShiVi story I have read in weeks. I an falling short of words to describe how much I liked this story. It had everything I love about ShiVi ... the cutesy, the angsty, the fiery and the connection that can only be explained by the word soulmate. I loved how Shiva was so consumed by Raavi's thoughts ... he was reduced to a flustered teenager. That is exactly the Shiva in my head would behave.


The way he played with her dupattaaa 😒❤️

That was my favourite part ❤️


Loved loved loved LOVED reading this Mandira. I cannot wait for your next story ☺️❤️


Thank you!! I'm so glad that you liked this version of Shivi 😊 hehe I'm so happy that you noticed the dupatta scene! I added that scene specifically to highlight Shiva's child-like innocence that he often hides with a hard exterior. Get ready for my next pre-wedding Shivi story! I'm already working on it 😉

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Posted: 3 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: mpks1

Finally! Phew! 😆Gedheda realized what he was going to miss out on.😆 Jealous Shiva is cute! 😆 Raavi knew how to make him confess and the fact he couldn’t see her with that Rahul, made it all the more easy for her 😆

Their secret meetings after confession😍 Shiva doesn’t have to run away from her anymore. As for Raavi, she became clear right after their first hug, bandhi toh tez hain 😆

Glad they finally found each other❤️


Thanks for reading this! Glad you enjoyed Raavi being bold 😉

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Posted: 3 years ago
#37

🥰💕Super Lovely, both of the are just adorable 💕💕💕

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shineee

Hayeeeee!This is so pyaara😭💗

This story is my fav of Pre-wedding shivi from now onwarda✨❤️

You wrote so beautifully🌸

Waiting for your more stories!Write soon🤌🏻💖


Thank you for your beautiful comment! Comments like this feel so rewarding 😊 I've already started writing my new shivi story so watch out for that! (hint: its a pre-wedding story 😉)

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Luvs_SanIsh

🥰💕Super Lovely, both of the are just adorable 💕💕💕


Thank you for reading ❤️❤️❤️❤️


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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: mandira2


Thank you!! I'm so glad that you liked this version of Shivi 😊 hehe I'm so happy that you noticed the dupatta scene! I added that scene specifically to highlight Shiva's child-like innocence that he often hides with a hard exterior. Get ready for my next pre-wedding Shivi story! I'm already working on it 😉


I SERIOUSLY cannot wait .. jaldi update na 😒

I check IF almost every hour just to see if you've posted

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