AbhiRa FF - Hamdard - Jo dard de wahi hamdard bhi bane - Ch 1 pg 3

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Hamdard

“Na koi Hamdard tha, Na hi koi dard tha..

Phir ek hamdard mila, Usi se sara dard mila!!!”

-Unknown (taken from google)

Prologue

A moment in time alters your whole life changing the roads ahead.”

This was true but had you said this to them two months ago they wouldn’t have believed. One moment and everything changed upside down for Akshara and Abhimanyu. Their destinations were different, and their paths would never cross. This is a story about two different people living in different corners of the world who are brought together by fate. People who are complete strangers are tied in tangled knot which becomes near impossible to be untangled. There is hate, there is revenge and then there is love.

“At that exact moment…. Every single thing in my life changed forever.” Akshara thought to herself. Sitting in a corner of the room, hugging her knees tight and burying her face in between them she was weeping profusely. The room looked nothing less than a battlefield, indeed a battle between two beautiful souls, a battle within themselves. The room represented their inner turmoil. The vase which once enhanced the beauty of that room was crushed to pieces representing the broken pieces of her heart. The cracked mirror on the wall reminded her that things once broken can never be mended likewise words once said cannot be taken back. The memories of the last two months haunted her.She had no answers to the thousands of questions that will be kept in front of her by her family. Her family will bear the brunt of all her mistakes. Hailing from a small-town middle-class society, her family would be put down when the news of her divorce will spread. She hated him from the bottom of her heart. “I hate you Abhimanyu Birla” she screamed one last time before leaving Birla Mansion.

On the other hand, was Abhimanyu staring into the dark sky. It was a no-moon day and the entire sky seemed darker than before for him. He had pushed away the person who brought a ray of light in his otherwise dark life. He had been very rude to her. Living in times where even Animals are treated like family members, he did not even treat her like a living being. He had always tried to ignore her existence. And he did this all to only stay away from her because he had fallen for her long back. He did not want to bring her into his colorless life. He wanted her to stay away from all the hate and revenge in his life. She was someone who was beyond being good and he is someone who would not even be looked upon if his reality was known. He had always hidden himself in the façade of being THE ABHIMANYU BIRLA. His world was a small one and it was confined only to one person. The fear of losing loved ones has always refrained him from loving anyone.

What life has in store for them? How they will be united? How are they going to be each other’s Hamdard?

“Kyun ki tu mera Hamdard hai

Suhana har safar hai”

Will these lines turn reality for Abhimanyu and Akshara? Leaving this song here for you guys to humm….


All your comments and reviews are most welcome. Chappal bhi manjoor hai!!!!😆


Love,

Ashu


P.S - Sorry had to post it earlier but forgot, the story outline is adaptive (I am not willing to disclose the source name). The writing, creativity and developing the outline is purely my own thoughts.


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Index


Prologue - page 1

Chapter 1 - Page 3


Some more tags who would like to read

Edited by Khayali_pulao - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Omg Ashu Yay!!!

Reserved!


Edited!


Ashu this is so great! Why did u not post it earlier? It would have saved me from writing Khalish! What happened? Why is he so mean to her? But can Abhimnayu really be mean to her without hurting himself in the process?


They are going to be each other's Hamdard. A journey where they will heal each other!


I can't wait! I want more and I want it now!


You are so good Ashu! The backdrop and the darkness of the story is amazing. Left me wanting for more!


Love,


Blues!

Edited by Eternized_Blues - 3 years ago
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Res!!


Edited!

Hi, Ashu!

Thank you for tagging me :')

I keep visiting the forum looking for stories, and I'm sooo glad you started one! The prologue has my mind buzzing.

A married, and yet unhappy AbhiRa, oh the story is gonna be so amazing. Can't wait to read what you have in store for us!


Abhimanyu pushing Akshara away, I never thought I'd live to see that day xD

Hella excited, and I hope you update the first part sooon!!


Love,

Avni

Edited by sheet_leher - 3 years ago
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Sorry Tina forgot to tag you.

Guys please tag someone whom you think will be interested in reading FFs

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Originally posted by: Eternized_Blues

Omg Ashu Yay!!!

Reserved!


Edited!


Ashu this is so great! Why did u not post it earlier? It would have saved me from writing Khalish! What happened? Why is he so mean to her? But can Abhimnayu really be mean to her without hurting himself in the process?


They are going to be each other's Hamdard. A journey where they will heal each other!


I can't wait! I want more and I want it now!


You are so good Ashu! The backdrop and the darkness of the story is amazing. Left me wanting for more!


Love,


Blues!

Amnu!!!! Love you 🤗

Thank you for such encouraging words.

I am happy that I posted it after you or else we wouldn’t have got a master piece like Khalish.

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Originally posted by: sheet_leher

Res!!


Edited!

Hi, Ashu!

Thank you for tagging me :')

I keep visiting the forum looking for stories, and I'm sooo glad you started one! The prologue has my mind buzzing.

A married, and yet unhappy AbhiRa, oh the story is gonna be so amazing. Can't wait to read what you have in store for us!


Abhimanyu pushing Akshara away, I never thought I'd live to see that day xD

Hella excited, and I hope you update the first part sooon!!


Love,

Avni

Avni!!!!

Thank you reading through it.

I know it’s kind of gonna be something really out of the normal and trust me this is the first time I am trying something dark and on the negative side. My hero is a negative one with all flaws but still he is the protagonist 😆.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is too good... Abhimanyu hurting his Akshara is something not possible, so there must b a big reason.. Waiting for the story to unfold

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Originally posted by: Khayali_pulao

Amnu!!!! Love you 🤗

Thank you for such encouraging words.

I am happy that I posted it after you or else we wouldn’t have got a master piece like Khalish.

Now update Phast Phast!

Love you 😘

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Nice prologue.

Waiting for update

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