Originally posted by: Anjureads
Padh liya Nikki saare parts.. you have made a brave attempt and yes its not vulgar, its more dealing with their emotions and how they are unable to control it... achha likha hai. Jitne details daala that itself gives the feels of their passion, especially since they stayed away from each other for some time. Waise I too dont read 18+ posts though I am well above that age. Mujhe comedy zyada pasand hai... so loved the ending to your storyline.... starting part jitna seriously start kiya usko balance kardiya end mein 😆