Arylie FF: Full circle, Chapter 21, note updated on Pg 94 - Page 37

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Posted: 3 years ago

Oh my my....what did I just read ? Because I feel like I'm floating in the damn air. I swear Aryan Singh Rathore's dark controlling side does something to me...

So jealous Imlie right now

The dark dominance and the sweet submission, God was it a fineee piece of work.

I finally understand what you guys mean by reading in one breath, because that's what you just did !!!! Ahhh..I'm freaking out.

You should definitely write an SS , just 18+ things

Edited by Potterhead3009 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

The long awaited confrontation! The tension in the air of the library was written in such a way that it made me feel like a spectator sitting in the room!


Finally the truth is out and the feelings spoken about. Loved that you addressed the fact about ASR didn't use Imlie as part of the revenge.


Feeling the raw emotions Aryan was going through was really well written and described.


🥵🥵 Oh the intimacy that followed. The need to let out the "frustration" that had been bottled up over the years and let out his "feelings" was well written!😶‍🌫️😶‍🌫️



Amazing as always!

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Posted: 3 years ago

The confrontation u potrayed between the 3 of them is nice.....Dark side of Aryan... 😈......Imlie's jealousy.. .... Love it yaar....Awesome ... Amazingly written... 😊 ... Update soon.. Waiting for nxt part.. 😊

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Posted: 3 years ago

Oh my God!! What was it M!! I read both the versions and damn the unedited version was raw and Aryan literally gave me Mr. Grey vibes! The alpha male energy was oozing out of Aryan today!! That confrontation between him and Aditya was perfect!! That show of affection infront Aditya was an paisavasool scene😅!! Aryan's dark side is alluring !! Our Imlie!! She is truly Mrs. Rathore. Loved it M!! You really should write 18+ SS.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Waaooo👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏👏

You are really strong with your pen!❤️✨

The rhythms in your stories are soo complex!😍

ASR...this man is one of his own kind...sooo smouldering!!!..No wonder he's a fictional character!🥺

"He set me free" this dialogue is PERFECT!

The unbreakable trust they have was portrayed fantabulously!!

Honestly...I was smiling throughout! And in the end...why did it stop! Please continue! I want to know what happens ahead!

Also I loved the how the friendship between Adi and Imlie was portrayed!...out from all the toxicity and drama!

U made my day!🤗

Aghh! I could write a million things more! But sadly I am short of words here!

So ending it here!

Keep writing!

😇❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

What happen guys all the writer's of arylie's are in full mood today everybody is narrowing such wonderful freaking hot pieces 🥵🥵.

I must say this one masterpiece Ufffff Uffff Ufffff🤒🤒🤒

Iam Not getting what to do to divert my mood this is heard to handle.

Keeping going

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Posted: 3 years ago

my goodness.. i love the protected version of this post..

please do continue that and please do tag me once you do it.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Chanchal_tvd

Waaooo👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏👏

You are really strong with your pen!❤️✨

The rhythms in your stories are soo complex!😍

ASR...this man is one of his own kind...sooo smouldering!!!..No wonder he's a fictional character!🥺

"He set me free" this dialogue is PERFECT!

The unbreakable trust they have was portrayed fantabulously!!

Honestly...I was smiling throughout! And in the end...why did it stop! Please continue! I want to know what happens ahead!

Also I loved the how the friendship between Adi and Imlie was portrayed!...out from all the toxicity and drama!

U made my day!🤗

Aghh! I could write a million things more! But sadly I am short of words here!

So ending it here!

Keep writing!

😇❤️


Chanchu, what do you mean why did I stop? Which version did you read gurrrl!? If you read the blog version and wanted more…..kuch toh imagination ke liye rakh. Sab spoon feed karoon kya? 🤪🤪

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: mltr16


Chanchu, what do you mean why did I stop? Which version did you read gurrrl!? If you read the blog version and wanted more…..kuch toh imagination ke liye rakh. Sab spoon feed karoon kya? 🤪🤪

Which version?😂 Ik u know😈

Thats the thing I cant imagine...

Only imagination I get nowadays is from your writings!

As I've stated this earlier too!...imagination ke naam pe mere dimaag me stopping potential...photocurrent...yeh sab aa jata hai😂😂..

Then my mind is like "Abhi Chemistry padh le!Aryliee ki chemistry ke baare me baad me soch lena"

Ik it kinda sucks..😵


To cut the long story short, your writings are stressbusters....

Ha! Bye noww

Edited by Chanchal_tvd - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

I can't believe I'm doing this but this is for Adi of full circle (chapter 11)


https://open.spotify.com/track/74vs7PD7iG2GnWUGnb8Yuq?si=z6GHaPmGRh6j6DG4OUXAUQ&utm_source=copy-link

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