When they knew (drabble series)(3rd pg13 27/4/22) - Page 6

Originally posted by: VaishnaviG

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Loved it Sathya,very well written.❤️

Also even I see Suman as a Gary charcter also believe that she can have a very good bond with Raavi also both of them know SHIVA in and out also both women matter so much to Shiva.Also the difference between them(Suman and Raavi ) and Dhara is Shiva loves them a lot in former case but in latter case instead of love their is more respect.Like if somebody has done so much for me I would respect that person a lot and also type of agree to the person’s every decision that is out of respect and thought that they would be making the decision thinking from long term perspective also wouldn’t oppose easily but the person I love a lot rather than respecting him or her I wouldn’t agree to that person unless that point makes sense to me and also I agree it genuinely, if it doesn’t I would fight with them and oppose them.

Choti❤️! Glad you loved it!

And I completely understand your viewpoint as well... There's a sense of responsibility when it comes to Dhara, isn't there? A sense of anything I do will not be enough repayment, that brings in a certain formality that isn't present in either of the other 2 relationships. The first time I realised this was back during the Kamra kaand, I think, when the women all realise that the 3 brothers are going to themselves be the mazdoors, and when Suman teases them as they're taking things upwards, Shiva says "Kya Maa? Tu bhi na!". And it's such a difference from the careful Aap that's used for Dhara....

Also, another beautiful point I think is this one. You only fight where you feel you have the right to. That haq. Which Shiva didn't feel he has with Dhara, proved by his dialogue after saving her jewels from the conman in the markets that day.

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

You know the weirdest part? I probably didn't put half the thought into this one that you did. Because I kind of figured out how I wanted Suman to find out, but it was a different scene. Where Krish says something insensitive without realising it to Raavi and then Shiva gets very protective with Raavi calming him down. And Suman catches all of this.

But then I started writing today and it kind of morphed into this super fluffy drabble. And for once, it was actually as short as drabbles are supposed to be, I think... 😆The next one, Periods wala? That's gonna have 2 scenes though, for sure. 😳

I'm glad you loved it so much, and I just wanted Suman to see how ALIVE Raavi made Shiva, you know? And I really, really, really wanted Krish to TRY to keep the secret once, even from his mother. Glad you loved it!

PS I think I've found a place to ghusaofy your alone time Shiva's head in Raavi's lap, I have. Buuuuuut, we stuck in Spy Kids 4 at the moment.

I laughed so hard on the first line. No shit. 🤣

Not my overthinking ass getting hidden meanings everywhere from stuff that's not even there at all. lol.

Okayyyy Write the other thought as an OS then. Hum padh lenge humko dikkat hi nhi hai koi.

Likhiye aap.

Make it AS LONG AS YOU want babyyyy. Imma here. Will Read it super sonic slow because that's what I do lol. 🤪

Sathya!!

I have been refraining from commenting on all the os/drabbles/ffs that everyone has been writing,, instead just reacting since i tend to get sucked into re reading everything, but I cannot resist commenting on here... These are so cute!!! I really like this version of Shiva and Raavi... Not only that I love how Krish is the first to find out.. So typical and ever the secret keeper.

Also the way Suman finds out it amazing. I would love to have seen this Suman on screen (she was somewhat there right after the marriage track). Overall this left me wanting more which I always do with your writing... Hope you update soonest 😍😍😍.

This is another beautiful piece by you Sathya.

Pre marriage shivi are love.

And as usual Krish finding out.i always thought Krish would have a significant role in shivi's story. The way he was a silent spectator in some of their moments.glad you wrote about it.you have watched the nuances of the characters perfectly here.

I loved how you explored Suman's character. I felt she had a lot of depth and layers. But the one particular track spoiled it all.thank you for giving us a glimpse of suman whose laadla is shiva and who is fond of raavi ❤️

Originally posted by: Kfof

Lovedd itt ❤️

Thank you Kshama! ❤️

Sooo serene♥️soooooo BEAUTIFUL❤️

Iam soo glad you resumed this series😍

Loved this Suman😳

Was already in love with this ShiVi..par ab thoda aur hogayi

So cute, Krish and Shivi bonding, chilling together

Originally posted by: Ocean_breeze

Sathyaaa!!!!!

I was smiling ear to ear throughout , I couldn't put my phone down , got busy in rooting for shivii itna cuteeeeesssyyyy it was.

Sooo manyyy Awwwwwdorable moments

Shiva laughing khulke with raavi... All hearts❤️

Shiva laying his head on raavi's lap awwiieee

Raavi's fingers through his hair again awwieee

Shiva instructing krish to call raavi bhabhii

Shiva being suman dil ka tukda is always maintained but suman being fond of raavi is what gives pure bliss feeling😆

There was something soo serene with the whole scene that it had left me wanting for more🙈🙈

Oh how much I love krish here... Just like initial krish vibes... Always by shivi's side❤️...and always ready to blurt secrets🤣

Loved it soooo much❤️❤️

Nehaaaa🤗!!! I'm glad you loved the whole thing❤️! For a while right after the wedding, they did show Suman being fond of Raavi. She had a special study spot of sorts for Shivi back then, even in the immediate aftermath of the Yatra Kaand, she said both of them had made mistakes. That Raavi shouldn't have slapped Shiva, but that he had been completely out of line as well. It was only after the divorce papers were signed that she became this ultra regressive, nearly unrecognisable version of herself...

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Nehaaaa🤗!!! I'm glad you loved the whole thing❤️! For a while right after the wedding, they did show Suman being fond of Raavi. She had a special study spot of sorts for Shivi back then, even in the immediate aftermath of the Yatra Kaand, she said both of them had made mistakes. That Raavi shouldn't have slapped Shiva, but that he had been completely out of line as well. It was only after the divorce papers were signed that she became this ultra regressive, nearly unrecognisable version of herself...

Yeah just after the wedding how she told shiva to take care of raavi

How beautifully their eqaution would have evolved but then writers happened. 🤓

Koi na we have forum writers for beautiful stories❤️

Originally posted by: VNuts

Absolutely loved both parts!!

Like you said, Suman-Raavi ka rishta would have been wonderful to see, like the initial days, but sigh.

Aur likhna please.

Glad you loved both parts of it❤️! And I definitely have more in the works... 😆

PS What may I call you?