Shaq? - ShiVi Drabble (Bonus Part Updated)

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hello beautiful people, this drabble is a result of my lack of interest in class🤣

Don't know how it really turned out but i hope you guys like it

PS: Have not proofread so please ignore any grammatical errors incase you come across them


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Shiva carried Raavi in his arms and brought her inside the house


“Arrey raavi, isse kya hogaya hai?” dhara came shouting


“Shiva, raavi ko kya hua hai?” asked an equally tensed gaumbi


“Behosh hogayi hai gaumbi. Woh log pata nahi raavi ke saath kya kar rahe the” shiva said while putting her on the cot in the aangan


“Hayye bhagwaan. Meri bachi ko surakshit rakhne ke liye apka lakh lakh shukriya” dhara said again


“Koi bachi nahi hai yeh. Usne apne asli rang aaj dikha hi diya” said suman who was a silent spectator until now


“Maa yeh tu kya keh rahi hai?” gaumbi intruded


“Tunne dekha na usne hospital mein kya kiya? Uss kagdi ne hi toh iski parvarish ki. Isska asli rang aaj hum sab ke saamne aa hi gaya” she spat more of her venom


“Haan maa, Iss chipkali ne aaj hadd paar kar di. Maine yeh kabhi nahi socha tha ki woh itni gir jayegi” shiva added while turning the other way round


“Yeh kya bakwaas kar raha hai tu shiva? Woh sab chodo pehle doctor ko toh bulau. Raavi ki tabiyat teekh nahi lag rahi” gaumbi suggested as he was the only sensible soul in the room


Raavi gains consciousness after a few minutes


“Shiva-” she mumbled


“Raavi tu teekh hai na bache” asked gaumbi while caressing her hair


“Ab jab iski aur humari dono ki ankh khul gayi hai toh mera faisla yeh hai ki yeh markundigay mere ghar mein nahi rahegi. “ suman declared


“Maa lekin-” dhara tried to reason


“Bas! Maine keh diya na, yeh iss ghar mein nahi rahegi matlab nahi rahegi” suman stated while pointing at raavi


“Nahi maa, yeh galat hai” spoke the mahan dhara again


“Tu mujhe batayegi ki galat aur sahi kya hai huh? Chup chap apne kamre mein jao sab. Aur shiva tu isse chod ke aa uss naagin ke ghar” suman said before flying away in her wheelchair


Raavi packs all her belongings and steps out of their room after having a final look at it.

Taking slow yet steady steps, she walks out of Pandya Niwas


“Ayy chudail, saaman bandne mein kitna samhe lagta hai” he spoke irritated again


Leaving the suitcase near his leg she starts walking towards her house


“Ayy mami ki behen ki beti, main kya tera naukar hoon jo tere bags uthake aaunga” he screamed while effortlessly lifting her suitcase and following her


The 2 minute walk till Jagat’s house was silent. Raavi hasn't uttered a word since the time she was brought home.


“Thank you” she said as she took her suitcase from him


“Ruk” shiva quickly said before placing the suitcase on the floor


Swiftly pulling her arm towards him and gathering her in a warm hug


“I love you ” he mumbled while kissing her forehead


"Shiva koi dekh lega" she tried to move away from him


"Nahi dekha ga koi." he mumbled before tightening his hold on her


“Bas kuch din ki baat hai shiva. Jab tak hume Anita di ka plan pata nahi chal jata hume yeh natak karta rehna hoga” she softly said while taking his warmth


“Hmm” he sighed in response


"Shiva chod. agar kisine dekh liye toh humara aur maa ka plan pura fail hojayega" she said while slightly getting out of his hold


“Raat ko khidki khulla rakh. Main aunga” he added while kissing her temple again while turning to leave


"oi bhootnaat rukh" she shouted quickly


"i love you too" she added as quickly as she pecked his cheek and ran inside

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Special tag for meri Ritu jaan

I know main bohot dino se bol rahi thi ki main update karungi lekin kuch nahi aaya

I hope this keeps you entertained for a while 🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Tagging the constants

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Beautiful😘🥰😍

Noodles okease do continue it want yo see more partners in crime ShiVi......

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Loved it ❤️

I love you bol diya lekin show mein toh koi plan nahi hai 😒

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Lovely❤️❤️😍

Shivi teaming together bass FFs mein hi milega

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Posted: 3 years ago
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OH MY GOD THANK YOU


I was so scared, ye kya kar diya shiva ne, but then haaasshhhh❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: hapakalanoodles

Special tag for meri Ritu jaan

I know main bohot dino se bol rahi thi ki main update karungi lekin kuch nahi aaya

I hope this keeps you entertained for a while 🤣

Areee he he 🤣

Haan like 1 ghante tk... I'll be okayyy 🤪

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Lovely!! ❤❤

Loved it 😍

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Kasshhh!!!! Kassshhh aise hothaaa😭

Just loved it❤️

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