OS : Love's not a competition [Santa Prompts Entry]

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Dialogue Dynamos

Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chir-Cute

Felt like I was reading a very beautiful drama in the fluff genre. It was absolutely sweet and beautiful, Neha. While I was reading it, the scenes and the emotions were unfolding in my head like moving pictures. Friendship and love are both so dear, and to find both in one person is extra special and rare. Cassie and Amethys are goals =)

🥺🥺🥺 thank you soo much dear 🥰 IKR!! This is my favourite trope after enemies to lovers 😂😂

Falling in love with your bestie is the best thing I believe!

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Dialogue Dynamos

Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bee222

This was such a difficult prompt but you incorporated it so well! Dripping sweet 😍 Love it Neha xx

Thank you bee!! I didn't find it much difficult cuz been there done that, let's see if we actually happen to meet again tho. ❤️❤️❤️ Tight hugs 🤗


Originally posted by: Bee222

Whoa, story of your life then? 🥺 All the best!! ❤️

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Halfway there... Let's hope things go well x years later. ❤️❤️

It's more inspired by the feelings than the actual setting😆 But yeah, the dialogue prompt did help.

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Dialogue Dynamos

Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: BrhannadaArmour

Your story is delightful! You've kept the emotions light and natural, perfect fluff. Two proofreading comments: "unless I'm not sure" should have been "unless I'm sure" and "Than why" should have been "Then why." The story moves quickly because you show what the characters feel through dialogue, rather than telling the reader. That maintained my interest from beginning to end.

Thank you for pointing out the errors, rectified them. Thank you for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! ❤️🥺🥺

A bit of lazy writing actually 😆 I feel that saying how you're feeling is a difficult thing to do for most people but it is a good way to share than just waiting for others to observe. Since I'm not blessed with people who will notice something is wrong, I prefer telling them 🤣

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Dialogue Dynamos

Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Golden_Ginni

Beautiful OS Neha ... Love between was explained beautifully ... Keep writing 📝✍️


Thank you so much di!! Your kind words always motivate me to write more❤️❤️❤️🥺🥺🥺

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Baby will read it as soon as I can okay

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Cassie and Amethys story was so beautiful. I loved it. Very sweet yaar, dialogues were so damn cute hehe. Well done Neha and I wish you luck, I hope your story comes true too like Cassie and Amethys

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Dialogue Dynamos

Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: SoniRSippu21

Cassie and Amethys story was so beautiful. I loved it. Very sweet yaar, dialogues were so damn cute hehe. Well done Neha and I wish you luck, I hope your story comes true too like Cassie and Amethys

🤗 thank you sweet Soniyo!!

Haan, those two cuties can make anything sweet! ❤️



Let's hope that dream comes true... ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Strong feelings communicated subtly, your words presented beautiful visuals in front of my eyes, the association and affection shared by Cassie and Amethys made this OS a delightful read.

You pushed the plot forward elegantly and brilliantly through the dialogues of the characters.

Edited by Viswasruti - 3 years ago
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Dialogue Dynamos

Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Viswasruti

Strong feelings communicated subtly, your words presented beautiful visuals in front of my eyes, the association and affection shared by Cassie and Amethys made this OS a delightful read.

You pushed the plot forward elegantly and brilliantly through the dialogues of the characters.

🥺🥺🥺

Appreciation from you means so much to me Madhu!! 🤗 thank you so much for reading! I'm glad it was a delightful read! ❤️❤️

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