Priority? - ShiVi OS

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Par mujhe nahi pata tha tu bhi iss had tak girjayegi” those words rang in her head over and over again


As she tried to walk on her feet, her head spinning faster by the second


Yeh daaru mujhe mere Gham ko bulane ke bajaye, yaad kyun dilaraha hai” she said while holding her throbbing head


Walking further ahead with no destination in mind, she sat below a tree. So much transpired within these few hours, just a while ago she was dreaming about confessing her love for shiva and here she is sitting under a tree in the middle of no where in a drunk state


Shiva had been bailed and he wanted answers. Answers from the girl who he knew from childhood, from the girl who loved his family with all her heart.


He walked into their room expecting her to be somewhere around, but to his dismay the room was empty. His eye travelled to the dustbin filled with rose petals and a completely destroyed sheet of paper


Kahan gayi woh itni raat ko?” He thought to himself


Bhabhi” he called out for dhara


Kya hua shiva?”


Raavi kidhar hai bhabhi?” He asked


Woh mami ke ghar gayi hai”


Woh wahan uss Dayan ke ghar kyun gayi hai” he seethed with anger yet again


When will they stop spewing venom in her innocent mind he wondered


Teri iss harkat ke baad woh yahan kyun rahegi?” Dhara said sternly


“Aap kya keh rahi hai bhabhi?”


Jo tune aaj kiya woh bohot galat hai shiva, raavi pe shaq kaise kiya tune?” She asked disappointedly


Par bhabhi-“


Chod Shiva, tu jaake so ja ab. Kal usse ghar wapas le ana” she adds and leaves


Shiva knew that raavi would never intentionally try to harm anyone, not even the person she dislikes. But how can he overlook the fact that she is very gullible, Anita could easily manipulate her into going against her family.


Just as he was about to hit the bed his phone flashed


Raavi iss waqt phone kyun kar rahi hai?” He thought


Hello?” He answered


Hello” she said while sniffing her nose


Chipkali tu ro rahi hai kya?” He panicked


Tu aise kyun hai shiva” she added while fresh tears made their way


Raavi tu ab kahan hai? Main mami ke ghar arah hoon abhi” he added while picking his keys


Mein maasi ke ghar nahi hoon” she said in a dazed tone


Raavi tune pi rakhi hai kya?” Asked a bewildered shiva


Haan! Lekin mujhe halka mehsus nahi ho raha hai shiva. Mene internet pe dekha ki peene ke baad apke saare gham chale jate hai. Lekin mere dil ab bhi dukh raha hai” she said while pointing to her heart


Raavi tu abhi kidhar hai? Main tujhe lene araha hoon”


Mujhe nahi pata ki main kahan hoon shiva” she said while sobbing


Raavi aas paas dekh aur bata ki kya hai” he asked while starting his bike


Baade baade ped hai aur mein ek ped ke neeche baithi hoon” she replied cutely


Ayy chipkali ped toh har jagah hai, aur kuch nahi hai kya paas mein?” He shouted


Tu mujhe phir daant raha hai” she cried again


Arrey phir se rone lag gayi yeh” he facepalmed himself


Acha main nahi dantunga, ab bol aur kuch nazar aarah hai?” He asked calmly


“Haan ek mela hai”


And that was all he needed to find her, shiva Pandya was next to his wife in the next 10 minutes


Parking his bike near the stall, he walked towards raavi, who was sitting under a huge tree with her head on her knees


Raavi” he softly called out


Shiva!” She excitedly got up causing her to feel lightheaded


Arrey aram se” he added while catching her


Raavi clung to him, her hands wrapped around his torso while he arms securely held her waist


Shiva, tu mujhe humesha sabse last kyun rakta hai” she said while trying to control her tears


Raavi yeh tu kya bol rahi hai?”


Tujhe mein hamesha galat kyun lagti hoon? Bachpan se leke aaj tak tune mujhe hamesha doosron ke galtiyon ke liye saza diya hai”


Guilt overpowering his being, he held her closer to him. He knew he was wrong. She would never do anything wrong or wish bad for his family.


Mujhe finally laga tha ki mera koi apna hai. Jo mujhe samjhe ga, jo mujhe bina koi judgement ke aapna yega. Lekin tune wapas mera dil tod diya” she mumbled in her drunk state


“I am sorry, mujhe pata hai ki sorry ek bohot hi choti shabd hai lekin mein sach mein apne kiye pe sharminda hoon. Mujhe aise tujhpe shaq nahi karna chahiye tha. Aur tu mere liye last nahi aati hai Raavi” he tried to explain


Finally moving out of his arms she looked at him


Main nahi jaanti ki mujhe kya kehna chahiye” she replied


Kuch mat keh, bas ghar wapas aaja” he pleaded


“Nahi shiva, haan main sabko bohot jaldi maaf kardeti hoon, lekin uska yeh matlab nahi hai ki mujhe dard nahi hota. Jab mujhe khud lagega ki main Teri priority hoon, uss din main tumhare ghar wapas aaungi” she declared


Raavi tu meri priority hai. Yeh main tujhe kaise samjhaun”


Shiva tere actions kuch aur hi kehte hai. Museebat ke sameh tu mujhe nahi chunega. Agar baat tere ghar wale aur mere beech hogi toh tu humesha unhe chunega. Aur please mujhe galat mat samaj”


Raavi aise kuch nahi hai. Tujhe bas chad gayi hai
he tried to make sense


Nahi, aaj ja ke mujhe sab kuch teekh se dikh raha hai. I am worth more than all this shiva. Jiss din mujhe lage ga ki tu mujhe apni family maanta hai, uss din main khud chali aungi Tere paas.” she added as she made her way back to the tree



This was not the end of their relationship but the start of their journey towards understanding eachother

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hello beautiful people

I am back again with an OS after quite a while so please do ignore any errors

I haven’t proof read the above.

I had written this piece a while ago and thought of posting it cause why not 😅

I have planned on posting a few other pieces this week

And lastly, do let me know how you guys liked this and constructive criticism is always welcome🤍

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I am very bad with tags 😭

Pls let me know if you want to be tagged

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Posted: 3 years ago
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My jaan made a comeback after so long 😘🤗

Loved it , very well expressed Raavi’s emotions .

P.S tu Insta par hai ?

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This OS is perfect. Raavi should neither go back with Shiva nor to Mami’s house.
Shiva says she is the priority but hardly shows it😕
Raavi needs to do the same in the show as well!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is so good ❤❤.. How I wish Raavi say all this to shiva 🤧🤧

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Posted: 3 years ago
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🥰💕So beautiful beautifully written, I always want Raavi to say this to Shiva, or for him to realize this….at least it been written wonderfully by you🥰

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Raavi shud take a stand for her like thissmiley20

On point dialoguessmiley32

Just perfectsmiley9

Loved itsmiley31

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I wish Raavi gets the importance she deserves

This was lovely

Shiva being worried and Raavi being cute but firm on her decision to not go back with him

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Noodles, This was such a wonderful OS. 🤗Raavi is right bigtime. Shiva needs to prove that Raavi is his priority. ❤️

Thank you for the tag.😳

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