Have my heart (OS mostly18+, pg5 21/01/22) - Page 9

huhn react bhi nhi kara mere comment pe huhn 😡🥺😭

Originally posted by: VaishnaviG

aaj dopar tak pakka 🤗

mat krna mere pe tho react tk nhi karri 🥺💔

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

huhn react bhi nhi kara mere comment pe huhn 😡🥺😭

I'm getting to the longer comments now! Intezaar!!! Abh aadhe gante ki mehnat ko lautana bhi padegi na!!! 😃

Originally posted by: Paru95

Sathya😍😍😍

Just loved this OS

Hawwwwtttt🔥☺️

Shiva has always been a very passionate guy and this is how, i believe, he wud express his ardour for Raavi♥️ the character Shiva has sooo much potential and that is seen here in your OS😘i soo loved how you addressed the insecurity of Shiva👍🏼This is how ShiVi wud be or rather they shud be...they are passion...they are love...they are ardour...they are perfectly imperfect😳

Loved it🤗

@bold You've described the very essence of their relationship with that line! Raavi's words about how a shiddat bhara nafrat is better than a khokli rishta is all that comes to mind!

I'm glad that you felt their essence has been maintained here, and that you loved it so much! ❤️

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

I'm getting to the longer comments now! Intezaar!!! Abh aadhe gante ki mehnat ko lautana bhi padegi na!!! 😃

Haan theek theek...aao jaldi.

Aur ye batao...periods wale OS ka kya haal hai? Chalu hua ki nhi...🤪

#SathyaLiterally1cmCloseToEnteringTheScreenAndPullingMyHairInVexationLike🤡

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Haan theek theek...aao jaldi.

Aur ye batao...periods wale OS ka kya haal hai? Chalu hua ki nhi...🤪

#SathyaLiterally1cmCloseToEnteringTheScreenAndPullingMyHairInVexationLike🤡

That one still has time... I have to update that FF, been working on this OS for a month now. So that's next.

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

That one still has time... I have to update that FF, been working on this OS for a month now. So that's next.

Acha matlb kuch tho degi content mein...sahi hai. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Suparna2210

Hayye behen what waas this!! I'm speechless! first of all, 7.2k words??!! how??!!

Second of all you took up the feelings of those scenes up till of canon and have written amazingly! the smut was ohh soo hot! The way Shiva was ready to let her go and yet Raavi made him realise she wanted to stay oof! The best has to be Suman kaki's entry though! hahahaha

Another lovely piece!!

Suparna🤗! 7.2k words over a month, actually. Approx 240 words a day. Literally written that way, because I didn't have more time than that on my hands... 😆

I'm glad you feel that this continues off of the initial passion of the track in canon... ❤️And Suman's entry was my favorite too! It was an improptu, just before I was about to post, and at nearly 1am. LOL. 😆

Originally posted by: mr.Flawed

Freaking hot!!! Sathiyaa

The conversation

The smut☺️(I need to put holy water😊)

Lastly, the entry of Suman is making me love her again.

P.S.: This was not how I thought it to be reading the prologue.

Glad you loved it! What did you think of after the prologue? Curious, curious!!! 😆

EDT ke pg 31 me tum logo ko tag krra ho nhi raha hai...last post dekh lena haan...🤪

#TafreeKarriHaiMaine🐷