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Posted: 3 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

It's getting interesting 😍

Why I have a feeling that person is Hardik. Usko screen space milne wala h na yahan🤣

Continue soon.

Thanks a lot Lols wi8 for the next part 😂😂😂

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Interesting. So Shiva still doesn't know about Raavi's accident because Mami didn't tell him about it? Also, I wonder who the person with him was at the end...

Lets see what happens in next part 😇😇😇

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Posted: 3 years ago
#23

Aimmy😍😍😍

This is getting interesting🥳

Who came to Shiva???

Eagerly waiting🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Paru95

Aimmy😍😍😍

This is getting interesting🥳

Who came to Shiva???

Eagerly waiting🤗

Thank u soo much dear 😍😍😍

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Part 3

Next morning

Shiva coming to his store suddenly he saw raavi coming bcak from her college nad ajay holds her from shoulder so that he can help her to walk ... Shiva's blood start boilng to saw the scene in from of his eyes .. ravi got little bit unbalanced shiva move one step forward to give her shelter in his arms but before him ajay holds her ... Shiva's anger on now on cluode nine ... He felt dejected to be late... late for being her savior ... Late for his most important part ... Late for his lady love ... And late for His mami ki behn ki beti... He felt rejected... Rejected by his own ... His heart swell with anger ... How dear some one other then him touched his mami ki behn ki beti... This right belong to him .. only him...

Ravi noticed shiva reaction but didn't react and left the spot as she reched infront of her masi house...

Ravi : thanks ajya for dropping me ...

Ajay : any time ...

Ravi : bye ajay....

Ajay : bye ravi...

Ravi entered in her masi house and ajay left and shiva still standing there thinking...

Anita notice the whole scenerio from the window of her balcony and smrik...

Anita thought :

Finally mera plan successful ho raha hai... Ravi n shiva mn ab kabhi na mitnay wale faslay. A rahe hn...

Here ravi entered her room when she felt some shadow near the window she got scared as someone took piece of land from her feet .. she felt that someone sticked her on the spot as she felt her feet unmoved... Then she some how manage to move one step after other slowly but much difficulty...

Ravi : k... K... Kon hai.. kon hai wahan ...

Then shadow got disappeared and ravi goes to check the terrace and it turn to be anita ..

Ravi felt relaxed...

Ravi: anita di ap .... Ap yehn kia kar rahi ho...

Anita : mn wo... Mn wo...

Ravi : kia mn wo .. mn wo kar rahi ho kb s ...

Anita : kuch nahi kapray lenay ai the ... Tu bata ...

Ravi : kuch khass nahi bs...

Anita noticed ravi swelling eyes... And some dried tears on her cheeks...

Anita : tere chehray ko kia hua hai ravi ... Kitna utar gaya hai...

Ravi : nahi kuch nahi hua... Ap plz mujhe akel achor do kuch time k liye..

Ravi turn her back to leave but anita holds her hand to stop her..

Anita : are ase kesay akela chor doon tujhe... Tu meri choti behn hai... Mere jigar ka tukra hai.. agar tujhe koi takleef hai to tu mujh s share lar skti hai...

Ravi turns toward her ...

Ravi : paka ? Ap kisi ko kuch batao gaye to nahi na...

Anita : han.. paka ... Paka.... are nahi ... Bilkul bhi nahi ... nahi bataon ge kisi ko...

Anita holds her hand and took her somewhere...

Ravi : are kahan le k ja rahi ho ap mujhe...

Anita : tu chal mere sath...

They both reached in ravi room anita sits on bed ... Place a small cusion in her lap and signal with eyes to ravi who was standing near the bed ... Ravi didn't understand then anita pulled her from hand and make her sit

Ravi : anita di ap yeh kia kar rahi ho..

Anita : shh...

then lies her in her lap .. and cares her hairs ... And then smiles ..

Anita : tujhe yad hai ravi jb tu choti the r teri kisi s larai hoti the to tu ase hi meri god mn a k letti the... R apni sari bharas nikal lia karti the...

Ravi : hmm ... Kisi s kia anita di ek hi to rakshas tha meri zindgi mn ... Bhootnath kahin ka ....

Anita : Kabhi roti the kabhi ghusa karti the... R ase kartay kartay so jaya karti the... R itni gehri need soti the k phr asman phat jaye ya zameen tujhe hosh nahi hota tha r tu lambi taan k sui hoti the...

Then ravi fetch her From her lap mn saw upward in anita's direction

Ravi : han r ap sari raat mere kharaton ki waja s so nahi patay thay na ...

Anita : han ... R subha jb phui mujhe jhaganay ati the to mn yahi bolti the ...

Both said together :

Sonay do na phui...

Both start laughing on their sweet memory ..

Then suddenly ravi expression changes to frim ... She tries to leave bt anita agian holds her hand

Anita : hamari bat abhi adoori hai... Kitna piyar tha na wo wakt ravi ...

And she sit back

Anita : tu ab bhi mujh s share kar skti kuch bhi... Bata na kia hua..

Then ravi again put her head in lap ...

Ravi : hona kia hai anita de... Barson purnaa ek hi topic tab bhi wahi tha aj bhi wahi hai ... Bhootnath ... Mere har dard hra ansoo ki waja wahi to hai... Na tab vishvas tha use mujh p r na ab hai... Wo gadhera smjhta kun nahi hai k mujhe use jhagrana na phale psnd tha r n ab pasnad hai... Kal hamara divorce final honay wala hai r use n ek bar bhi mujh s puchna gawara nahi kia k mn kia chati hn kia kar rahi hn r kun kar rahi hn ... Bs masi ko bol dia k mujhe divorce de raha hai...

Fb :

Before mami got call about ravi's accident..

Shiva comes to mami house with danda in his hand and start breaking the things and yelling ...

Mami : aye eee... Jangli gawar snadh tu pagal ho gaya hai kia...

Shiva : han mn pagal ho gaya hoon ... Khoon sawar hia mere sar p... R kb ase hlaat hoti na to paglaon ka koi bhrrosa nahi hota wo kisi ka khoon bhi kar sktay hn ...

Mami : aye pagal...

Shiva : 2 batain puchon ga sach sach jawab dena nahi to aj tera khoon mere hathon ho jaye ga...

1 anita kahan hai ... Mujhe us ka murder karna hai

2 Ravi kahan hai ... mujhe use bat karni hai ...

Mami : aye... Mujhe nahi pata dono kahan hain... Mn nahi janti...

Shiva yell...

Shiva : nahi janti tu... Nahi janti ...

He again start breaking the things ...

Mami : mn sachi nahi janti ... Bhogilala ki sau...

Then shiva stops and walk toward mami angerly ...

Shiva : bata dena apni ladli ko kal us ka r mera rishta khatam karnay ja raha hun main... Hamesha hamesha k liye us ka chapter khtaam meri life s ... Wo bhi azaad r mn bhi azaad us panoti s...

And shiva left from there

Fb end

Ravi burried her head in her lap and start crying... Anita smriks and felt relieved that her plan is working ... And start cares her hairs again while smriking...

Anita : shh..sh.h... chup hoja ravi... Jis ko teri itni c bhi qadar nahi hai use k tu kun apnya qeemti ansoo bhaa rahi hai... Chor us jangli gawar ko... Wo tujhe deserve hi nahi karta... R na tu use... Use buht behter deserve karti hai tu... Ab bs tu so ja arram s ...

After sometime her sobs slow down and she doses off to sleep...

Next morning ravi getting ready for her college suddenly she felt someone hugs her from behind ...she turn n saw Anita there hugging her.. nad just smilingly widely...

Ravi : kia hua anita di ap theek to ho na..

Anita : han mn theek hn ... Bal k buht khush hn ... Aj mujhe meri pehle wali behn meri dost wapas jo mil gai hai...

Ravi : han Anita di khush to mn bhi buht hoon aj ...mujhe mere bari behn jo wapas mil gai hai...

Both hugs eachother happily... Ravi then break the hug and walk one step forward ...

Ravi : dhara di n yeh sahi nai kia... Pahle ap k sath ghalat hua tha r ab mere sath... Dhara n mujh s mera pati cheena hai na ... ab mn un s un ka pati cheenon ge... Gombie r dhara di ko alag karon ge... Un dono ko alag hona hi hoga...

Anita got shocked on her statement ... And then felt happy as her plan is working

Anita thought :

Waha ... Bholenath waha... Itnay jaldi meri is pagal behn ko akal de di ap n... Ap yahi dhara r gautam ko alag karege r phir mujhe r Gautam ko ek karege...

And she smriks evilly....

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Posted: 3 years ago
#26

This is super exciting

Eagerly waiting for the next part🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#27

🤩Read all 3 chapters, amazing can’t wait for your next chapter 🥰🥰

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Posted: 3 years ago
#28

Excitinggggg!!🤗

Next part sooonn!!❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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grt update😊

waiting for more

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Nice update😘😘😍

Want more..........

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