I won't leave you-Shivi OS

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hey guys, i was just watching old haveli episodes and saw that dishita kept on fighting only so thought to pen something down which revolves around Shivi.

This idea just struck and i just wrote it down.

Hope you all enjoy reading

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Dev and rishita are fighting in the hall. Everyone came out. Dev was shouting,

"Tumse shaadi krna mere life ka sabse bada blunder tha......hamesha yehi sochta hoon agar meri Shaadi Raavi se huyi hoti toh meri life kitni better hoti........."

Everyone becomes shocked Shiva looked at Raavi and Raavi looked at Shiva and left the place Rishita retorts,

"Toh main bhi pachta hi rahi hoon tumse shaadi karke....... Koii satve aasman par nahi hoon......kar lete na shaadi fir............"

Dev replies,

"Great..... Toh sign krdo aur jao...... Tumne meri family ki disrespect karne ka theka le liya hai mujhe aisi ladki nahi chahiye meri life mein........... "

Dev forwards the divorce papers and before anyone could say anything Rishita signs the papers and after a long discussion confronting and shouting the decision came that let the divorce proceedings start.

Rishita leaves to her parents house and krish has accompanied her to ensure her safety and everyone else went to their rooms. Dhara was sad so Gaumbi accompanied her and Suman was in room looking outside the balcony where kitchen and hall was visible. Raavi was working in kitchen and suman was looking at her when she saw Dev entering the kitchen. Dev entered and looked at Raavi he stood on the door and kept on looking at her. Suman was becoming angry as how dev is staring Raavi. And than she noticed Shiva who was in hall witnessing the scene of Dev staring Raavi he was equally fuming in anger.

Raavi wokes up from ger seat and turns to see dev and gets startled and says,

"Kuch chahiye tha dev...... "

Dev fumbles,

"Haan... Vo.. Vo... Paani...... "

Raavi hands him a glass of water gives him a smile and again turns to do the work meanwhile suman was noticing how Shiva is getting angry and Raavi not knowing anyone's intention is just doing her work and the very next moment Shiva shouted,

"Raavi......... "

And shiva leaves for his room and Raavi leaves the kitchen in order to look for Shiva. Suman than calls Dev and says,

"Tune kaha ki agar teri shaddi Raavi se hoti toh acha hota haina........ "

Dev nods suman gets angry at her desperate son as how he was laying eyes on his brother's wife but thought to play along and said,

"Toh fir chal mere saath..... "

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IN SHIVI'S ROOM,

Shiva was pacing around in the room and than Raavi comes and says,

"Tune mujhe bulaya..... "

Shiva angrily hold her shoulddt and says,

"Itna tym lagata hain aane mein kya kar rahi thi tu........ "

Raavi replies,

"Shiva mujhe chod dard ho raha hai........ "

Shiva's hold tightens and he says,

"Maine kuch pucha kya kar rahi thi tu........u "

Raavi says angrily,

"Main kitchen mein thi...... Kaam kar rahi thi tym toh lagega hi na aand mein.........tune mujhe bulaya aur main aa gayi koii kaam tha kya....."

Than shiva realises that she was just doing her work, she doesn't even know that someone was staring her he leaves her and mumbles,

"Kuch nahi........ "

Raavi looks at him in disbelief anger was evident in her eyes but before she could retort suman came with dev and everyone else and says,

"Ae shiva Raavi....... Mujhe tum dono se baat karni hai....... "

They both nod and shiva moves forward. Meanwhile Raavi stands few distance away from him and suman sign Dev to come in front so does he. And she spoke,

"Jaise ki sabko pata lag hi gaya hai kii dev rishita ko talak de raha hai.. . .. . .. . Toh Raavi beta agar tere maan nein koii baat hai toh bata.. ."

Raavi was clueless and looks at suman in confusion and suman says,

"Dekh beta sab ko pata hai tumhari shaadi kaise huyi hai.. . .. . Aur dekh Raavi agar tujhe Dev ke saath lagan karna hai toh bata.. . .. ."

Raavi becomes shocked and looks at suman unable to form words Shiva clenched his fist and turned his gaze to either side to hide his blood shot eyes and suman saw this she further infuriates and says,

"Shiva tujhe kuch kehna hain.. . .. . "

He doesn't replies and nods in a no. Dhara tried to speak something but was stopped by suman and Dev says turning to Raavi,

"Dekho Raavi jo hua.. . .. Sab bhul jao.. . . Hum nayi shuruwat kar sakte hai.. . .. . "

Raavi was not able to match anyone's gaze her head was lowered down tears threatning nad havoc of emotions of disgust on dev's words as how he can think that she will leave shiva for him and here shiva was thinking that he has fought with Raavi just now he has hurted her and what if she leaves him he was confused. And suman says,

"Tumhare haath mein hai abb sab bol kya chahti hai tu.. . .. . . "

Raavi didn't look at anyone and simply walks to towards the boys as they were standing parallel to each other , Shiva's heart was beating faster as he was thinking she would choose dev and everyone was looking at her and raavi was looking down and just went near Shiva and hold his forearm tightly. Shiva was taken aback by all this and he finally managed to look at her and her eyes were looking down her tears on verge to come out. Suman says,

"Toh kuch bol Raavi.. . .. . . "

Raavi doesn't speak anything just tighten her hold on his forearm with shivering hand and shiva instinctively kept his hand on her shivering hand to stop her anxiety. Everyone around was speaking multiple things. But it both of them just stay quite in the position and after sometime suman came out with everyone blessing them and taking dev to her room to teach him a lesson.

Everyone left and now Shiva smiled at her mom who was giving him a assuring look. Shiva looked at Raavi and says,

"Raavi sab log chale gaye.... . .. Mujhe chod toh de abb.. . .. . "

Raavi doesn't replies just hercsobs were now audible and shiva says,

"Sab chalen gaye hain mujhe toh chod"

Raavi now cries louder and holds his arm like a little kid hold his teddy bear and says choking,

"Samajh nahi aa raha tujhe.. . .. Nahi chodna chahti main tujhe.. . .. . Kya chod chod laga rakhi hai.. . .. . "

Shiva smiles at her words and pats her back in order to give her comfort and says,

"Tu baith idhar.. . .. . . Aur tu roo kio rahi hai.. . .. . . "

Raavi sits beside him on bed not leaving his hand and says crying like a kid,

"Pata nahi kyon roo rahi hoon mujhe toh gussa hona chahiye.. . .. Sab log kaise soch sakte hain ki main tujhe chod kar apne pati ko chodkar kisi aur ladke ke paas jaungi.. . .. . Mujhe nahi jana.... . .. . . "

Shiva wipes her tears and says,

"Haan... . Toh kon bhej raha hai.. . .. "

Raavi looks at him and wipes her cheeks cutely like a kid and says poutingly,

"Tune kuch kio nahi kaha fir.. . .. .Dev ka sar kio nahi phoda.. . .. . Vese toh sara din gudmsse mein rehta hain mujhse ladta rehta hain.. . . Bola kio nahi kuch tu.. . .. . .. Usne mere bare mein aisa socha bhi kaise.. . .. . . "

Shiva just can't stop adoring her and eventually his hand cupped her face and he says,

"Main bass yehi chahta tha kii jo faisla ho tera ho........Mujhe laga ki tu shayad dev ke saath.. . .. . "

He was cutt in between and Raavi hugged him tightly sobbing and said,

"Mere faisle ka kya matlab yeh hamara rishta hai........ Aur kya dev dev laga rkha hai....... "

Shiva encircles his arms hesitantly around her and Raavi calms a bit and says,

"Shiva tujhe abhi bhi yahi lagta hai kya main dev ko pasand karti hoon........ Aisa bilkul bhi nahi hai..... Maine hamari shaadi ke baad uski taraf ikk baar bhi nahin dekha.........sach mein..... "

Shiva says tightening his hold,

"Main janta hoon tujhe kuch kehne ki jaroorat nahi hai......."

He by mistakenly hold her shoulder and she hisses in pain shiva asks her in concern,

"Yeh kya hua raavi....... "

And than realisation struck him and he says,

"Maine abhi tujhe yeh maine...... "

Raavi was still hugging him nods.

He tries to remove her hand but she just snuggles more.

He picks up the ointment kept on side table and slowly applies it. She mumbles a thank you and he pats her back for some time. After sometime, he heard snoring sounds and looks at her and smiles and rests his back on bedrest and holds her more softly.



I was admiring you and asked god why did you made her so innocent and so pure,

God replies me immediately saying,

Her innocence is the one that shouldn't be destroyed i hand over my special human to you

She is yours to be protected, yours to be cherished and yours to be loved.



I asked why does she choose me over the perfect ones,

God says she saw that person in you whom i made not the one whom you have plastered on your being she has seen you through the odds and chosen you from the perfects,

In the whole crowd her eyes never leaved your sight so how can she choose someone else when her view is blurred for others when you are in her front.



I asked how can i reciprocate such naive acts of her,

God smiled and said by just being yourself and as she loves your being, but this little bean in your arms needs care and love, soften your shell and relish her............

Don't let her naive soul disrupt Specially you should not be the reason of her breakdown as she has Surrendered herself to you doesn't she deserves this much. Hold her closer and rest of your question's , answer are in her eyes hope so you find them.



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Hope so you like this.. . .. . ..

Please put up your suggestions for me to improve.

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thnak you for reading🥰😘😍
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Very cuuute ❤️
Raavi holding onto Shiva

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Very cuuute ❤️
Raavi holding onto Shiva

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Loved loved loved it! ❤️Can I ask for more😊

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Loved loved loved it! ❤️Can I ask for more😊

thank you ❤❤

More in the sense update for this.......

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Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

thank you ❤❤

More in the sense update for this.......


Yeah I want to know what Suman does with Dev

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Yeah I want to know what Suman does with Dev

ohh.......

Right now there is no such plan but surely if i get some idea i will update it........

PS:-sorry for this hope you didn't mind

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Originally posted by: virangna2005

lovely😘😘😘

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BTW waiting for update pf your new story

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