ShiVi OS - Happy New Fairytale - Page 2

Saru this was adorable!!❤️

I read it yesterday but fell asleep before commenting, aaj kar deti hoon because it made my dil very very khush 🤗

Raavi laying out a trap for Shiva but finding herself being overpowered by his words was just cute, cute, cute awww.

Raavi getting scared but Shiva being there to steady her and letting her know to not be afraid, my heartttt, it's made of mush, you made it even more mushierrrr (is that a word?) 🥺

And their ily, so simple but so them, sweet and beauts 🤗

I loved it sm, especially the ending, where he teases her 🤣

I want more fluff 😭

Raavi gaal phulaoing cuz neend mein Shiva stole a kiss has to my favourite bit .. what an adorable fic Sara 🥺

Moar. Moar fluff please. Absolutely adore this one .. Like kisine mere munh mein hanger thoos di ho ☺️ ❤️

Saraaa❤️❤️

I'll come edit this when my mood is better so I can write a good comment ❤️

Saraaa...🤗

This was such a lovely story

Soo romantic and cute☺️

Loved it alot❤️

I have posted a comment on Wattpad😳

Waiting for more storiess... Esp ahem ahem walaa🤣🙈

Oof, oof, oof, oof, oof! This wasn't my first time reading it, but I had all the thrills. While I love mush, you perfectly capture their pre-wedding shivi vibes/nok jhoks and describe them here. Married Shivi without losing their OG essences. Waise I was surprised that Raavi even knew about the research. But it's so her to get trapped in her own web. But loved this bold Raavi telling Shiva that she needed to be awake for the kiss, admitting partially absentmindedly initially and then in her ego trip to up one😂. And Shiva knew how to make the best of it.

I love love love Shiva here. Pehle usse upar vhejta hai and phir no nonsense, no stuttering. Sidha bolta hai uske Dil ki feelings and manages to shut her up and how❤️. It was soo adorable. And the punchline was the fairytale. Confession or kiss or bhi usse chedna nahi choda. And again, that's exactly what I mean when I say that you always maintain the essence of OG Shivi that we all fell in love with, even if the makers forgot it.

P.s. One logical kostin. Shiva told her to not go outside and go on chat because it's cold outside. Toh kya chat Ghar ke andar hai? Wahan cold nahi Hogi? Raavi kaise maan gayi? Lol. Sorry, I just had to. But logic be damned. What does Twin say? Only Magic matters and this is a fairytale and magic toh bharpur tha! Loveeed it Saru! ❤️❤️