Arylie TS: A storm is brewing Chapter 3 (16+), updated Page 9 - Page 5

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hey don't forget to bookmark the mltr16 story index thread so you can easily access all stories in one place.


I have not been MIA other than writing, and its hard to catch up with the forum and all the stories that pop up. So I totally understand! Thanks for taking the time to leave me feedback, it means so much to me. 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: mltr16

Hey don't forget to bookmark the mltr16 story index thread so you can easily access all stories in one place.


I have not been MIA other than writing, and its hard to catch up with the forum and all the stories that pop up. So I totally understand! Thanks for taking the time to leave me feedback, it means so much to me. 🤗

yes!! Adult life is hard lol and to be active on the forum is like having a second job lol but yes!! I will. That thread will def help me piece all the stories you’ve written together!!
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Juwii29

yes!! Adult life is hard lol and to be active on the forum is like having a second job lol but yes!! I will. That thread will def help me piece all the stories you’ve written together!!


Sometimes I have to go back and piece my own stories together 🤣 Peace, Juwi! Next update as promised tomorrow.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wow! You have beautifully shown the perspectives of both Imlie & Aryan. I felt sad for Aryan. Loved how Namarda Maa helped Imlie to solve this conversation and understand Aryan. Imlie should have listened patiently but that's her nature acting impulsively. You maintained the arc of character very well. Loved it. Waiting to read further.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Okay so when I read about her returning to India for a week, I was like what's the point anyway, that week would be spent in home quarantine 🤡

Covid has taken a toll on me 🤧

Sooooooooo, peet ma koni is not gonna be virtual, feeling sad for Aru already 😔

Seems like Aru switched on his Devdas mode 😂

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Interesting waiting eagerly

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: captain_waffle

Okay so when I read about her returning to India for a week, I was like what's the point anyway, that week would be spent in home quarantine 🤡

Covid has taken a toll on me 🤧

Sooooooooo, peet ma koni is not gonna be virtual, feeling sad for Aru already 😔

Seems like Aru switched on his Devdas mode 😂


Kaaaaahe? Even though I have taken the liberty to ignore COVID/quarantine like on ITV, quarantine for a long-distance, newly married couple for 1 week?!!! Not such a bad deal, I am sure some very creative writer can come up with all sorts of quarantine activities 😉😉😉. Unfortunately, I am kinda running out of steam here. tagging a couple of creative people I can think of off the top of my head.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: mltr16


Kaaaaahe? Even though I have taken the liberty to ignore COVID/quarantine like on ITV, quarantine for a long-distance, newly married couple for 1 week?!!! Not such a bad deal, I am sure some very creative writer can come up with all sorts of quarantine activities 😉😉😉. Unfortunately, I am kinda running out of steam here. tagging a couple of creative people I can think of off the top of my head.


Humka maaf karo bhaya...

Jo hum soche hai pehle uhi likh le toh bahut hai... 😂😂😂

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: captain_waffle

Okay so when I read about her returning to India for a week, I was like what's the point anyway, that week would be spent in home quarantine 🤡

Covid has taken a toll on me 🤧

Sooooooooo, peet ma koni is not gonna be virtual, feeling sad for Aru already 😔

Seems like Aru switched on his Devdas mode 😂


@bold: picture abhi baaki hai mere dost. Don't feel sad for Aru! M pe itnaich bharosa hai kya?? 😉😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Oh, how you brought the song alive! I realise that both of them are struggling but she really needs to draw some boundaries with Tripathis even in the show. She needs to stop making them a factor in her marriage. They constantly emotionally manipulate her and don't actually care about her happiness.

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