Weekend musings - Sai/Virat/Pakhi

I am an amateur poet so dont expect anything beautiful with patterns. Just tried to be succinct while capturing maximum emotions. Couple of friends liked it and hence found some motivation to post here.

Pretext: Imagine Sai while giving back the ring and leaving Virat

In you, I see the love my father had for me, the love

that gave me wings to fly

that gave me voice to question

that gave me courage to dream

that gave me strength to fight, but

that makes me weak in my knees too...

why not!, the love I have for you is different, I want you

to be my friend for life, who can share my worst fears

to be my guide, who can correct me when I falter

to be my father, who pampers me with no bounds

to be my lover, who sees me as a woman

to be my husband, who gives me his name and family

And that love I cannot share with anyone, as

I am selfish when it comes to you

I am jealous when someone calls for your attention

I am arrogant when you cant see me beyond my words,

I am taunting to dig out the love that seems ever hidden

Ahhh, Why cant you understand me now, when you heard my silences before!

You, only your love made me this 'vile'! because

The walls I built around my heart to have crumbled

Crumbled inside and trapped me, with doubts or is it

Just my insecurity, wielding its ugly head?, come stop me

For as much as I want to fly and soar ahead

I want to come back into your arms and rest...

Virat's poem

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/160045512

Pakhi's poem

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/160045572

Wow! Wow!

I would like to read Virat's, please.

Long time no see. Sadhika Di.

NIce poem, captures Sai's POV quite well.

I too want to read Virat and Pakhi's POV.

Update soon.

BTW, are you reading my OS, Mahamilan? what started as a comic take has become an action packed drama.

This is so beautiful❤️

Would love to read Virat and Pakhi's as well

While Sai's poem is simple expression of her feelings and her current hearbreak, Virat's poem needed some layers to hide the obvious just like his feelings are hidden.

First stanza has 5 senses to express his love towards Sai, which is very superficial because the family is blaming him that he left Sai for another woman which is like seeing his love on the outside.

Second stanza shows why Virat feels complete in Sai's love.

And third his inablity to express which has been undercurrent in their MUs

My love, how I can I go to any other woman

When I saw in you, the beauty that runs inside out, that attracts me

When I smell from you, the sweetness of your smile, that brings me immense joy

When I hear you, the truth as bitter as Neem, that heals me still

When I feel you, the passion that springs in me, that shows me my patience

Not to taste you, till you feel the same for me.

My dearest, I am incomplete without you, only

You can show me the reality without any judgement

You can give me the love without expectations

You can accept me with all my faults

You can forgive me of all my mistakes, but

Can you for once trust me that I can love no one but you?

Sai..,don't go away and break me please, for

I will not be the same man again, nor

I can breathe in the same space without you, No

I cannot call you back with my rights, I wish

I had given you the right to chose me then and now

I can only wait for you to chose me, my love for you is beyond me!

Note: "I wish" in the last stanza applies for 4th line and 5th line, both. So use it while reading 5th line too. :D

Pakhi's poem

Pakhi, IMO believes Virat in this whole drama. Her concentration was only on Sai leaving the house. She is the one who knows how much Virat loves Sai, he had told ONLY her directly multiple times. So if she had any courage and loved Virat truly, she would have protected him. But she 'chose' not to.

Pretext: while virat was leaving

I Wish I could stop you (my love) for

I could see the truth in those eyes from the time I met you

I could feel the passion since you first let "that" girl in

I could weigh the hurt when your "love" left you, because

I could hear your countless professes of your love for "her", still ringing in my head

I trust you with my life that you could not falter,

not after I saw you protecting her from every attack, that I had for her

not after I saw you fall for her deeper and deeper, every day

not after I saw you bawling on the floor when "we" pushed her to death

not after I saw you half dead when she met her death closely again

I wish I could say all this and stop every tirade that attacks you

I wish I could stand in front you and show your love for "Her",

I wish I could go and bring back "your Love" in a jiffy

I wish I could protect your heart for "that" woman, who I made my enemy...

but Alas...my love as you say cant see beyond me!

Note: The girl in this context is Sai, not Sruthi anywhere

This is so so beautiful.... absolutely loved it... especially Virat's... although i totally hate him in the current track.

I am in the process of writing a TS/SS.... can I use these as reference please? Will definitely credit you.

If you can, read these and let me know ❤️

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5275323?pn=5#160043473

Thanks! Please use it.

Thank you. No yaar I am not able to read anything due to time crunch: will definitely read yours . 👍

Virat and Sai's inner feelings expressed so beautifully. Thank you for this! Actually their story is so intense and passionate, from the beginning...even more so now.