Righting Wrongs - Abhira One-Shot 4/01/2022 - Page 3

Originally posted by: Khayali_pulao

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Originally posted by: sheet_leher

Hey,

Thanks for the update ❤️

Loved it. My sherni Akshu was back and how good she was 😍 . Saying everything out loud, speaking against all the lies that Aarohi weaved. This is needed. Akshu FINALLY realised that in her obsession of getting her sister back, she was destroying Abhi's life. She was sentencing him to a life of unhappiness, a life that was gonna be based on lies. I'm so so so glad she took a step, and I pray show Akshu comes to her senses too.

Last line was 🔥🔥🔥🔥

Superb OS 🤗 hope you write more :')

Thank you so much for your comment

Yeah I so wish akshu confess everything but it's not going to happen we all know

She's happy being a sacrificial queen

Abhi was also wrong in proposing Arohi but I don't want to include that part in this os and make it all lengthy and confusing

Originally posted by: Ambajee

Yay!! Amazing OS!! How I wish this was how Maha saptah week turned out to be!! You have written it beautifully dear! Amazing work.. do write more!

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Thank you dear ❤️

Originally posted by: imkt

Interesting one lakin m not sure ki akshu kabhi aisey bolegi shyad bol bhi de if makers doesn’t want to stretch but u did a good job 👍🏻

Thank you

Yeah I know it's not going to happen in show

That's why we write Fan-Fictions no

Originally posted by: ChhalkiSyaahi

I am doing a happy dance. 💃 💃 💃

Finally she confessed. And Arohi's lies are out. And she accepts Abhimanyu.

I wish this happens in the serial as well. Lovely shot. 😍

Excuse me while I go and read this again. And soothe my broken heart 💔

Brilliant work. Keep writing more.

Thank you dear

Yeah read as many times as you want 😜❤️

Originally posted by: Eternized_Blues

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Amazing OS

The way Akshu took stand for herself that's commanable👏

Arohi's truth finally came out atleast in your OS😉

Originally posted by: Eternized_Blues

Kriti finally🤗 yeah finally 🤗😆

You are writing which means I don't have to🤗 maar khani hai 🙂🔪

Kriti, meri jaan, mere jigar ke tukde, I can not tell you how happy you have made me by writing.

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Yeah I know 🤗 and also know how much jealous you get with the speed of my writing an OS 🤪🤪😆

I have absolutely no hope from the promo, for me, it is a classic case of Burned Once, cautious twice. Ditto but some dialogues struck in my mind so thought to pen it down

Oh! How I wish Akshara in the show shows the guts that your Akshara did and put an end to all this misery by taking those rings off. Yeah I know I wished the same

ABHIMANYU IS NOT A THING- Yes he is not, he has emotions and he feels pain and those tears are his witness in the court of love. I got connected to this show or akshara because of Abhimanyu only Harshad is so good as abhi it seems Abhi's role was specially for him only.... Aditya Hooda also had emotional side but honestly speaking I was unable to connect with him

I absolutely loved the Akshu- Aarohi showdown. You cleared all the points and shut Aru up so well. Mere dil mein snowfall ho gayi

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Mere dil mai bhi ho jayegi agar aisa show mai hua iska 50% bhi hua na I'll be more than happy

"KOI HUMME BATAYEGA KE HO KYA RAHA HAI- what an absolutely Manish thing to say🤣

Yahi toh dialogue hai iske pass maine for hhi is bande ko thoda sensible dikhaya 😂

I also loved Manjiri's reaction, this will be replicated in the show as well. Confusion ki dukaan🤣

Haina 😂 mai toh manjari ka ye monologue bhi dalne lagi thi that I'll keep the maun vrat for life bas Abhi n akshara ko mila do

You tell her Abhimanyu, tell Akshu all her mistakes and misjudgment. You tell her how much you have been hurt by her actions and constant denials. And good for you to demand that she chose right then and there between her family and you.

Finally! you wrote everything I wanted the makers to do on the show. Who needs CVs when you have Kriti. Ufff itni tareef 🙈😊

Now write another one Phast Phast! Mera dialogue mujhe hi chep diya 🤣

PS:I WILL GLADLY TAKE ALL THE CREDIT FOR YOU POSTING THIS. THIS FORUM GAINED A FABULOUS WRITER TODAY. SO YAY ME!!!

Rolling my eyes

P.s jyada khush ho mat behan I don't know when will I write next

Blueee thank you for your comment

You made my day 🤗

Sorry forgot to tag you

Everything that we fans want to see in the show is here! Brilliant dialogues! Pls tag me in all your ABHIRA FF. Thank you