PROMISE.............
After a cold argument,shiva goes to the terrace to cool down his mind. He was sad and bit hurt because what all happened today. but he felt a bit guilty thinking ‘raavi ko jayada chilla diya….’
Sh: (himself) kya yaar….idhar udhar ka bhi frustration nikal diya uss par….ab janardan ne maal ki supply rukvayi toh isme raavi kya galti….faltu uss par sara gussa nikal diya……
A voice from behind: par gussa apno pe hi nikaala jata hai na………
Shiva turns and sees raavi standing with two cups of tea in hand.
Sh: (sighs and turns around)…..par tu hi toh keh rahi thi ki tujhe hum apna nhi maante…..apne ghar ka hissa nhi maante…..
Ra: (stands beside him) hn toh….galt kaha kya?....agr maante toh mujhse itni badi baat nhi chupaate…..
Sh: (turns to her and angrily) toh iss baat ki khundak tu dukaan pe nikaalegi hn……
Ra: (clamly) nhi bikul nhi……phele ye le chai pee…tera sar dukh rha hoga……(forwards the cup to him)
Sh: nhi peeni…….main sone jaa rha hu……
Shiva turns to leave but raavi holds his hand.
Ra: (holding his hand)shiva please…….(goes near him) Shiva mera iraada dukaan ko nuksaan karane kanhi tha…...main toh bas customer bulaan chah rahi thi…..mujhe nhi pta tha ki ye sab ulta pad jayega…. really sorry shiva....(emotionally)
Sh: (turns to her and explains calmly) raavi dhanda aise nhi chalta….aree gombi bhi daam upar neeche karte hai toh mujhse aur dev se baat karte hai…..(hold shoulder lightly) dekh raavi abhi tujhe samjh nhi hai inn cheezo ki….agr tere mann me koi idea hai toh mujhe bata, gombi ko bata…..pura pariwaar discuss kar ke decision lega……
Ra: kaun?......chaaro bhai aur dhara di?.....(sarcastically and hurtful)
Sh: (sighs and rolls his eyes) tu aisa kyun soch rhi hai?......aisa nhi hai-
Ra: (cuts him) aisa hi hai……koi mujhe apna nhi manta yahan…..(with tearful eyes)
Sh: tu idhar aa(pulls herto the bench and make her sit)………tu keh rahi hai ki ye hum tujhe apna nhi maante ye pariwaar tujhe apna nhi manta……..haina?
Ra: *nods head in yes*
Sh: (cupping her face) sirf isliye ki humne tujhe ek baat nhi btayi isliye……raavi tu jinhe keh rahi hai na ki vo tujhe apna nhi maante unhi logo ne mujhse muh fer liya tha kyunki maine tujhe dukh pahunchaya tha….maa ke alawa sab tere saath khade the…..aur issi pariaar ke logo ne tera-mera divorce rukwaane ke liye edi choti ka dum laga diya tha……phir bhi tujhe lagta hai ki hum tujhe apna nhi maante……..hmm?
Ra: (sobbinng) agr maante ho toh kyun nhi bataya….tune bhi kuch nhi bataya…..dekhi thi na tune meri halat phir bhi…
Sh: (wiping her tears)raavi baat chupaane ki wajha thi…..agr tu sach ugal deti toh…..kya karte hum?.....ek baat bata jo maine tujhe batayi ho aur tune secret rakhi…..bol?
Ra: (angrily)acha…….lekin almost sabko pata chal gya tha…..phir bhi tune mujhe kuch nhi bataya…..
Sh: (facepalm himself) tujhe lagta hai ki humne krish ko apne mann se bataya hoga…..aree jab main, dev,dhara Bhabhi baat kar rahe the tab uss gadhede ne sun liya……warna iss maamle me vo tujhse kam hai kya…..
Ra: aur gaumbi?.....(curiously)
Sh: (chuckles)unse baat secret rakhne ki zimedaari Bhabhi ki thi jo vo puri nhi kar payi……..(cups her face)dekh raavi humaara tujhe hurt karne ka iraada nhi tha……..bas planning itni jaldi hui….aur maine hi mana kiya tha tujhe batane ko……isliye tu mujh pe gusssa nikaal… dusro pe nhi….
Ra: (removing his hand)pata tha mujhe……(angrily stands)aaj tune ye baat chupayi hai…. Kal ko koi aur chupaye ga…….
Sh: (goes behind her) nhi chupaunga….aur pata hota na ki tu raat ke 2 baje aisa stunt karegi toh phele hi bata deta…..(raavi’s reaction 😲)....acha thik hai…..aaj ke baad tujhse koi baat nhi chupaunga….tujhe sab bataunga….lekin tujhe vaada karna hoga……(raavi looks confused)…..tu sabke saamne unn baato ki ulti nhi karegi……samjhi?
Ra: (sighing) fine…..par tu mujhse koi baat nhi chupaaye ga…..aur dhara di se main khud baat kar lungi ki vo mujhe ghar ke baare me sab bataye……
Sh: (relieving) hn…vo tu jaane aur Bhabhi jaane……..(holds her shoulders) aur hn….aaj ke baad mat kehna ki hum tujhe apna nhi maante…. tu iss ghar ka hissa hai aur iss ghar ke logo kehisse me bhi aati hai samjhi?.....
Ra: (smiling) samjhi…….aur jo aaj dukaan me hua vo bhi repeat nhi karungi…phele baat karungi phir kuch karungi………aur tu bhi mujhse ladna mat....(shiva nods his head like a kid) aur dukaan pe jo kiya vo bhi mat karna…
Sh: (confused) maine kya kiya?.....
Ra: (annoyed) maasi se jhagada……(shiva’s reaction😒)….dekh shiva mujhe bilkul acha nhi lagta jab tu aur maasi ladte ho….main sandwhich ka aalo banke piss jaati hu……
Sh: (reluctantly) thik hai par uss maami ko keh dena ki mujhe 10 gaj ki duri pe rahe aur apni bakwaas mere saamne na kare…..
Ra: hn baba thik hai……(pulls his cheek)
shiva's reaction 😳. raavi realises what she did and grows abit awkward whereas shiva smiles. Raavi suddenly notices the cups of tea on the wall of terrace.
Ra: (slapping) humare ruthne manane ke chakar me saari chai thandi ho gyi…..(both chuckles)…ruk main garam kar deti hu…..
Sh: (stopping her) rehne de…vaise bhi late ho gya….so jaate hai…..
Ra: (smiles) thik hai…chal
Both goes to their respective bed and finally consumed their peaceful sleep after venting out their internal turmoil………
subh se sunne me aa raha tha ki kal raavi maafi magane waali hai toh, ye likh diya.......I know jayada acha nhi hai.....par dono ke views rakhe hai......I tried to go realistic......and as I felt that both are at fault so wrote it in such a way that both are realising their mistake......they are not apolozing basically...they listening to each other and clearing their doubts or says the reason behind their anger......
hope you guys liked it......nhi aaya toh bhi bata dena😅
proof read nhi kiya hai....so sorry for mistake.......
THANKS FOR READING
Shiv Shakti
