Arylie FF: Full circle, Chapter 21, note updated on Pg 94 - Page 12

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: lovereading14

lovely update! update soon!

Thanks! Making some minor adjustments to the next one. Should be ready soon.

Appreciate your time and interest in the story. 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Hey, new Arylie fan here! I love your writing style, it forces you to imagine the scene! Wish all this could be shown on TV. Well love your imagination and creativity. Waiting for your next chapter ☺️.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: flippant0_o

Hey, new Arylie fan here! I love your writing style, it forces you to imagine the scene! Wish all this could be shown on TV. Well love your imagination and creativity. Waiting for your next chapter ☺️.


Thanks for the compliment flippant. All credit goes to Arylie. Never have I been so inspired by a couple. More to come, stay tuned!

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Posted: 3 years ago

This was beautiful 😍!! This feels so natural just the way you present a story. That essence is shinning through this story. I totally loved every conversation which took place between each character.❤️👏

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: mltr16

Indeed. They are adorable. They balance each other well. Thanks for reading and leaving a comment every time. I so very appreciate it and the time you spend on Aryan and Imlie's story. 🤗



the pleasure is all mineeee buddy! ❤️ it’s one of my favourite ff to read these days. credit goes to your writing <3
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Posted: 3 years ago

Thank you, Thank you, Thank you for writing 🥳 Aryan's point of view.


It helped fill some of the missing parts from the past chapters. As a reader, I could reflect on Imlie's realization on Aryan. 👏

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Posted: 3 years ago

Take all the leeway you need if it produces such masterpieces. I’m glad you didn’t venture too far away from the onscreen personalities of each character. It seemed reasonable and believable. Please continue writing and entertaining.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Finally caught up with ch1....

So bullying does help, installments baandh lo 🤣


It should be made a criminal offense to use Aryan's original lines .... I read them all with his voice in my head 🤣


You have captured the essence of all characters very well here... It's exactly the way they are in my mind.


Seems like karma serving adi-malini... While all's well in paradise the other side of the quartet. Let's see what this new cancer twist brings into the equation.


Heart goes out to Neel... Poor kid deserves better but sins of the fathers cannot be escaped!


Hoping that I catch up sooner 😆

Edited by SundariP - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: SundariP

Finally caught up with ch1....

So bullying does help, installments baandh lo 🤣


It should be made a criminal offense to use Aryan's original lines .... I read them all with his voice in my head 🤣


You have captured the essence of all characters very well here... It's exactly the way they are in my mind.


Seems like karma serving adi-malini... While all's well in paradise the other side of the quartet. Let's see what this new cancer twist brings into the equation.


Heart goes out to Neel... Poor kid deserves better but sins of the fathers cannot be escaped!


Hoping that I catch up sooner 😆


@bold 🤣 I know right?


Thanks for reading and commenting. 😘🤗 I am hoping you will like what I have in store. 🤗 I have said this before and will say it again, apni Imlie has suffered enough for one lifetime so Sits Maiyya has given her apna golden boy Aryan on a golden platter.

Edited by mltr16 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: mltr16


@bold 🤣 I know right?


Thanks for reading and commenting. 😘🤗 I am hoping you will like what I have in store. 🤗


You didn't bold anything but I'm guessing it was about aru's lines 😆


I'm sure I'll love it... Your writing style is very engaging.

Edited by SundariP - 3 years ago

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