OUR LITTLE SECRET-RECREATING SHIVI (FF)PART 25 PG 64 - Page 18

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

nice update! looks like some family issues will arise for both DevTa and ShiVi in future.. Suman aur Maami chup nahi baithenge 😆

devta ka toh nhi pta but issues for shivi will surely arise......let's see mere dimag me kya idea aata hai😁

hey everyone.....here is part 8 hope you will like this......it is familicious part......wanted to write this because I love family scenes😁😁😁.....

PART 8

‘lekin abhi ek cheez baaki hai’ says shiva. Rest of them looks him confused. ‘kya baaki hai?’ asks dev innocently. Shiva rolls his sleeves and says ‘teri dhulaayi…’ as he takes steps towards dev. Dev says ‘lag gyi lanka😨’ and starts running away. Shiva follows him and catches him. He beats him playfully (you what is boys’ playfully😁……jaise 3 idiots me last me rancho ko pita tha na bikul waise). ‘aree jaan nikalo ge kya uski…….(to raavi) raavi please roko na shiva ko’ says rishita worrying for dev. Raavi, who was laughing at them, says ‘shiva meri tarf se bhi do teen maar’.Rishita’s reaction 😲. Shiva says ‘saale gadhede…..kya kya socha tha teri shaadi ko leke…aur tune mere saare armano pe paani pherr diya…..maa, Bhabhi, gaumbi…..sabne kitne arman sajye the….10 saal baad koi itna bada function hota…..’ and beats hmm. ‘hn dev….maine toh lehnge ki design bhi decide Karli thi tumhari shaadi ke liye…..kitni sundar lagti main uss lehenge me’ says raavi very innocently. Dev-rishita chuckles at her cuteness whereas shiva retorts ‘sundar aur tu…..safed safed gaal aur laal laal hott ke saath bandariya lagti hai….bandariya ….’. Raavi’s reaction 😡😡. ‘bas karo yaar tum dono….’ says dev as he gets up. As soon as he gets up, shiva pulls him into a hug and says ‘congratulations bhai…..’.dev says ‘thank you bhai….’ raavi too hugs rishita and congratulates her. ‘aur tum dono(shivi) ke jo bhi armaan hai na…..apni shaadi me pura kar lena thik’ says dev chuckling. Raavi blushes at the comment whereas shiva distracts them by saying ‘meri shaadi chod abhi apni shaadi ki dawat de….ramesh chacha ke dhabe pe…..uske baad ghr chalege’ says shiva.Shivi’s reaction doesn’t go unnoticed by rishita. All go to the dhaba and enjoy the lunch.

SCENE: same day; afternoon 3pm; pandya niwas.

‘aeee dhara….kahan hai bahar nikal….’ shouts prafulla at top of her voice as she enters pandya niwas with anita. ‘aee kagadi……tu yahan kya kar rahi hai….aur chillana band kar samjhi’ says suman in irritated voice as she comes out of her room (suman returned the day beforeonly). ‘aree suman behn……bulao apni pyaari dhara ko…….subha bade saakhe se kaha tha ki shiva araam se chod dega raavi ko……..par abhi tak nhi lauti meri bachchi…….pata nhi kya kiya aapke jugali bete ne meri phool si bachchi ke saath’ retorts prafulla. Suman gets angry and says ‘aee….zaban samhaal ke hn….’. Dhara, who was drying clothes onterrace, comes down hurriedly after listening the noise. ‘kya hua maa? Kya hua maami?…..aap dono aise chilla kyun rahe ho….’asks dhara being confused. prafulla goes to her and asks ‘tune hi apne jugali devar ko bheja tha na meri bachchi ke saath…..aee bhai..3 baj gye hai…..ab tak nhi lauti….na phone utha rahi hai……..’. dhara gets tensed and calls shiva. shiva too was not picking up the call. ‘shiva bhi phone nhi utha rha’ said dhara being tensed. Gautum returns home for lunch. Dhara asks gautum about shiva but gautum replies ‘dhara maine aaj subh se shiva aur dev…dono ka chehra nhi dekha…..pata nhi kahan hai dono….kuch hua hai kya?…..’. before dhara could say anything, prafulla sitson stairs of aangan and says ‘hey mara bhogilaal…. pata nhi kahan hogi meri bachchi…..uss jungli ka kya bharosa……meri bachchi ko aadhe raaste chodd aayega…..haaye’(dramatically as she alwaysdo). Anita rolls her eyes at her and says ‘bas karo fui…….faltu ka drama mat karo….agr shiva aisa kuch karta toh use ab tak yahan hona chahiye tha na……’. ‘kahin voh dono ghr chodke bhaag toh nhi gye?.....’ says krish with reaction😨. Dhara, gautum and anita’s reaction🤦‍🤦‍🤦‍ and suman’sreaction 🤯 and prafulla’s reaction😡. After observing all thereactions, krish says ‘mujhe jo laga maine bol diya….meri kya galti……’. Gautum slaps his head and says ‘abe gadhede…..kabhi toh kuch soch ke bol….’.‘su kare che dhara…….shiva ko kyun bhejaraavi ke saath…phele hi dono ki bilkul nhi banti……upar se uss bechari ko iss kagdi ne bada kiya hai toh thodsi panauti wale kitanu bhi honge usme…..pta nhi dono ek dusre ka murder na karke bethe ho……’ says suman being concern and savage at same time. ‘maa tu tension mat le….main dev ko call krta hu…..sayad usse pata ho….’ says gaumbi and almostcalls dev when krish says ‘koi fayada nhi hai gaumbi…..😰’. Everyone’sreaction 😕🤨. ‘bhaag gye…. shaadi Karli….’ says krish with the shocking face. Everyone 😦. ‘kya bakke jaa raha hai krish…..majak toh limit me kar……shiva raavi bhagke shaadi…..koi sense bhi hai isme…….’ says anita rolling her eyes. Gaura agrees to her and prafulla and suman shakes their head at krish’s dobiness. But krish, who hasgot the biggest shock of his life, says ‘aree shiva-raavi nhi……vo dekho darwaaze pe…….’ pointing towards door. Everyone turns around and saw dev-rishita standing as a married couple and behind stood shivi. Pandya family😱😵, anita 😲 and prafulla😏. Dev-rishita looks each other and slowly come forward towards the family. Prafulla rushes to raavi and asks ‘aee….raavi beta tu thik haina…..iss rakshash ne tujhe kuch kiya toh nhi…….’. raavi gets angry at her words and says ‘kya bol rhi ho maasi….shiva duniya ka aakhiri insaan hoga jisse mujhe khatra hoga…’shocking prafulla. ‘mera matlab ki vo mujhe kitna bhi ladle jagdle lekin kabhi mujhe hurt nhi karega…’ says raavi to cover up. Gaura come near them and dhara says in shocked state ‘dev ye kya hai?...... tune shaadi Karli……ye?’ pointing rishita. ‘rishita…….rishita seth, janardan seth ki beti……hum ek dusre se do saal se pyaar karte the…..’answers dev. after listening janardan’s name, gaura and suman get shocked ‘janardan…..’ says gautum being shocked ‘aisi bhi naubat aa gyi thi ki tujhe bhaag ke shaadi karni padi….ek baar baat toh karta’ shouts gaumbi. ‘aur tum dono…….tumhe pata tha iss baareme?’ asks dhara pointing shivi. Shiva nods his head in yes. Gautum gets more angry and shouts ‘tum dono paagal ho kya….inki itni badi galti me inka saath diya’. ‘unki galti nhi hai gaumbi……’says dev. ‘gaumbi hume dev rishita ke relationship ke baare me toh pta tha par ye dono shaadi kar lenge ye nhi pta tha’ says raavi making reason. Rishita comes forward and says ‘dhara Bhabhi, gaumbi hum jaaante hai humne galt kiya….par humare paas koi chara nhi tha…..’. ‘hn bhabhi…….main aur rishita do saal se date kar rahe hai……hum batana chahte the par 7-8 mahine phele jo hua uski vajha se bata nhi pa rahe the…..ek din jab main rishita se phone pe baat kar raha tha tab…..’ and narrates the whole story. Whole family getsshocked. Shiva continues saying ‘maine inhe samjhaya tha gaumbi par halat kuch aise ban gye ki-’ but gautum cutshim and says ‘koi bhi halat ho…..tum logo ko hume batana chahiye tha……upar se janardan iss rishte ke khilaaf hai……tumhe koi andaja bhi hai iska anjaam kya hoga……’. ‘dev ka samjh aata haishiva….ye pyaar vyaar secret rakhna chahta hoga aur jo darr raha hoga…..pann tune kuch kyun nhi bataya..…tu toh bata sakta tha na’ says dhara in disappointment. Dhara continues saying ‘aur tu raavi….tu toh mujhe har baat pe salha leti thi, har baat mujhse share karti thi toh aaj kya ho gya…….’. ‘sahi keh rahi hai dhara…tum chaaro ne hume bahut jayada thesh pahunchai hai…….’ says suman being disappointed. Suddenly rishita worriedly say ‘oh god……papa direct yahan, pandya niwas aa rahe hai…..kirti keh rahi hai bahut gusse me hai……’. all gets tensed. ‘koi baat nhi…..sab handle ho jayega…’ assures dev. but gautum retorts saying ‘sab bigad ke ab tu bol raha ki handle ho jayega…….agr aise bhagke shaadi karne ki vajha bta diya hota toh…..’. ‘gaumbi aap shaant ho jao…….hum sab hai na……kuch galt nhi hoga….’ assures shiva. ‘hn gaumbi….sab thik hoga’ says raavi supporting. Prafulla smirks and says ‘lo bhai……pure somnaath me charche the na….suman bhen aur dhara ne kitne ache sanskaar diye hai apne bacho ko………hn……saare sanskaaro ki dhajiyaan udd gyi…….hain bhai’ which makes all furious. Shiva looks at her angrily and raavi notices this. Raavi knew that if her maasi continues to speak ill, shivawon’t spare her. ‘dekh dhara…….kaise tere bete ne tum sabki naak kata di….hein? *laughs*’ continues prafulla.Raavi immediately goes to her and angrily says ‘bas karo maasi maa……..agr shahara nhi de sakti na toh chup raho……please tamsha mat karo……’. Prafulla tries to retort but anita stops her saying ‘kuch nhi bologi aap……aag meghee daalne ke alawa kuch nhi aata aapko….. chalo yahan se………(to raavi) tu aajana ghar time se, thik?’. Raavi nods her head in positivity. After sometime, janardan enters pandya niwas yelling ‘rishita……’

here I end the this part.......one more familicious part, then you will get one more recreated scene....odette you know right😁😁

part 9 page 28

Great update.

Can't wait for the next part

I love fam scenes, and this was very nice looking forward for next update!!!

Originally posted by: Radhi12

Great update.

Can't wait for the next part

Originally posted by: Iktara22

I love fam scenes, and this was very nice looking forward for next update!!!

Originally posted by: sahapallavi

Amazing update💗

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sorry.....posted by mistake

hey guys.....as I told that one more part is familicious, so here it is......happy reading evaryone.....

PART 9

After sometime, janardan enters pandya niwas yelling ‘rishita……’ making everyone alert. ‘rishita….ghar chal’ angrily says janardan making rishita moving closer to dev. ‘tune suan nhi maine kya kaha? Chal ghar’ yells again as janardan moves towards her but gautum stands in b/w and says ‘voh apne ghar par hi hai……shaadi ho chuki hai uski…usse apna aashirwaad dijiye aur iss shadi ko sampan kijiye’. This made janardan more angry and says ‘aeee hatt……nhi manta main iss shaadi ko ………(to rishita)aur tu abhi bhi vahin khadi hai……maine kaha chal ghar’. Janardan goes to rishita and pulls her away but dev frees hehand from janardan’s grip saying ‘biwi hai meri’ and pushes him. janardan agrily looks at dev and tries to go tohim again but shiva, gautum and krish stand in b/w. dev too stands next tothem. ‘iska anjaam bahut bura hoga…..bahut bura…..’ threatens janardan. Shiva rolls his sleeves and says‘aa na…..abhi bta de kya bura hoga?’.‘oho gussa aa gaya…..main jaanta hu ki rishita ko bhagne me tune aur teri iss laila(pointing towards raavi) ne madad ki hai….. shiva tu apna aur iska thoda jayada dhyaan rakh…..’ says janardan provoking shiva. ‘janradan…..’ shouts shiva as he moves towards janardan. But gautum stops him saying ‘nhi shiva…..rishtedaar hain humare aur rishtedaaro ke beech maan-samaan hona chahiye, apmaan nhi…..’ . ‘bilkul gahi kaha gautum tune……’ retorts janardan. ‘aree khade kya ho….naye naye rishtedaar bane hai……zara ache se khaatir daari karo..’ says janardan indicating his goons. But, before both the parties could land in an ugly fight, rishita shouts‘koi aage nhi badega’ comes b/w them. ‘ye aap kya kar rhe ho papa……mere sasuraal wale hai ye….’ says rishita sternly shocking everyone. ‘aur ye shaadi maine apni marji se ki hai aur bhaagi bhi main khud hu…..kisine ne meri help nhi ki hai……..aur hn……agr aapne kuch bhi galt karne ki koshish kin a toh aapko bahut mehnga padega’says rishita making janardan look her in disblief. Rishita continues saying ‘hn papa…main apna age proof aur letter police station chodte hue aayi hu……usme likha hai ki ye shaadi main apni marji se kar rahi hu aur mere sasuraal wao ko aapse khatra hai……aapka ek galt kadam aapki reputation aur bua ke political career par bahut bhaari pad sakta hai….’.whole family looks rishita shockingly whereas rishita looks at shivi who gives an assuring smile.

FLASHBACK

After lunch, all starts leaving for home but suddenly shiva asks ‘bhabhi aap apne saath apne official documents leke aayi ho….?’. Rishita nods her head in yes and says ‘hn par tum kyun puch rahe ho?….’ . ‘bhabhi aapko apna age proof police station me submit karna hoga taaki aap khudko balik(adult) proof kar sako aur aapke papa iss shaadi ko illegal na bol paye’ replies shiva. Raavi too says ‘hn rishita….isse pandya pariwaar legally protected rahe ga…..aur saath me ek letter bhi police station me drop karna jisme ye likha ho ki pandyas ko tumhare papa se khatra hai’. rishita looksat them with hesitation. ‘rishita tension mat lo…ye sirf mere family ki protection ke liye hai…..you know na ki tumhare papa kuch bhi kar sakte hai……please’ says dev. rishita agreesreluctantly to this.

FLASHBACK ENDS

Rishita turns to her father and says ‘sorry papa….par main apne sasural walo ko khatre me nhi daal sakti….’.janardan looks all angrily and says ‘meri beti ko mujhse alag karke tum logo ne bahut badi galti ki hai…..bahut badi galti hisab toh hoga…..barabar hoga…..yaad rakhna….aur tu shiva….’ giving be-more-careful look to shiva. Shiva too gives a look full of rage. Janardan leaves angrily. Rishita gets emotionalseeing him leave. ‘dekho na dev papa bina ashirwaad diye chale gaye’ says rishita crying. Dev tries to console her saying ‘don’t worry rishita…vo ek na ekdin zarror man jayenge…hmm’. ‘aee haalo(chalo)….bahut tamasha ho gya…ab shaadi kar hi li toh.…..aee dhara shaadi ke baad ki jaroori rashme kara de…thik che….main chali apne kamre me’ sayssuman and starts moving towards her room. Rishita goes and stands in front ofher saying ‘maa aasirwaad nhi doge’.Suman sighs and indicate them to do so. They take blessing and suman goes toher room. Dev and rishita goes to dhara and take blessing. ‘bhabhi, please maaf kardo hume’ pleads dev. but dhara being annoyed by all four (shivi and dev-rishita) says ‘kya fark padta hai…..tum log toh vahi karoge jo tumhe sahi lagta…..meri baat kaun suna chahega…. na tum dono (looking at dev-rishita)…natum dono(looking at shivi)’. Saying this, she leaves for preparation of rashms. All four knew that they need to pacify their Bhabhi but how.

SCENE: same day; night; kitchen of pandya niwas

Shiva peeps inside the kitchen and finds dhara and raavi preparing dinner. Raavi notices him. shivagestures asking ‘bhabhi ka mood kaisa hai…?’ asks shiva to raavi replies nodding her head in no. Now dev-rishita also arrives to pacify dhara. All three again peep inside the kitchen again.This time dhara observes them but ignores.‘kaun jayega andar manane?...’ asks dev innocently turns his gaze to shiva.shiva reaction 😲. Shiva nods his head in no and rest two nod in yes. They push shiva inside. Dhara looks at him and ignores. shiva scratches his head not knowing how to pacify his dhara Bhabhi. ‘bhabhi jaldi gussa toh nhi hoti lekin jab hoti hai na toh manane me naani yaad aati hai….’ thinks shiva.Shiva sees raavi working silently. He gets an idea. ‘aee maami ki behn ki beti……tu yahan kya kar rhi hai ab tak……’ says shiva in his rowdy manner. Raavi frowns at him but after a second realizes whathe is trying to do. ‘mujhe laga tha kitu sirf akal se andha hai par aaj pata chala ki tu ankho se bhi andha hai……dikh nhi rha kya main kya kar rhi hu…….’ retorts raavi chuckling. Shiva goes near her and holds her wrist saying‘aee….jayada shaani mat ban samjhi…..chal nikal yahan se, chal’. ‘dhara di dekho na…..ye mujhe kaise ghar se nikal rha hai *fake cries*’ says raavi dramatically as she always does. But there was no response from dhara. This made shivi sadder. ‘bhabhi mujhse itnanaaraaj hai ki ab mujhe rok bhi nhi rhi……’ whishpers shiva sadly. Raavi hears it and looks at him. her heart aches for shiva. She knew what dhara and shiva meant to each other and shiva can’t bear this indifference from her. ‘dhara di maante hai galti hui hai…….uske liye aap daat lo, maar lo….par aise baat karna band mat karo…please..’ says raavi emotionally. But dhara being still angry says ‘main kaun hoti hu tumhe kuch kehne wali, tum log bade ho gye ho…..ab tumhe meri salha ki koi jaroorat nhi hai…..ab shiva tujhe ghr se nikale…….gussa kare main kuch nhi bolungi….lado jitna ladna hai…’ without even seeing shivi. Raavi goes to her and pleads ‘please dhara di, please……..aap ye chup reh kar hume aise saja mat do please……’. But dhara remains silent continuing her work.

(positions: dhara and raavi near the shelves beside the door of kitchen facing towards the shelves. Bothare showing their back to shiva. Shiva is standing near the counter)

Finally, shiva asks emotionally ‘matlab Bhabhi aap humse baat nhi karoge?……na hume gussa karoge aur na saja doge?’. dhara keeps mum. Shiva takes silence in yes. after a complete silence of few seconds, shiva says ‘toh phir thik hai…….’. raavi frowns at this. She looks at him and she gets shocked.

so here I end this part.......guys do tell if I am going off track or if you are not liking it......I will try to improve.......next part is a recreate scene.....hope you'll love that.......

part 10- pg30

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