Musical Yearnings( Completed) - Page 5

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

Very beautiful! We hardly get anything in the show on Raavi doing things for Shiva, so reading something like that always warms my heart ❤️

PART-III

(Ya rabba)

It has been a week since Raavi was in mami's house and ShiVi who didn't even get a glimpse of each other during day sit at night in front of each other on their balconies. Yesterday Shiva asked Raavi to visit him on the store and she agreed.

Today Raavi is getting ready to meet Shiva in the store she had made his favorite lunch which would be a surprise to him.

Here Shiva is waiting for Raavi to come since the morning. He has been checking time again and again.He has managed to send all the brothers elsewhere to get some privacy and only him and kaka were present in the store.

Raavi sneaked from the house so that her massi maa shouldn't know about her whereabouts.

Shiva was doing work in the store when suddenly he saw Disha entering and he went inside the storeroom to avoid her. But Disha saw Shiva and goes behind him in the storeroom.

Raavi enters the store wishes kaka and kaka signs her that Shiva is inside, she goes inside she walks in and stood there shocked......... Land under her feet slipped away she saw Disha hugging Shiva meanwhile Shiva's back was on her side.(Disha did it on purpose seeing Raavi)

Pyar hai ya sazaa, Aye mere dil bata,

Toot ta kyon nahi, Dard ka silsila,

Iss pyar mein ho kaise kaise imtihan,

Yeh pyar likhe kaisi kaisi dastan,

Raavi immediately turns away and rests her back on the wall of tge store keeping a hand on her mouth so that her sniffles are not audible to anyone. She just runs away from there in fraction of seconds without turning around and looking back at them as it would broke her more.

Ya rabba, de de koi jaan bhi agar

Dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar

Ho ya rabba, de de koi jaan bhi agar

Dilbar pe ho na dilbar pe ho na koi asar

Meanwhile Shiva pushes Disha away from him and warns her to stay away and threatens her she got afraid but a smug look appeared on her face as she hS seen Raavi running from there crying and Disha leaves.

Raavi reaches the house and saw everyone smiling and happy she plasters a smile on her face so that her grief shouldn't spoil everyone else's mood she excuses herself from there telling them that she had headache and needs sleep. She goes inside and locks herself.

She comes inside remove her earrings brutally throwing on the floor and same with her bangles, her babgles broke into pieces she opens her hairs make them flow freely and throw all the pins elsewhere. Tears were flowing from her eyes.

Kaisa hai safar waffa ki manzil ka,

Na hai koi hal Dillon ki mushkil ka,

Dhadkan dhadkan bikhri ranjishein,

Sansein sansein tooti bandhishein,

Kahin toh har lamha honthon Pe fariyaad hai,

Kissi ki duniya chaahat mein barbaad hai,

She sits on the floor crying and says,.

"Kyon Shiva.. . .. . .. Kyon kiya aisa.. . .. Itne sare sapne dikhakar.. . . . Sab ikk pal mein tod diye.. . . . . Tu mujhr pyaar karta hain mujhe miss karta hain sab jhooth tha.. . . .. . Sab jhooth tha.. . .. . Aur main. . . . Itni pagal thi.. . Ki.. . . . . sapne sajane lagi sare jindagi bhar ke.. . .. . . .. . "

She stopped choking and sniffling tears not leaving her eyes.

Ya rabba, de de koi jaan bhi agar,

Dilbar pe ho na dilbar pe ho na koi asar,

Ho ya rabba, de de koi jaan bhi agar,

Dilbar pe ho na dilbar pe ho na koi asar,

Shiva was waiting for Raavi to come but she didn't so he becones a bit sad and heads for his day with a frown in his face.

Raavi looks at ring and thinks of there conversation there confession she wanted to shake shiva down and ask him why he did this to her but her love for him his far more than this betrayal from him

Koi na sune sisakti aahon ko,

Koi na dharre tadapti baahon ko,

Aadhi aadhi poori khwahishein,

Tooti phooti sab farmaishein,

Kahin shak hai kahin nafrat ki deewar hai,

Kahin jeet mein bhi shaamil pal pal haar hai,

She goes to the balcony where they had collected immense memories and looks at each and everything she knocks down everything misplaces each thing muttering,

"Sab kuch jhooth tha.. . . Sab kuch.. . .. . .. Mere sapne toot gaye.. . .. . . "

Ya rabba, de de koi jaan bhi agar,

Dilbar pe ho na dilbar pe ho na koi asar,

Ho ya rabba, de de koi jaan bhi agar,

Dilbar pe ho na dilbar pe ho na koi asar,

She bend on her knees and cries,

"Sab sapne toot gaye.. . .. . . Raavi tu itni badi bewakoof kio hai... ....koii bhi bewakoof bana deta hai.. . .. . .. Koii bhi teri feelings ka majak bana deta hai. . .. . .. . . Kio.... . .. . "

Ho Pyar hai ya sazaa,Aye mere dil bata,

Toot ta kyon nahi, Dard ka silsila? Ho-o,

It was night and Shiva was waiting for Raavi to call but she didn't so he called her phone was ringing but she didn't pick up he thought she must be busy.

Meanwhile Raavi was sitting on the floor with her head on the bed tears in her eyes she looked at the phone Shiva calling her face had a sorrowful smile and she kept on staring on his name.

Na pooch dard mandon se,

Hansi kaissi khushi kaissi,

Musibat sar pe rehti hai,

Kabhi kaissi kabhi kaissi,

After some time he goes to the balcony and calls her again but no response he saw the door of her room from the balcony was open so

he tried to peep into but it was dark he was hell worried as why she is not responding as now he was able to listen the ring of the phone.

Raavi says,

"Saath rehna bhi nahi chahta aur chod bhi nahi raha Shiva.. . .. . . Itna kio khel raha hai mere saath.. . .. . "

Ho rabba, rabba,

Rabba ho-o-o,

Ho-o-o rabba.

Shiva was very much worried as she didn't even visited the store and now also she is not picking up the phone so he went outside tge house secretly and sneaked inside Raavi's room through her balcony he was shocked to see the disheveled condition of the place different scenarios were hitting his mind about her safety he shiveringly entered the room and found it dark he than moved forward and saw broken bangles, earrings and raavi's dupatta on the floor he got more scared than his eyes landed on Raavi was digging her nails on her arms brutually which could bleed anytime she was sitting on the floor her head on the bed resting and some deied tears on her cheeks.

Shiva runs near her and hugs her Raavi was in his embrace like a dead body. Shiva shaked her but she didn't responded and he like talking to a little child says,

"Raavi kya hua kuch bol.. . .. Koii aaya tha kya.. . .. Kisi ne kuch bola kya.. . .. Bol na main bilkul nahi chodunga jisne bhi tujhe hurt kiya.. . .. "

Raavi comes in senses and look at him a lone tear escaped her eyes and she says,

"Pyaar toh tha Shiva....... Jo maine mehsoos kiya tha......... Jo hamare beech tha....... Phir kio kiya........ "

Shiva gets shocked.

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Hey guys, this was the 3rd part there will be one more part again. Hope so you all like it. Do give suggestion and give your views on the same.

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Eagerly waiting for next part. Beautiful written. Excited to know what happens next.

Originally posted by: sandrasheron

Eagerly waiting for next part. Beautiful written. Excited to know what happens next.

Will update soon......

ya rabba really hits different for shivi😭😭😭

being a fan of sad songs, this was the most loved part by me💕

grt update dear.....waiting for next🤗🤗

Originally posted by: virangna2005

ya rabba really hits different for shivi😭😭😭

being a fan of sad songs, this was the most loved part by me💕

grt update dear.....waiting for next🤗🤗

I am also a fan of sad songs dytto❣️❣️

Ya Rabba is a classic for me when it comes to sad songs. 🥺

You have described Raavi's pain and hurt so beautifully and naturally. My poor girl is so broken💔💔

On the other side I am glad Shiva did feel that something is wrong and went to meet her. M sure he will handle her.❤️

I am loving this story more and more with each update and your song selection is 😍

Excited to read further.

Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

Ya Rabba is a classic for me when it comes to sad songs. 🥺

You have described Raavi's pain and hurt so beautifully and naturally. My poor girl is so broken💔💔

On the other side I am glad Shiva did feel that something is wrong and went to meet her. M sure he will handle her.❤️

I am loving this story more and more with each update and your song selection is 😍

Excited to read further.

Next part will be there soon.....

Hope so you will like it.........

Just finished reading both chapters, 🥰😍totally amazing👏, can wait for your next update 💕🥰

Originally posted by: Luvs_SanIsh

Just finished reading both chapters, 🥰😍totally amazing👏, can wait for your next update 💕🥰

Hope you like it.......

Glad that you liked my content❣️❣️