Arylie FF: Full circle, Chapter 21, note updated on Pg 94 - Page 7

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Posted: 3 years ago
#61

Will do. I am guessing that you have gauged the storyline and which way this is leading to from the title. I just wanted to mention, that I see death up close and personal everyday. Priorities, emotions change so quickly as it approaches. Its a reality. Nothing matters when you are staring death in the face. Some lucky people get a chance to work on their relationships but many don't. Anytime, I see a success story, my sad heart rejoices. So in my own fantasyland, 😉 I am allowing this scattered family to pick up the pieces of their lives as they mourn the illness of one of their own. Time does heal many wounds.

I absolutely understand not wanting Imlie to adopt Neel. But to her, to Aryan, Neel is innocent of his parents actions. And it will be out of character for them to refuse to steady and steer this sinking ship, especially when implored.

Please stay tuned. We know the destination, but watching them get there, maybe interesting. Chapter 4 will be up soon! I so appreciate you reading the story and your feedback. 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: mltr16

Will do. I am guessing that you have gauged the storyline and which way this is leading to from the title. I just wanted to mention, that I see death up close and personal everyday. Priorities, emotions change so quickly as it approaches. Its a reality. Nothing matters when you are staring death in the face. Some lucky people get a chance to work on their relationships but many don't. Anytime, I see a success story, my sad heart rejoices. So in my own fantasyland, 😉 I am allowing this scattered family to pick up the pieces of their lives as they mourn the illness of one of their own. Time does heal many wounds.

I absolutely understand not wanting Imlie to adopt Neel. But to her, to Aryan, Neel is innocent of his parents actions. And it will be out of character for them to refuse to steady and steer this sinking ship, especially when implored.

Please stay tuned. We know the destination, but watching them get there, maybe interesting. Chapter 4 will be up soon! I so appreciate you reading the story and your feedback. 🤗

Waiting ..... 😁😁😁
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Posted: 3 years ago
#63

"If he refuses this time, I am going to divorce him."


This line and Imlie's mental facepalm cracked me up in the middle of that serious conversation. 🤣 Trust Malini to be as delusional as ever. How is a divorce at this point going to change anything at all? Aditya’s behavior wasn't surprising at all.


Though the best bit for me were the AryLie bits. The level of comfort in their relationship hasn't changed one bit in five years. The man is as charming as ever, maybe a little more. 😆And while that was a super-cute discussion around the proposal, I'm wondering how much torment did he actually have to go through before the platonic phase passed. 🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#65

I salute you with from the bottom of my 💜

You could just imagine yourself watching how life was moving forward but a innocent child was crushed between two people who could not stand each other for a second with having memories of the past between them, One turn to drink 🥤 why the other person was haunted with her past crimes and paying the price of being continuously 😷 all the time and in pain for what she had done to separate two people one been her young sister and the other her stranger husband who had a ounce of feeling for her💔.

The marriage of Aryan and Imlie was out of the blues but 👌 because he finally understood Imlie and what she stands for when it comes to the matter of the heart and family and how a innocent child had brought a 😊 in her life even after everything that had occurred she will always be concerned for her love ones.

Imlie found her soulmate in ASR.

My god just read chapter 4 the flow of the story and the understanding between these two people is amazing.

Two people who found a ground to work on and understand each other and come together. Aryan as see Imlie at her lowest and he was the helping hand that stood by her and guide her but never force his opinion but let her take the decision. Small steps had to be taken if the partnership was going to work each had baggage and the communication had to be clear and understanding if it went forward 100% was asked from both of them.

Thank you for writing the story in English 🤗 my Hindi is not very good.


please continue soon


HAPPY NEW YEAR 🥳

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Posted: 3 years ago
#66

I just posted Chapter 4. Please enjoy! Thank you so much for your comment.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#67

Thanks

This is in my weekend reading list❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: mltr16

Patience, more tags

Thanks for tagging.....amazing as always.....update soon... 😊❤️
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Posted: 3 years ago
#69

Hellooo, thanks for the tag 👍🏼

I was waiting for your update and I should be going to sleep, but I was too excited so I read it

Love the progression of the story, everything is starting to fall into place now.

Be a sieve not a sponge - thought-provoking quote.

Aryan and Imlie have intellectually stimulating conversations and this has created their strong bond, their emotional connection is so sweet.

Glad that Imlie also helped him to overcome his thirst for revenge, they are both becoming better versions of themselves - a true partnership.

Their gradual bonding and how you peeled the layers that make up ASR. Imlie's awe at his first smile and then laugh is so endearing.

Machu picchu - did you just curse at me LOL

Ye Aryan bhai kaafi shaatir aadmi hai, his carefully crafted plan to confess through asking Imlie to narrate the story of the Sattyakaam is well thought through.

Love his gentle, thoughtful and direct confession. Nothing flowery and OTT. ❤️

Thanks for sharing xx

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I love your comments, Zara2021. You analyze the chapter so well. 🤗

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