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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

Uski chuppi mein maine

ek shor dekha hai

Na mein uski

Mohabbat sailaab dekha hai

Kaise hataun main nighaein,

Uske muskurate chehre se....

Absaar mein uske maine;

Dard payab dekha hai ...



Kaisi ho meri jaan? Thik ho na? Tum khush toh ho na... Mujhe pata hai dard ho raha hai par main kya karu, tumhari zidd se kaise ladun? Meri jaan main apni jaan se kaise ladun? Par tum chinta mat karna, main thik hun. Ji raha hun hamari yaadon ke sahare jaise aaj tak jeeta aaya hun dard ke sahare... Par hamari yaadon mein misthaas aur hasi bhi hai, bas gam hai toh iss baat ka hai ki jo sapne sanjoye they maine tumhare saath, usse tootta hua har roz dekhta hun par phir bhi kuch nahi kar paata hun. Wo sapne thode tootte hai aur thoda sa main par shayad ab tukdo mein jeene ki aadat ho gayi hai... Aur shayad waise hi tumse al..ag reh..ne ki aa..da..t ho jayegi....


Zindagi badi lambi hai, Katt jayegi

Tere saath na sahi, tere yaadon ke sahare hi mitt jayegi

Zaruri nahi har pal tera saath ho

Meri khawaish bas itni si hai ki

Jab mohabbat shabd labon par aaye

Tujhe Mera hi naam yaad aaye

Tere gaalon par laali aur hoton par muskaan aaye


~Tumhara aur sirf tumhara Abhi






P.S. Here is my Goldie post. Your guys wish is my command and I hope you likes the poetries and little of that diary entry.


Noor🤗

I woke up to this, how wonderful this is. Abhi will truly live with her memories.


That line of him not being able to fight with her stubborn ess.This was so lovely 😍💝

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Posted: 3 years ago
#22

U have beautifully potrayed Abhimanyu's state

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Posted: 3 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445

Just woooowww woooowww post


Hehehehehe... I am glad you liked it 🤗🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Eternized_Blues


Noor🤗

I woke up to this, how wonderful this is. Abhi will truly live with her memories.


That line of him not being able to fight with her stubborn ess.This was so lovely 😍💝


Amnuuu, good morning to you 🤗


He will... He can live in pain if that's what she wants, even unknowingly. All he will ever want her to be in comfort and if it comes to that he is not her sukoon... He is going to fight his ownself to protect her. Abhimanyu love for his Akshu is something that can never put into words


I am glad you liked that... That line is my personal favourite from the letter too 😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: anuandavi

U have beautifully potrayed Abhimanyu's state


Thank you so much 🤗🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Congratulations on turning Goldie.. you wrote a golden piece again 🤗 looking forward for more like this coz you write what we all feel...but many of us are not able to express. Thank you for that...🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: atulya1

Congratulations on turning Goldie.. you wrote a golden piece again 🤗 looking forward for more like this coz you write what we all feel...but many of us are not able to express. Thank you for that...🤗


Thank you 🤗🤗i am glad I am able to put words of feelings of so many people ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I have tears and heartache reading this. I want to hug this Abhi and go and get that Akshu and hand her over to him or just lock them up together..hide them from this whole world.

Your poems your letters ...they have my heart. I will write a detailed review on the poems a bit later. My emotions are all over the place.

I lost my bestie last year....he was more then a bestie....by the time I realized it was toooooo late. Hope he's happy where ever he is and knows how I feel about him. Reading Akshus poem, I can understand the void she must be feeling. My besties void is something I live with everyday. He will never comeback ( I pray for a miracle..how naive) there will never be another video call. No one is him no one I can share my deepest secrets with. No one who can make me laugh like him. They say move on...how do I move on.

Yes I am living my life. Fullfilling my responsibilities towards my family etc etc meeting and laughing and enjoying with my friends and family...BUT he and his thoughts are always there. I feel guilty when I'm happy coz he's no more.



Sorry I couldn't stop myself

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Posted: 3 years ago
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OMG Noor, how did I miss this one.. or did I miss it? I'm so lost on how many of your posts that I've breezed thru for later reading with a reserved comment that now I just don't know which ones they are anymore.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nikki_love

I have tears and heartache reading this. I want to hug this Abhi and go and get that Akshu and hand her over to him or just lock them up together..hide them from this whole world.

Your poems your letters ...they have my heart. I will write a detailed review on the poems a bit later. My emotions are all over the place.

I lost my bestie last year....he was more then a bestie....by the time I realized it was toooooo late. Hope he's happy where ever he is and knows how I feel about him. Reading Akshus poem, I can understand the void she must be feeling. My besties void is something I live with everyday. He will never comeback ( I pray for a miracle..how naive) there will never be another video call. No one is him no one I can share my deepest secrets with. No one who can make me laugh like him. They say move on...how do I move on.

Yes I am living my life. Fullfilling my responsibilities towards my family etc etc meeting and laughing and enjoying with my friends and family...BUT he and his thoughts are always there. I feel guilty when I'm happy coz he's no more.



Sorry I couldn't stop myself


Hi sweetieeee 🤗🤗


First and foremost, never be sorry about what you feel and how you feel.


I understand how you heal... So I can never ask you to move on. Because I know how it is and it's such an easy job to say but to do that, it's harder.


A void can never be filled. Toh I am not going to give you any consolation that it will. But one day, you will wake up and you will see the scars not paining anymore. Because until then, they will start shining as a gold medal and will tell stories about your victory over the demons of your own self.


I know life is not easy... Who knows it better than me but believe me, if I am able to write these or become whoever and whatever I am today is because of the scars I borne. Of the nights I cried. And the days I lost hope. I am just a 12th student. I have not achieved something big in my life and to be very honest, people will not take what I have done as some sort of achievement but it is for me.


So , my love, I can only assure you one thing, the tougher the days get, the more tough we become. You know the best thing about bad times? They teach us to value the good things in our life.


Never be guilty of laughing or smiling or being happy. Because believe me, a tear in your eyes will kill him more because he would not be there to wipe it. Help yourself so that you help him.


Whenever you smile, he twinkles a lot more. He is still there. Dhruv taara ban kar aaj bhi raah dikhayega.


Ro lo, Mann kare toh achi yaadon ko yaad kar khush ho lo, kuch ladayi ke pal yaad kar ladte ladte phir ro lo but please.... Pleaseee don't bottle up your emotions.


You are his moon. And he will always want you to shine more ❤️


Take your time to write a review... Even if you don't, I understand 🤗but take care ✨


And I am sorry if I was out of line even for a second here

Edited by ishqdinoorhai9 - 3 years ago

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