I believed the lie because you said so!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Uski chuppi mein maine

ek shor dekha hai

Na mein uski

Mohabbat sailaab dekha hai

Kaise hataun main nighaein,

Uske muskurate chehre se....

Absaar mein uske maine;

Dard payab dekha hai ...



Kaisi ho meri jaan? Thik ho na? Tum khush toh ho na... Mujhe pata hai dard ho raha hai par main kya karu, tumhari zidd se kaise ladun? Meri jaan main apni jaan se kaise ladun? Par tum chinta mat karna, main thik hun. Ji raha hun hamari yaadon ke sahare jaise aaj tak jeeta aaya hun dard ke sahare... Par hamari yaadon mein misthaas aur hasi bhi hai, bas gam hai toh iss baat ka hai ki jo sapne sanjoye they maine tumhare saath, usse tootta hua har roz dekhta hun par phir bhi kuch nahi kar paata hun. Wo sapne thode tootte hai aur thoda sa main par shayad ab tukdo mein jeene ki aadat ho gayi hai... Aur shayad waise hi tumse al..ag reh..ne ki aa..da..t ho jayegi....


Zindagi badi lambi hai, Katt jayegi

Tere saath na sahi, tere yaadon ke sahare hi mitt jayegi

Zaruri nahi har pal tera saath ho

Meri khawaish bas itni si hai ki

Jab mohabbat shabd labon par aaye

Tujhe Mera hi naam yaad aaye

Tere gaalon par laali aur hoton par muskaan aaye


~Tumhara aur sirf tumhara Abhi






P.S. Here is my Goldie post. Your guys wish is my command and I hope you likes the poetries and little of that diary entry.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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good one na 😆
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Noorrrr how do you write so deep and beautiful poetry

Girl Aaj se you're my Abhimanyu 🥺❤

I could imagine those beautiful lines in Abhi's voice

It looks like Abhi's letter to Akshu it has all unsaid feelings that Abhi is carrying inside him right now

Amazing 🤗

Congratulations meri Abhimanyu on turning Goldie ❤

Posted: 3 years ago
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Omg .... Kya likha hey yaar....too good 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Another beautiful one noor. That paragraph in the middle was so good too. You had me at meri jaan. And the way his voice was breaking at the end uff. Sidha dil pe laga yaar. Who knew heartbreak could look so beautiful too? Thank you for listening to our crazy wishes🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: 2TheMoonAndBack

Another beautiful one noor. That paragraph in the middle was so good too. You had me at meri jaan. And the way his voice was breaking at the end uff. Sidha dil pe laga yaar. Who knew heartbreak could look so beautiful too? Thank you for listening to our crazy wishes🤗


I am glad you liked it Ritu.... These are old ones and I never knew they will fit into our AbhiRa ever


I can't let go of meri jaan... From the time I heard Harshad say it today


Heartbreaks are beautiful and HC and Pranali make it look etheral. I was floored by their performance ❤️


I am aiming for Akshu poetry ... Have written one part of her life but I am in a mess right now after writing that and confused how to describe her love for Abhimanyu... I hope aaj ek aur kar poetry de paaun tum sabko... Goldie ban ne ki khushi 🤗


Your guys wishes are my command 😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Amru4krish

Omg .... Kya likha hey yaar....too good 🤗


Thank you so much Amru 🤗I am glad you liked it ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zenab78

Noorrrr how do you write so deep and beautiful poetry

Girl Aaj se you're my Abhimanyu 🥺❤

I could imagine those beautiful lines in Abhi's voice

It looks like Abhi's letter to Akshu it has all unsaid feelings that Abhi is carrying inside him right now

Amazing 🤗

Congratulations meri Abhimanyu on turning Goldie ❤


With your guys love, I am able to 🤗


I am honoured to be your Abhimanyu, Zenu ❤️

Me too... One day I want to write something and wanted to see Harshad sir reciting those .. I know crazy hai but ☺️


A letter he will never send 😭


Thank you so much Zenuuuuu 🤗🤗I am so glad you liked it ❤️✨✨


Yes!!! I turned Goldie

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Congrats on becoming goldie my golden Noor!!!🤗

Another awesome one from you. Looking forward to such treats from you.
I loved the last para❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9


I am glad you liked it Ritu.... These are old ones and I never knew they will fit into our AbhiRa ever


I can't let go of meri jaan... From the time I heard Harshad say it today


Heartbreaks are beautiful and HC and Pranali make it look etheral. I was floored by their performance ❤️

They were just made to do Abhimanyu and Akshara…. Nobody could have done justice to these characters like they are doing.

I am aiming for Akshu poetry ... Have written one part of her life but I am in a mess right now after writing that and confused how to describe her love for Abhimanyu... I hope aaj ek aur kar poetry de paaun tum sabko... Goldie ban ne ki khushi 🤗


Your guys wishes are my command 😳

Me in purple

Heartbreaks are in indeed beautiful. ❤️ When told in a right way

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