Abhimanyu Birla: A man who is still a boy - Page 2

I can not even wrap my head around this idk-what-I-should-even-call. no like no exaggeration there i forgot how many times i read this. especially "life is so monotonous" and "ek pari ayi..kwabon si sundar ayi" parts. okay i need a moment to compose my thoughts just give me like...idk some time? this is just....idek bro just give me some time ok

okay first thing's first, where the f...HECK have you been? no seriously, where WERE you?! How did you not start writing these way before?! what were you even thinking noor? I feel like smacking you so hard right now you have no idea. i'm so mad and so so so happy at the same time. I feel like i'm having a goddamn mood swing.

I knew you could write. you analysis, your capability to understand the characters to such depths is something i have always admired about you. But then you posted that arohi poetry and i was kind of taken aback that you could ace that as well. but never, and i repeat, NEVER in my wildest dreams did i imagine that you would write something THIS well. i'm sorry, but i really didn't. bro this is like a professional kavita or whatever you wanna call it. like do you even know how talented you are, woman? I don't think you do. I really don't, otherwise you would have posted these long time back.

I loved every bit of it. like every single bit. but i'm gonna mention two parts that literally tugged at my heart:

1.

Darr lagta tha ki jab ye toota hua dil kisi ko dunga

Toh kya pata wo choor choor kar de

Ya kya pata sirf ek hisse se wo pyaar kare..

you know people can talk about their fears, put it into words, and just own up to it. but this was not just speaking of trepidation - this felt like i was literally peeking into abhimanyu's heart and actually seeing the terror. it's like he laid his heart in front of us to have a look. so transparent, so beautiful!

2.

Dekha maine usko

Aur dhadkne kuch aisi badhi

Ki maano

Fisli wo par gir main Gaya

Sambhli wo par sambhal main Gaya

i don't think i have ever read something more beautiful on about their first meeting than this. the moment i read this bit, my thoughts went back to the lag ja gale scene and how abhi ran and how she turned around and losther balance and he wrapped his arms around her oh-so-protectively and looked like he was intoxicated. the whole scene itself is very close to my heart but after reading this part, noor, i think there is this new-found depth that just made a permanent place in my mind and i don't think it would ever fade off - such is the power of your words!! Honestly idek what i'm saying because i'm truly speechless.

i want to tlak about every single part but if i do that i would end up writing a novel LOL. but just know that your talent blew me away today. I'm so fortunate to have known you and been able to read such a masterpiece.

P.S. I kind of imagined all of us sitting in an auditorium as you read this whole thing to us and trust me the image was just too wholesome to express in words. Love you meri jaan!! I want one on akshu now😳

wowwwww!!!! that was the most beautiful piece of poetry i have ever read!!! abhimanyu became an open book by the time i was done reading. so beautiful. please give us more

RESSSSSS!!!! OMG OMG OMG YOU POSTEDDDDDDDD!!!! SORRY NOOR I WAS BUSY THE WHOLE DAY TODAY!!!

OMG Noor you posted a poem on Abhi… Ok I’m reserving this spot to come back and write…I’m so busy trying to get my OS done… I think I just need to stop coming in to IF to check cause I end up staying for much longer than I planned and I’m just procrastinating away….

I am at a loss for words. Sach mein what was thatttt.😲

You described his every phase of life to perfection. I dont think even writers could do such a great job.

This post just gave me a different pov to abhi, his character,his childhood, his pain, his fears, how he felt that he was finally healing the first time he heard akshara, how his heart just automatically got fused with hers, so much so that when she fell, he lost his balance and when she composed herself, it was like he just untangled all the messy threads of his life. How did you even write that psrt so beautifully.

And then the heart break oh my my my. If piercing something sharp into yuor heart was a picture, i am sure i would fine this poetry in there. The analogies, the examples and just the pciture you painted in front of my eyes is somrthing beyond beautiful. I loved how he said this is a way to pay back for the times she had saved his life and thats why he is marrying someone else but his every breath will start and end with akshara.

You even took us to a walk to his childhood, something that we r not aware of and now rhat i read it, i have a mkre comprehensive pic of abhi and the reason why he is what and how he is.

This was just pureeeee magic noor. No words. Just want to salute you. Please never stop writing. Ilove youuuuuuuu🤗

Originally posted by: borntorule12

It requires a lot of analysis to think like this... Good job ❤️ btw, I see your predictions are coming true. I am waiting for your episode till date analysis and shortcomings pointing out and another set of wishlist ❤️

Ikr?? Idk how she wrote something so deep. Its like someone is just explaining abhis character word by word, analyzing it deeply hut also with simplicity.

I would honestly request anyone who have a doubt or confusion about abhis character, to read this poetry. Everything will be crystal clear

Okay guys what are these?! I am so so happy and emotional reading it 🤧 like yeah I had an inkling ki the poem turned out good but such response... You guys are doing things to my heart ❤️

I will be replying to you all now and Mush and Ritu (aur meri Jaanniiii aaram se padh par jaldi se apna one shot de jaldi) ... What are you guys even? You guys made me cry and laugh together when I read your reviews...

Gosh, I am so so glad Harshad did YRKKH because of not for him I would not have made an IF account but more than that, thank you bhagwan ji that we all decided to watch it and even come to IF because I don't think so what would I have done here without you guy. Three hip hurray to us guys 🥳

And to everyone who liked and left a comment, you know I love you all 🤗

Originally posted by: Mushfika_01

I can not even wrap my head around this idk-what-I-should-even-call. no like no exaggeration there i forgot how many times i read this. especially "life is so monotonous" and "ek pari ayi..kwabon si sundar ayi" parts. okay i need a moment to compose my thoughts just give me like...idk some time? this is just....idek bro just give me some time ok

You guys should give me some time.... How am I even supposed to reply to these reviews now?

You guys are really making me emotional now and happy at the same time....

Ahhh ... Ek pari aayi... Khwabon si sundar aayi... I am not going to lie but I really loved my title bit for Akshara and their love story 🙈🙈

Take your time ... Just give me a steamy AbhiRa one shot 😉