AbhiRa OS: Second Chances - Page 8

Originally posted by: RinSimGur

So I love this and you’re a damn good writer! Read the whole thing in one sitting!

I have no idea how you ended up reading an OS THAT long in one sitting because it was legit 23 page on google doc, but I'm just so happy that you did 🥳 thank you so much doll🤗

Originally posted by: bumbushi

This was Amazing!😊

Thanks a lot😳

Originally posted by: Amru4krish

Omg mush..... What was it yaar..... Brilliant ...... I just couldnt stop it midway..... This is one of the bestest Abhira OS i have read till now....

That was really a sunday treat..... 🤗🤗

Why cant they take the show like this.... This Abhimanyu in your OS is just top notch....

Thanks a ton for this master piece ❤️

Amru yaar

Thank you so so much for taking the time to read and comment something so sweet! Love you sweetheart🤗

Originally posted by: sheet_leher

I cannot cannot tell you how happy this story made me. I was scared to read it, because then it would be over and idk when we'll get another one (selfishly asking you for more stories in this way :P 💜)

I wish, I WISH you had been the writer of the show, and it progressed in this way. Every scene, every part was fabulous. My heart was filled with all sorts of emotions. Happiness,despair, hurt and finally...love. love does cross all hurdles, doesn't it.

Abhi and Akshu were brilliant. Their emotions came across so well. The hurt and the pain, amazing.

I'm gonna read it again and again. Thank you...thank you for this

bro!!! I missed your comment!!! Idk how!!! i just came across your second comment on page 2 and i'm like did i miss something? and ran back to page 1 and felt like banging my head. stupid me! i'm so sorry!!

This is my reply to your comment: (Thank you, thank you, thank you ) x 0934094802184093 + (Love you)^393081032801

Tum log aaj mujhe rula ne ka theka laga rakkha hai, samajh gayi mein. Thank you is never enough for such comments so idek what else to say. just the fact that you said you would read it again made my heart a freaking puddle. I wish i could crush you with a bear hug right now. but for now, we will have to do with the bombarding of virtual flying kisses that will hit right at your face:

Love you so much 🤗

P.S. Please lmk how i should be addressing you😳

Originally posted by: sheet_leher

I keep reading this over and over ....

Can just send you hugs and wishes... Thanks for posting your story ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

how you are reading a 7910 words OS over and over again is beyond my understanding but this is legit me right now after reading this:

Originally posted by: 2TheMoonAndBack

RES WTFFFFFF😲

LMFAO Aa gayi shaitan!!

btw, tu aur tera "Res". always reserves a spot on the thread and then writes an essay comment in another post🤣

Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

Mush, this OS and you felt you will disappoint us? Kahan rehti hai tu ... Ghar aa kar maarungi tere ko main

@bold: LMAOOOOO idk why but yeh padke mujhe bass yahi khayal aya:

🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: 2TheMoonAndBack

Noor how are you even sane after reading this?!?! Please gove me some advice i’m going crazy over here and idek how to even structure a proepr sentence for this OS WTFFF WAS THIS😲

Originally posted by: Mushfika_01

@bold: LMAOOOOO idk why but yeh padke mujhe bass yahi khayal aya:

🤣🤣🤣

Tom and jerryyyy!!!!!! Adorbs ❤️❤️

Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

And where should I start with? Your writing have me holding my breath all throughout. The rejection scene was so so real. I could totally imagine it like a movie is playing in my mind.

How do I explain what I felt in span of 30 minutes ( I read it twice 🙈)

I am seriously seriously speechless 😶

But will try to convey my feelings.

When he heard how it's a mistake, all I could think of how crushed, destroyed, small, lost he would have felt? The one person in whose hand he gave his heart, trusted with all he has, decided to break it, not once, not twice but freaking 5 times. And to be proven as a person who was nothing but delusional to come to think of it as love? When I was reading it, you know, I felt, how many times he would have questioned himself? Did he thought he forced a girl to accept his love? Did he think he is a lot like all those guys who says everything is fair in love and war and then the news that comes? How much and how many thoughts ran wild in his mind? Just how many deaths he died while still breathing?

And then I get Akshara.... Girl, my heart goes out to you as well. Even though I was mad at you but the writer made sure it does not last long. Nd my heart melted for you. How many wars you fought with yourself as you uttered those words you so so abhorred? That kills your very self? You crushed your heart with your own hands and you can't even complain nor cry... All you can do is let the pieces Peirce your heart and let the blood flow.

How selfish of you Aarohi? I wish you have given me a slap scene too. I know violence is wrong but Akshara maarti toh majja aata

Nd Abhimanyu Birla, you have my heart. There is nothing that can defy the love I carry for you and here, in Mush writing, I love you more and more.

Will it be wrong if I say I found it sexy? Nd damn the chills that ran down my spine... I can totally imagine Harshad nailing these scene. Mush, I am once again requesting you, send your CV to Rajan Shahi. Plesse please 🥺 you gives us depth.

And damn, the beauty of confession... Pehle maine socha iss security guard ne Akshu ko entry kaise de di but then Birla house ke kaand ke baad sabko yaad hi hogi apni Akshu.

Thank you for giving us one beautiful and realistic confession. I can't thank you enough for that. I must say, thank you for being a writer Mush and even a bigger thank you for sharing your write ups with us.

The washroom scene need a separate post ;)

Okay

you have no right to make me feel the way i am feeling rn with your words😲. what the hell was that?😲 Noor?😲 Never had someone analyzing my OS so aptly.

@black: that was so thorough and so beautiful. precisely why I made sure i spend a good amount of time writing akshara's emotions after saying words like 'it was a mistake' and why she said something like 'he owns me' to arohi.

@blue: honestly, just write a poetry on akshu already!!! what the heck, noor. i feel like more than your OS/FF/SS, i'm a fan of your kavitayein. I mean if you can trigger those emotions in me with something on Arohi, i don't even wanna imagine how good abhi and akshu's ones will be.

Red:

Knowing how close abhi's character is to your heart in the show, I actually feel so honored reading this. This truly meant the world.

@purple: Okay you need to let me calm the heck down. you keep throwing all these mithas bhara shabd at me without even giving me the time to compose myself. Kya yaar, how are you so sweet!!! Tujhe to mein tere ghar pe aake bone-crushing jhappiyaan deti hoon, tu ruk zara!

@green: When i was writing the confession scene, i didn;t know it would be loved by so many of you. Thank you so much Noor. I literally feel like ripping my heart out of my chest and show you what you just did to it with your comment😆 i'm serious. I love love LOVEEEE it so so much. Definitely going to my fav comment list. Love you baby🤗