AbhiRa OS: Second Chances - Page 7

Originally posted by: Zenab78

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Thanks for the sunday treat Mush 😘❤

I am running back to read now 🏃‍♀️🏃‍♀️

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Okay I'm done with reading and it's was long and I don't mind it at all... I read it in a single go coz I don't have patience to take a break and then read next part

Mush I'm fan of your writing style ❤❤

I could imagine it all like a movie in my head while reading

So coming to OS now

She gave it back to Aarohi and that confession He owns me it's beautiful 😭❤

Aarohi is so cruel...I doubt her medical degree how could she leave her like that😡

Then comes our Hero and he knows how to take care of his lady love😎

That breathing exercise part was lovely yr

Then she ran but sweetie pie you are already caught red handed by your Mr. Methidana😆

She ran to Ladies washroom thinking he won't come inside... This girl is mistaken or she likes Underestimating Abhi

Then comes most important part the revelation

He knows how to handle her lies... Their conversation in this part is fab ❤❤

Now half of the things were clear but he left and it was much needed for Akshara to get out of her Devi mode

Then Conversation between sister was 🔥🔥🔥

Arohi got what she deserves and the only good thing she did was to tell remaining truth without being asked 🤪

Abhi has all my heart he is always there to protect her from cruel world outside there ❤❤

Akshu got her brain back I was happily dancing after that

Then comes the most amazing part of OS her confession

She did something Abhi couldn't imagine and it was a dream come true moments for him after all poor boy always dreamt of having his lady love in his room

He acted dumb for few minutes that was cute😆

She asked for second chance and he needed a reason

She was trying best to save her love yous for God knows whom but finally she confessed

He kept asking and she kept repeating it for him😳😳Can we get a scene like this on our screens some day 😭😭 It's was wonderful

Then finally they sealed their love with a beautiful kiss ☺️☺️

His heart was full of love and he would be happiest man alive at that moment

Akshu finally has someone who can give her love she needs ❤❤

Fabulous OS Mush 🤗🤗

Sorry for all the threats that I gave but it was worth it 🤣

I can give you free threats on daily basis if I get to read this kinda masterpeices in a month 😛

Love Love ❤️

OH.MY.GOD!!! Meri Zenu ne to puri ki puri essay hi likh dali😲 Pagal, come here

@Red: Bro about the "he owns me part", I think i had spent a good chunk of time thinking how her confession should be to arohi that would portray a balance between her overwhelming sentiments and rage. i didn't want it to be just a "i love abhi" because one, i didn't want it to be too direct and two, that would not have been impactful. I'm happyou you mentioned about that part and liked it😳

@green: LOL trust me i have questioned arohi's degree quite a number of times too😆i mean she is obviously smart and aced the medical exams and all but lmao i feel like she took the false medical oath🤪

@blue: hahahaha omg this is precisely why I made akshara run to birla' house, straight to abhi's room, because that poor soul had imagined akshu far too many times - in 3 WHOLE TIMES!!! the first dream seq where akshu wakes abhi up, and then during the second time right before she rejects abhi and third one was the very recent 'post marriage dream'😆 I just had to make the confession setting to be abhi's bedroom 😉 i also thought it would give it more of an intimate touch to the whole sequence. so glad you mentioned about it🤗

@purple: Awwwwhhh you liked that scene so much?☺️I just couldn't let abhi become a total despo the moment she confesses. I had to make sure it was she who is straightforward as to why she wants abhi to take her back. 'Cause abhi has done enough.

@black: Thank you so so SOOO much for the breakdown to the scenes with your reactions. Honestly, idek what i did to have earned readers like you. And about the threat, LMAO, you guys are just crazy. tu Ritu se bass dur reh. She is spoiling all of you. Mere innocent sammy ko bhi threat dilwana sikha diya

Originally posted by: Deep_deep

Woww!! Mindblowing.. Fabulous.. what a piece.. Really loved reading it and it surely made my day especially with the present depressing track that is running . Wish we could get your story instead of the present track but then yrkkh wouldnt have completed more than a decade.. They need to stretch it endlessly..

The way you portray each of the characters, depict their emotions, their conflicts, and especially the hot hot kissing scene.. Superb!!! Do continue writing and please tag me as well.. Would always love to read your writings in future..❤️❤️❤️

Heyyyyy omg my mouth is hurting from the widest silly grin i ever put on, on my damn face reading this comment!!

you are so sweet to say something so kind, my heart is honestly so full right now. Not even joking, reread your comment more times than i would like to admit. Thank you so much for being so supportive. My hug is ready for you, all you need to do is just come here

oh and Please let me know how I should address you 😳

Originally posted by: Ekahriz

Omg, Mush!

I love the Abhimanyu in your imagination more than the one in the show!!! 😍😍😍 Like absolutely. (I also like that he is not super sanskari and does swear a bit. 😅)

This was an absolute delight to read. Loved everything about it. And a big thank you for putting in this effort and sharing this with us. You have just raised the bar girl, I don't know how these Yrkkh writers are gonna match up to this, at least as far as I am concerned.

You are totes amazing and sending so much love your way.

When you wake up, you are going to be overwhelmed with all the love that you are gonna get.

Sending squishy squishy hugs too. 💖

Oh my god!

@ black: Okay this comment made me all mushy and my insides just melted into a puddle in the pit of my stomach and i would like to direct the blame on you and request you to fix this thing because i'm freaking overwhelmed and i don't do good when i'm overwhelmed!!!

@ReD:

Idk why but going by his anger issues, i just have to make him cuss🤣 Mera OS complete nahi hota hain unless he swears😳

@blue: oh I totally was and you have absolutely no idea just how much. I swear to god i was so scared about this OS , to the point that i didn't put up a disclaimer at the beginning of the shot because i thought people will roll past it 'cause honestly who has the time to read something so long. Fast forward to Day 3 and I have almost 70 likes and idek how to comprehend this piece of info.🤪you guys truly make me so content.

Thank you so much, ___________ (pls fill in the blank😳 I hate it when someone makes me so happy and I can't even address them with their name). You have no idea how much your words meant to me. I actually feel so content😳

Sirf aur sirf tere liye:

K I will be back and reply to the rest. I need to eat first. All these comments made me hungry🤣

Originally posted by: reeyacute

Awesome!!!!

How did you manage to write so much.

Thank you so much! 🤗 and Lmao Good question. So i actually don't know?😳 lol okay so basically i just didn't want the confession scene to pop up out of the blue, i had to make sure I build up the atmosphere so that when you guys come to read that part, it actually hits - hence so many scenes before that 😆

Originally posted by: daffodil153

It was an amazing update!😍

Loved it !!!!!!!

Please be yrkkh writer!

We badly need this in the show as well😂

Awh, thank you so much my love🤗

Originally posted by: Alia.q

Amazing!! Loved Akshu talking back to Arohi and the reunion even better!!

Thanks a lot Alia!! 😳❤️

Originally posted by: slan

Are you for real????? Seriously!!!!

I can't believe someone can write this well and portray various emotions through writing!

You won't believe I was literally holding my breath since she entered abhi's room till the last line!

Reading your stories are beyond watching anything, can literally create the scenes in head.

And what's this lengthy and all! The more it's lengthy the more we enjoy it and adore it😳 can read all of your stores innumerable times how much ever short or long it gets!

Thank you so much for the efforts and making our Sunday!

Waiting for more❤️

Okay girl, stop right there. Need a moment to compose myself

Damn it, have you taken some oath to make me speechless today? like, what exactly is your intention, khulke pataiye please. This is literally one of my favorite comments on this OS, hands down ugh! I was gonna highlight and mention a few parts of your comment but then i decided otherwise because if i do that, your whole comment will look like a rainbow 🤣I read it, and then reread it, and then read again a few more times.☺️

About my anxiety regarding the length of my stories - LMAO you won't believe but this OS was 23 pages long on the google doc my bp had hit the roof when i thought about how people will ignore it just looking at it. mein to darr k mare didn't even put a disclaimer about the length because mujhe laga woh padhke bhaag na jaye sare k sare. But then how did i forget that I have the most amazing set of readers🤗

Thank you so much for always reading my work, liking them, and most importantly encouraging me with such kind words. You have no idea what this comment did to me. Love you sweetheart. meri jadoo bhari pappiyaan, only for you:

Originally posted by: SilentEyes7

Wow...

Amazing...

Thank you so much😳

Originally posted by: angelheart19

Oh my god 😍😍😍😍 This is like the bestest story I have read on Abhira till now. Its sooooo beautiful and something that we all want to see. I loved it so much. ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Thank you so so much for putting so much thought and hard work into this story. It is splendid and super amazing. Thank youuuuuuuuuu

I would love to read more stories on Abhira from you because you are just so talented. But please take care of yourself first and complete your sleep. Your health comes before everything.

Looking forward to more awesome stories.

Lots of love and appreciation for you. God bless you.🤍🤍🤍🌸🌸🌸

@bold: Did you just say this is the bestest story you read on abhira till now? I didn't imagine that right?

Honestly some of you are really becoming a pro at 'how-to-leave-mush-tongue-tied' game and i'm not complaining whatsoever!

@Red: No, thank YOU for appreciating the efforts. nothing feels more fulfilling than having readers like you who value the time and hard work i put into this one and i'm not even gonna be humble and say that i didn't put effort because i think this is one OS i worked continuously on, for 3 days and sacrificed my sleep because i have never been more desperate to put my imaginations on abhira confession and exposing arohi into words more. I'm just ecstatic that you loved it so much!!

@green: I slept like a dead log for 12-13 hours after hitting the post button that night🤣 don't worry i'm all good hehe, thank you so much for your concern my love🤗

Last but not the least:

for making me so happy with your words ^^