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Posted: 3 years ago
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I love you 😘💝 And credit where due, writers did come up Dr. Abhimanyu Birla.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Eternized_Blues


You just need motivation my dear! I never read anything I write, I don't even proof read it. Too critical.


Ye bhi hai... I have to start writing.. will try writing a one shot

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: 2TheMoonAndBack

And you doubt your writing after goving this splendid poetry. Are you seriously serious? Ab tujhe mein ghar pe aake marungi😳


Aeyyy.. ye dialogue mera tha


Acha thik hai na... Periods ke karnaame they yaar. Mood swings 🤡

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9


Ye bhi hai... I have to start writing.. will try writing a one shot

YAAAAAASSSSS


Do it Noor. I bet you will knock it out the park.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: 2TheMoonAndBack

This was sooooooooooooooo beautiful. Although kt was about a person i hate from the core of my heart. Still it was so besutiful. U put such a realistic picture of arohi and her thought processes and her guilt through your own poetic way. I wish arohi realized her kartutein in the show. Ik thats never gonna happen but thanks for this noor. I was a pleasure reading and seeing arohi from an angle a lot of us wanted to see🤗


Hahahahaha, you liked it even after this being on Aarohi... Ab mehnat safal ho gayi


Aarohi is tbh, a character who knows her faults very well but the Goenkas especially Akshara at the moment keeps on putting all her kartoot behind a veil. And that irritates me. I guess everyone would have known that this habit of Akshara is something I never approves of.


So Aarohi just use Akshara mahaan behaviour for her own good... Makers clearly give us lessons: never be too good to people like Aarohi


Same... I have always seen a lot of potential in Aarohi as character. Maybe it's for my love of dysfunctional characters but she does have depth... It's just that makers don't explore it and faaltu mein third angle daal kar uski self respect ki dhajiya udaate hai.


And I am glad you liked it Ritu 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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You are supposed to be on my side!!!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: 2TheMoonAndBack

Yu know sometimes i feel like these poetries like the one you just posted on arohi, and then the abhi and akshu in mush’s OS and blues’s stories have better description and depth of the characters than what the show is showing us. Which is so sad because it should be the other way around. It makes me feel like the writers of the show r not putting enough effort to make it work. Although im not at all complaining because these days, i am highly depending on thr writers on IF to make my days but yeah i just wish makers put in a little more thoughts to the characters and the plot itself.


Main toh bol rahi hun ki CV likho Rajan Shahi ko... Maine sach mein link bhi nikala hua hai... Koi sunta hu nhi hai meri 😒

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9


You are supposed to be on my side!!!!


Always on your side but you need to do better with excuse.🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Eternized_Blues

YAAAAAASSSSS


Do it Noor. I bet you will knock it out the park.


Yess!! Ab toh likhna hi padega... Amnu ka bharosa hai .. ab toh likhna padega

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9


Main toh bol rahi hun ki CV likho Rajan Shahi ko... Maine sach mein link bhi nikala hua hai... Koi sunta hu nhi hai meri 😒

What are you talking about? Concentrate on writing meri jaan

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