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Posted: 3 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: HpTheChosenOne

Beautiful!! 👏👌🥰 I really want to see that "mar gayi anu..." scene in the serial yaar....

Please do continue 😊😊

Aww!! 😍😍😍

Thank you so much dear! I hope we'll get to see more awesome moments in the show.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#22

The way you can express emotions <3 uff

Honestly, the way you used their body language, it felt real and true to the story & lo & behold MaAn are expressing themselves exactly like this

but, I'm sure like everyone else is saying, you had me at the shayari 😳

Absolutely magnificent ⭐️


Also Km (Is there another way you'd like to be addressed?) - thank you for tagging me! I visit the forum in the evening, see the notifications before bed and miss a lot of the posts 😭 BUT I am so happy to read this - especially the poetry. Yours is so well written, too !!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#23

Thanks. You can call me Komal.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Km181

Thanks. You can call me Komal.


Hey Komal - I'm Riddhi 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#25

Everything about this os is so beautiful❤️❤️❤️❤️

Your shayari is so apt for the situation 👏

And that pillar scene has my heart 🥺🥺

Honestly I could visualise each and every scene as if it was happening in front of me👍🏼

Ufff....I'm short of words to appreciate your work dear🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I would really appreciate if you could read and express your views about this one.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: moksha89

The way you can express emotions <3 uff

Honestly, the way you used their body language, it felt real and true to the story & lo & behold MaAn are expressing themselves exactly like this

but, I'm sure like everyone else is saying, you had me at the shayari 😳

Absolutely magnificent ⭐️


Also Km (Is there another way you'd like to be addressed?) - thank you for tagging me! I visit the forum in the evening, see the notifications before bed and miss a lot of the posts 😭 BUT I am so happy to read this - especially the poetry. Yours is so well written, too !!

Aww! I'm so glad to hear this.

I would really like to portray them in their own element especially in the write up's related to show.

Alternate universe would be a whole new game.


It's heartening to know that I could emote well. Thank you for your lovely words. ❤️❤️


I agree, we want more from Komal. Her poetry was sheer brilliant!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: shriz

Everything about this os is so beautiful❤️❤️❤️❤️

Your shayari is so apt for the situation 👏

And that pillar scene has my heart 🥺🥺

Honestly I could visualise each and every scene as if it was happening in front of me👍🏼

Ufff....I'm short of words to appreciate your work dear🤗

Thank you so much! This really means a lot to me.


I'm glad it came out well given the haste with which it was written.


You are being short of words is something! 😍😍

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Posted: 3 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: docritu99

Aww! I'm so glad to hear this.

I would really like to portray them in their own element especially in the write up's related to show.

Alternate universe would be a whole new game.


It's heartening to know that I could emote well. Thank you for your lovely words. ❤️❤️


I agree, we want more from Komal. Her poetry was sheer brilliant!


Inspire me again with another beautiful OS of yours. And you will have another poetry as return gift...

Done deal👍


And once again Thanks Riya 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Km181

उसकी आँखों मैं आज कुछ अलग ही बात थी

एक नयी आस थी शायद एक अरदास थी

उसके चेहरे की वो हँसी तो हमेशा से ख़ास थी

पर न जाने क्यों आज उन आंशुओ मैं गज़ब बात थी

मानों बरसो पुराना ख्वाब आज करवट बदल उठ गया

और मैला सा नसीब मेरा आज उसकी आखों से धुल गया



this one's for you my dear... somehow couldn't stop myself from writing something again after all this time..

Love you and thanks again. What shall i call you - Ritu?


s/n: Ardaas is punjabi word for Prayer..



Just to clarify...this one is yours now.... So feel free to use, in either in your next OS or anywhere you like..

Sort of like you have the full rights..

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