MaAn OS : Haq - Page 2

lovely writing Ritu is it?

beautiful shayari too, aap ko toh show makers ko hire karna chahiye sacchi

and I loved your Anu mire than Anuj, seldom happens that...

keep writing more hun

उसकी आँखों मैं आज कुछ अलग ही बात थी

एक नयी आस थी शायद एक अरदास थी

उसके चेहरे की वो हँसी तो हमेशा से ख़ास थी

पर न जाने क्यों आज उन आंशुओ मैं गज़ब बात थी

मानों बरसो पुराना ख्वाब आज करवट बदल उठ गया

और मैला सा नसीब मेरा आज उसकी आखों से धुल गया

this one's for you my dear... somehow couldn't stop myself from writing something again after all this time..

Love you and thanks again. What shall i call you - Ritu?

s/n: Ardaas is punjabi word for Prayer..

Beautiful!! 👏👌🥰 I really want to see that "mar gayi anu..." scene in the serial yaar....

Please do continue 😊😊

Originally posted by: Kras1

amazing OS dear

your shayri is another level

their conversation were so deep and filled with so many emotions

and you described every emotion so briefly it was like i am seeing the scene👏

I'm really humbled with your lovely words of praises.

I write by the mantra of "getting the imagery seen" rather than plain telling so the writer in me is pleasantly content.

Thank you so much! ❤️❤️

Originally posted by: Km181

Lovely, the OS was as beautiful as the shayari...

Where were you all these days..

Chalo der se hi sahi, ab aye ho to yahi rehna

I won't highlights what I loved most in OS...I am biased by shayari.. I too used to write but then job happened and somehow left it..

Still the pleasure I get by reading is divine..

Please continue ❤️❤️❤️

Adding few who may like, I feel

I guess I was trying to keep the balance between my profession and hobby all these days. 😂😂

Vaise I've recently joined the forum so yeah. No no, definitely not going anywhere. 😜

Aww! So it's our common love for shayari that connects us! ❤️❤️

Thank you so much for all the love and also for tagging others.

Originally posted by: arya212002

Beautiful OS and more awesome shayari 😍😍😍👏👏👏👏

Keep writing more ✍️

Thank you so much, dear!

Definitely! 👍

Originally posted by: SundariP

You wrote emotions very well...

Well done and keep writing❤️

Thank you so much for your lovely words! ❤️❤️

Originally posted by: Iruuu

Beautiful 😭😭😭

Thank you so much! ❤️

Originally posted by: hinz

lovely writing Ritu is it?

beautiful shayari too, aap ko toh show makers ko hire karna chahiye sacchi

and I loved your Anu mire than Anuj, seldom happens that...

keep writing more hun

Arey! Teacher sahiba ne padh liya bas Mera os safal hogaya!

Riya, here!

Itne sare compliments ek sath! Thank you so much, aaj toh din ban gaya! ❤️❤️

Originally posted by: Km181

उसकी आँखों मैं आज कुछ अलग ही बात थी

एक नयी आस थी शायद एक अरदास थी

उसके चेहरे की वो हँसी तो हमेशा से ख़ास थी

पर न जाने क्यों आज उन आंशुओ मैं गज़ब बात थी

मानों बरसो पुराना ख्वाब आज करवट बदल उठ गया

और मैला सा नसीब मेरा आज उसकी आखों से धुल गया

this one's for you my dear... somehow couldn't stop myself from writing something again after all this time..

Love you and thanks again. What shall i call you - Ritu?

s/n: Ardaas is punjabi word for Prayer..

Woah! Woah! Woah!

Take a bow! You haven't fully lost it, it was definitely dusted down by the responsiblities but not lost. And I am happy that was the case.

Such a lovely shayari! Please do write more for us. ❤️❤️

I'm glad I could ruffle your hidden love for shayari.

Love you for this piece!

I'm Riya.