AbhiRa OS: Second Chances - Page 6

Originally posted by: jani_faizal

Mush OMG you posted your OS…

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Heading straight to reading it, will comment after…

Kaha gayab hai tu sam!!

Please tell me that there is a good few parts to follow.

It was an absolutely amazing concept that was well conceptualized.

I wish it never ended 🤗🤗🤗what emotions and stupendous writing! Thank you for sharing the link to this. I would have missed on a beautiful master piece!

Hi i'm finally here, got my sanity back after 24 hours and now i can comment😎

first thing first: where and how exactly did you find this abhi? and why would you put this character in your OS and set the benchmark sooo high?! kuch idea bhi hai mush tu kya karrahi hai? now i want this abhi both in the show and a life partner in real life

second question: the dialogues. ok so like HOW DO YOU COME UP WITH dialogues LIKE THIS? like in the washroom scene. i was basically biting my nails while reading that part because i thought arohi exposed will happen here. the way abhi was counting up to 3 for akshu🤣 he was worried shit about akshu after the way he found her in the field and so when akshu opened the door, before aksing anything further, he checked her vitals. a true doctor anda true lover

then comes the akshu's excuse: i slipped in the washroom.

seriously akshu needs to upgrade her excuses. i mean slipped in the washroom for burn marks? really?🤣

and abhi to abhi hi hai. the way his jaw muscle tightened and he kept looking at him intensely knowing very well she was lying but he said "continue"😎 and then akshu elaborated on her so called bathroom mein phisalne wali story

and once she was done abhi be like: "Interesting story"

His dialogues sach mein kill me. too good yaar mush. just too good. and then "now the truth please"😎

achha now i loved that part where abhi literally demands with full haq "Akshara.Story.Now!" uff the power in his voice☺️

and ofc akshara says nothing making our already impatient abhi more and more impatient.

another great thing about this os is how abhi always wants her to look into his eyes while talking because even if she lies, her eyes would never be able to hide the truth. so he holds her chin and raises her face. and when she does, he takes a step back in shock. "It was you" the way he whispered it. kasam se my heart just took a nosedive in that scene. and the pure feeling of joy.

I was soooo sad when abhi said they were done. i didn't know what to think anymore because like i really thought once he gets to know akshu saved him, he would love him even more. but it's MUSH we are talking about. of course she wouldn't make anything so mainstream. so our writer sahiba brings a beautiful twist.

I genuinely loved how abhi felt betrayed because she tried to set him up with her sister. no matter how much want abhira to unite, it will never be complete if abhimanyu doesn't feel betrayed because seriously what akshara did was extremely selfish and just wrong. if you both love each other there shouldn't even be a question about your sister. and here she wanted abhi to marry her. OBVIOUSLY abhi would be furious and feel like he trusted the wrong person. so he says "We are really done akshara. we are really done"

the personal loss wala feeling akshu felt was so so palpable , everything she felt, i loved the description of it. it took her so long to get the taste of her own medicine. and she finally got it and how!!

best was how abhimanyu stayed still on his ground about protecting akshu. my heart skipped a bit when he said "But listen to me and listen to me good, if your filthy presence in the Goenka house makes any, and i mean, ANY inconvenience for MY akshu even for once, i swear on my last breath that i will ruin your whole life, your career included."

this dialogue has my whole heart! the best dialogue of abhimanyu birla guaranteed. and on top of that he called her MY akshu. what a pleasant surprise mush. i wondered how they would get back together now that abhi felt betrayed and hurt but he went away from her to make that path of getting back with her. he was just hurt but he still LOVED her and his love for her didn't lessen even by a degree. if anything it had increased after getting to know about the fire, manjiri's puja and ruby case. such a beautiful beautiful scene mush.

*****last scene needs a separate post because of obvious reasons☺️******

Okay mush you did not just make the confession the BEST CONFESSION IN HISTORY, DID YOU?????

the fact that she came to birla house on her own, went to abhi's ROOM with her heart in mouth and asked him "Would you like to take me back...please" OMGGGGGGGGGGGGG

oh but the way abhi thinks he was just dreaming her so he doesn't pay attention and grabs his towel to take a shower😆 and when he realizes it was really akshu, and his famous dialogue comes in "WHAT THE F*CK!"🤣🤣🤣 i just love when abhi swears. idk why but i do! it's just so....sexy?

and not a single words akshu says goes into his head and he keeps aksing what is that she wants because he is not understanding naything. and akshara wanted to throw the soundbox athim LMFAOOOOO🤣

and finally the bestestest part comes. akshu hugs him and asks for a second chance and uff the way abhi says "give me one good reason why i should give you a second chance" i am honestly not sure which dialogue of abhi love the most. and then way he keeps probing her by saying "try again" and "you need to be more speciifc" i mean the swag this man has even in serious moments like this, i swear to god makes me weak in the knee

and finally akshara says because i love you? but that wasn't the best part. best was how abhi asks her to repeat. first he orders, and then demands and finally his voice become so soft and so desperate as if he wanted her to keep repeating this forever and ever. and i understand his emotions because he actually did wait so long and today he didn't even expect akshara to come like this, in birla house, in his room and confess like this.

and finally he slowly traces his hand over her back until it reaches the perfect position and he hugs her fiercely ufffff

buttttttt then the best was yet to come:

THEY KISSED.,

this was me and i'm not even joking here:

i could never imagine that yu would include a scene like this mush. they actually kissed SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT!!!! like ACTUAL KISS!!! SHITTTTTTTTT!!!

the description of the hwole scene made MY toe curl ok. not akshu, MY TOE CURLED!!! that scene was so hot my goddddd i forgot to breathe! and the way he pecked her lips at the end and apologizes for getting carried away and asks if she was okay.

talk about the smooth transition from hot and fierce scnees to utter tenderness! i just couldn't stop blushing and aww-ing. the entire scene left me in awe, nothing else.

i just want to say mush that you are GIFTED GIFTED GIFTED writer. the kind of dialogues, characters, scenes, settings and in general DETAILS we get in your stories is something that attracts me to read your stories more and more. it's like the best gift anyone can get. Thank you! than you so very much for listening us when we stalked you and writing this masterpiece🤗

Originally posted by: Ekahriz

Omg, Mush!

I love the Abhimanyu in your imagination more than the one in the show!!! 😍😍😍 Like absolutely. (I also like that he is not super sanskari and does swear a bit. 😅)

This was an absolute delight to read. Loved everything about it. And a big thank you for putting in this effort and sharing this with us. You have just raised the bar girl, I don't know how these Yrkkh writers are gonna match up to this, at least as far as I am concerned.

You are totes amazing and sending so much love your way.

When you wake up, you are going to be overwhelmed with all the love that you are gonna get.

Sending squishy squishy hugs too. 💖

Bold: yaar same here. The number of times mush made this abhi swear in all her OSs🤣🤣🤣 i sctually find it so sexy☺️

How did I miss this OS from you?! 😲

Fantastic writing. I could see it all played out on screen. You really have captured the essence of each character ehich makes it a joy to read. I liked how you solved the Arohi problem nicely done with the letter and kicking her off the team. The confession scene 😳

Thank you gifting us with another one of your works.

Guys? what the hell? No, what the actual hell?! Sixty-effing-four likes and sooo many comments, and and not just 2-3 words comments but legit essay comments????😲

I went through each and every one of them and to be completely honest, idek how to feel. My emotions are all over the place at the moment and I might just burst into tears right now. I'm not even trying to be dramatic and/or humble, but going by the length of this shot, I legit thought this OS won't get any more than 30 likes. Never felt this ecstatic to have been proven wrong and smacked with such a pleasant surprise. Y'all have to be the sweetest and craziest bunch to take the time to even read such a long shot, and then being so so kind to write such lengthy comments. Y'all make my effort and time I put into this one so SO worth it. God, I'm seriously gonna cry.

I will be replying to every single one of you very soon (hopefully tomorrow) but just wanted to share what I am feeling rn. Thank you...just...Thank you❤️

-Mushfika

Originally posted by: Mushfika_01

Guys? what the hell? No, what the actual hell?! Sixty-effing-four likes and sooo many comments, and and not just 2-3 words comments but legit essay comments????😲

I went through each and every one of them and to be completely honest, idek how to feel. My emotions are all over the place at the moment and I might just burst into tears right now. I'm not even trying to be dramatic and/or humble, but going by the length of this shot, I legit thought this OS won't get any more than 30 likes. Never felt this ecstatic to have been proven wrong and smacked with such a pleasant surprise. Y'all have to be the sweetest and craziest bunch to take the time to even read such a long shot, and then being so so kind to write such lengthy comments. Y'all make my effort and time I put into this one so SO worth it. God, I'm seriously gonna cry.

I will be replying to every single one of you very soon (hopefully tomorrow) but just wanted to share what I am feeling rn. Thank you...just...Thank you❤️

-Mushfika

It is 67 now🤗And I don't know why you are so surprised. It is well deserved for the kind of story you give us. Btw, I have decided i will start calling you mush too. Mushfika sounds too formal for a person whose work I adore so much. 😉

Fantastic story

Finally the truth is out and they confessed too

Arohi is such a disgusting person

Please update soon