ShiVi OS: Night Changes - Page 4

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

This piece has my whole freaking heart!

First things first...I absolutely dig the length.

Ik, Ik it is practically a death wish to write long pieces and by the time you're done with it you just can't feel your fingers but holy lord are those the best ones or what//

From the start to the end I was completely in the story.

Not once did I loose interest.

From possessiveness to comfort to realization.

Everything was written perfectly!

Him switching places with her >>>>>>>> <3

Liked the flashback scene a lot too.

Please Blissy write more Prewedding Shivi man. I LOVE THEM. ❤️

Rituuu 🤗

I knew it, you as a writer would love the length, truth be told, I'd love it too, but only if I was the one reading it!😛 But koi nahi, so many people enjoyed it and that made it all worth it!

I'm so glad you liked it!❤️

You write so so sooo well yourself, so I have your approval, now I can rest easy 😆

I will write moreee, don'tcha worry!😳 Have one in the works (in my brain, before that, something else) so thoda time lagega, but I'll write no doubt, pre-wedding shivi pe likhne mein bahot maza aata hai

Originally posted by: LyssaPie

Absolutely amazing

Thank you so much!❤️

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Reswa!!!

Edit:

Shyna🤗!!!

The thing that first got to me was how the whole family were so DONE with their daily squabbles... It's like, let's prevent, and when that doesn't work, let's all run for our lives!!! 🤣🤣

There's something about bike rides and sleeping together that's so very intimate. I haven't done either of those things with more than a handful of people in my whole life. Like, count on one hand handful of people... 😳

The bike ride and the way kuch kuch hota hain was described was soooooo beautiful!

"Ab jab pakad hi liya hai, toh kas ke pakadna."

This line! I felt like someone had summarised the whole of Shivi's journey till now to me...😆 The way it's practically instinct and he's still shocked and in wonder about how things are working out so well today...

The part where she walks away and he goes after her? I love how shy he was about admitting that he cared, and loved how Raavi got it anyway. The LIFTING!!!! No more will be said about that... ☺️

I think you know how much I love room or bed sharing fics, so that was a treat. And his pain that she might mot trust him as much as he thought she would, her realisation of it and quick reassurance, had my whole heart! ❤️

The little baang wala flashback was super cute! And him pretending to sleep then scaring her was just overload! Them getting ready to leave your was such a newly wed domestic scene that I'm still sighing over it... The end? Tujhe dekhne aaungi? Did Shiva get it? I don't completely think so... What a surprise ride the boy is in for, and all still so unaware! 😆

First of all, meri Sathiii, itna lamba comment uff 🥺❤ I love it of course!

Now, yes...the family being done with the squabbles was funny, but let me tell you why it ended up being that way hehe. Well for one, I just didn't need them meddling in ShiVi's affairs anymore (they do it enough in the show 🤪) 2) I just didn't want to write on them 🤣 Knowing how much I had to write further also made me become lazy right at the very start, oh deaaar!

Bike rides and sleeping together - I agree, they're very intimate, hence I haven't done any of it with anyone 🤣 As you can see, I live vicariously through fiction lol

@underlined - you know, reading this from your perspective makes me so happy, because the way you interpret it all loooove!

I love reading about all that you loved so I appreciate you listing the details 🤗

Just makes me happy knowing about the things you loved or didn't, and if what I'm writing is reaching to you all or not!🙈

As always, thank you for reading and leaving me such pyaar bhare comments, I appreciate it, and I appreciate youuu!❤️❤️

Originally posted by: blissfulcanyon

First of all, meri Sathiii, itna lamba comment uff 🥺❤ I love it of course!

Now, yes...the family being done with the squabbles was funny, but let me tell you why it ended up being that way hehe. Well for one, I just didn't need them meddling in ShiVi's affairs anymore (they do it enough in the show 🤪) 2) I just didn't want to write on them 🤣 Knowing how much I had to write further also made me become lazy right at the very start, oh deaaar!

Bike rides and sleeping together - I agree, they're very intimate, hence I haven't done any of it with anyone 🤣 As you can see, I live vicariously through fiction lol

@underlined - you know, reading this from your perspective makes me so happy, because the way you interpret it all loooove!

I love reading about all that you loved so I appreciate you listing the details 🤗

Just makes me happy knowing about the things you loved or didn't, and if what I'm writing is reaching to you all or not!🙈

As always, thank you for reading and leaving me such pyaar bhare comments, I appreciate it, and I appreciate youuu!❤️❤️

@bold Shyna!!!! 🤣🤣🤣

The second reason happens to me too... All the time. 😆

And I appreciate you too!!! Lambe acche comments dekh ke hi dil khush ho jaati hain!

Originally posted by: blissfulcanyon

Rituuu 🤗

I knew it, you as a writer would love the length, truth be told, I'd love it too, but only if I was the one reading it!😛 But koi nahi, so many people enjoyed it and that made it all worth it!

I'm so glad you liked it!❤️

You write so so sooo well yourself, so I have your approval, now I can rest easy 😆

I will write moreee, don'tcha worry!😳 Have one in the works (in my brain, before that, something else) so thoda time lagega, but I'll write no doubt, pre-wedding shivi pe likhne mein bahot maza aata hai

I adored the length man. Adored. Kuch bhi lamba lamba main sb maze se padhti hun. 🤪

Awwww. Iss tareef se main emotional hogya! Thank you so much bub. ❤️

Waitingggggg.

This was such a beautiful read 😊

It was long but the way you wrote it, I did not feel that it was dragged…you are an amazing writer..👏

The dialogues that you have written, I can actually imagine them exactly conversing like this under similar circumstances…👍🏼

Keep writing more ❤️

Originally posted by: Scribble19

This was such a beautiful read 😊

It was long but the way you wrote it, I did not feel that it was dragged…you are an amazing writer..👏

The dialogues that you have written, I can actually imagine them exactly conversing like this under similar circumstances…👍🏼

Keep writing more ❤️

Thank you so much!❤️

I appreciate the kind words 🤗

And I'm so glad you enjoyed reading this!

@bold- I strive to make it so that my pieces resemble instances/dialogues that could take place in the show so hearing this makes me really happy 🥺❤

I love it wheb raavi left shiva speechless 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

Pre-marriage ShiVi are my fav forever.. so I loved this even before I started it!! upar se itna lambda aur itna fan service.. haaye

The bike scene was really cute! Gunda Shiva and Shechu Raavi are the best 😆❤️

Raavi wants Shiva to care for her, but not because of Dhara 😉

Raavi getting all the feels from Shiva’s touch reminded me of yesterday’s scene

Their holi flashback was adorable! Of course Raavi the chipkali would be the one to cross the pillow wall always 😆

Raavi fangirling over Shiva’s eye lashes reminds me of us 🤣

Just like Raavi, I also never wanted this one to end.. loved loved it!! ❤️

Originally posted by: manveer123

I love it wheb raavi left shiva speechless 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

glad you loved it 😆