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Posted: 3 years ago

Thank you for the update


Part 111

Dramatic update... greatly written

Geet's reaction is justified

of cos she feels Maan is just there for the baby and not for her

was hoping that would correct her and also assure her

did he just expect her to open her arms to him?

well Mona and Lisa just wanted Maaneet to reunite

Geet's outburst is reasonable

agree with her that Maan does not trust her love and their love

sad that she thinks she is not good enough for Maan

he needs to stop wallowing in his self pity and take charge

hate that he is pushing her away

can understand that he is heart broken

glad that Geet told him to leave

while I understand that Maan wants her happiness but he fails to see that her happiness lies in him

liked that she is determined to be happy

wish that Maan realises what he is doing before its too late


update soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

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Part 112


G- I am not a rehabilitation center to better your life...that you have to do for yourself, that is your decision what you want from life

M-Geet, I want you to be happy (His eyes are also moist)

He goes to hold her hand but Geet haath hata leti hai

G-Yes, I will be happy. I try to be happy no matter what and I work towards it

Geet accumulates all her will power to walk away from him

+++++++++

Ab raat ho gai hai

Maan kuch der car mein baitha raha in his thoughts

He is thinking to himself

Aaage aage riverfront tha, Maan wahan chala gaya

It was peaceful

He can’t see Geet sad. Crying like that, so helpless

But he doesn’t know what to do

He is afraid he will turn out like his mom and Geet would have to suffer because of his mental illness

Maan loves her too much to inflict that misery & pain on her

Isse acha he thinks, let her move on from me

He is sitting at the river front on a bench, jo ki khopche mein hai...little on darker end...well-lit path pe nahi hai

He has the ring in his hand, jo he took from Lisa to propose Geet

He is looking at the ring

He always kept the ring with him to propose Geet but ho hi nahi paaya

Ab he feels, Geet ko nahi toh ab koi kaam nahi iss ring ka

He might as well part ways with the ring

And what better way than to drown it in the river that flows around the place Geet stays and where he last meets her

Toh aise bench pe baithke ring ko nihaar raha tha ki haath se ring chutke andhere mein kahin gir gayi

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Geet was taking a walk around her favorite place

She liked how the place was close to nature

She couldn’t stay at home as it was too suffocating

She thought khuli hawa mein she might feel slightly better

As she was walking, she sees something rolling over towards her way

She picks it up and realizes it’s a ring, studded with diamonds

She wonders kiska gir gaya hai, valuable hoga

She is looking at ring, it is beautiful

Tabhi she could see a profile emerge from the darkness

As he moves towards the light, she could see his face

Maan also stops on his track seeing Geet holding her ring

G-oh...I thought you went

G-emm...

She hands over the ring to him

G-Found it on the ground

She starts to walk

Maan was gawking at her

He didn’t expect to see her again; and she with the ring plus in the surreal light...she looked angelic

Geet stops after 2-3 steps

She turns

G-Well…about your mom...before she passed away…the hospital did her mental health diagnosis. Reports mere paas padi hain, le lena ...kabhi

He nods

G-It’s not hereditary

Geet kehke chalne lagti hai phir se

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Maan finds himself outside Geet’s home to collect his mother’s medical reports

Geet quickly hands over the file to him

M- Ismein tumhara naam hai

G-Oh sorry

Geet gives him the mom’s file

M-Are you also...?

G-I am going for therapy....to get over...all this...

She answers looking away from him

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Wow fabulous update❤❤❤

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Posted: 3 years ago

Nice part

He is so not able to open his mouth and tell

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 112


Sadness and Loneliness


Maan now decides to get rid off the ring

that should have been Geet's but now that they

both have decided to end their relation

he decides to throw the ring away and Geet is the one that finds

a ring which is the same ring Maan threw

she tells him to collect his mother's reports and that her illness

is not something that he too will have

hope that he realizes he is throwing away a good relationship

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Posted: 3 years ago

Aww poor geet ...

Maan need to change his thinking

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Posted: 3 years ago

112

maan must find courage to confess his feelings n love to geet for which geet is waiting

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Posted: 3 years ago

Nice update 👍

Hope now maan share his feelings and take care of geet poor she is so upset and alone

Update soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 112

Ring scene was awesome ........ it was like I was watching s movie 😆

So they meet again

Geet gives him the medical reports

His mom’s illness is not hereditary

But geet is going through therapy ??? For depression??

Maan better realize his mistakes otherwise the readers are going to be throwing our jhutti’s at him 😆

Thank you di so much for updating even though you ar do busy

Much appreciated 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

thanks for the pm


Part 112

Amazing update.... nicely written

Glad that she walked away

at least Maan is thinking about Geet

well he cannot see her in tears or in pain

while I understand Maan's fears, he cannot make a decision for Geet

sad that he assumes she will move just like that

oh no he threw the ring away

liked the rightful owner found the ring

this is indeed a sign

so Maan admires Geet

great that she told him about his mom's medical reports

as expected he went to fetch the those reports

loved that she told him that his mom's disease is not hereditary

Oh so Geet is going for therapy!

she has no qualms about admitting it

pleased that she is getting help

hope Maan will do the same


update soon

Edited by khwaishfan - 3 years ago

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