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Hey yaa beautiful people.❤️

I hope you all are doing well.

So here i am with a story which was left incomplete since 2months.. i know it's a long break for me too but my doba dimag was blocked completely.😭

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I did not cross check it. So kindly ignore the errors. Hehe.




Navratri is up here, 10 days festival celebrated in all over india and the people of somnath celebrate it in a great manner by setting up a carnival for the long 10 days.

Today is the first day of it and for a garba night too. All the kids and adults are eagerly waiting for this...Somanth ki sabse sundar is the most excited angel in the entire somnath as pandya parivar is also coming in garba night with love of her life.

But she is little worried today so she hurdily rushed towards pandya niwas: she enter and got collided with dhara di

"arey raavi kya hua itni preshan kyu lg rahi h or itni jldi m kyu hai"

She took a second to calm down her bumping heart "voh dhara di bhaut badi problem hogyi hai"

"raavi kya hua ghar par sab thik toh hai na"

"haan dhara di sab thik h problem yeh hai ki muje apni chaniya choli ke matching ki chooriyan nahi mil rahi or aaj raat muje vahi pehena hai"

Dhara pat her head and said "pagal ladki toh itni si baat ke liye tension kon leta h tere paas bhaut sari chooriyan toh hai haina unme se hi pehenle"

Raavi's mouth make a shape O "kya dhara di somnath ki sabse sundar ladki ko dekhne aaj poora somnath aayega koi kami nahi rehni chahiye aaj"

"Acha ...toh ek kam kar dukaan par krish hoga ushe lekar mele m chale ja teri manpasand chooriyan bhi mil jayegi"

Raavi squeezed her hand in happiness hugged her and left waving a bye back without turning


She reached the store in no time and found shiva carrying the heavy sacks on his shoulder. She gulped once by seeing the view in front of her eyes, he has tied his red n black checked shirt on waist, the biceps are bumping in and out by every move, the horn of vehicles help her to come back in senses.

She jumped into the store "shiva tu free haina"

He kept the last sack on the ground and give her death glare "aey mami ki behen ki beti tu bhi mami ki tarah andhi h kya, dikh nahi raha kam kar raha hu or agar nahi dikh raha h toh ja eye specialist ke paas"

"Chup kar shiva, jab dekho bakwaas karta hai, puch toh liya kar kyu aayi hu..??"

Shiva looked at her annoyed and ask "kyu aayi hai"

"Tujhe na mere sath mele m chalna hai" she said squeezing hands in excitement.

"Aey gadhedi" he screams and raavi close her ears with finger *indeed she is Nautanki in real*

"Tere dimag kharab hai h tera sara kam chordke tere sath mele m jau..krish ko leja"

"Offfo yeh bhootnath bhi na kuch samjhta hi nahi h..jisko dekho krish ko chipka rahe h..kuch karna pdega" raavi by herself

"Dekh shiva, dhara di ne bola hai shiva ko lejana ab tu dekhle..m call kar rahi hu"

Shiva can't trust her mami ki behen ki beti because she is such a kaandu kiddo but he had no option left.


They got up on the bike and headed towards their destination...raavi get mesmerszied on seeing the beauty like another universe...the carnival is decorated with fairy lights. Without waiting for another second she grab his hand and made him stand in front candy floss stall.. the sparkle in his eyes is unnoticed by him

"aey mami ki behen ki beti tu kya 2 saal ki bachi hai jo yeh candy floss khayegi"

"offo shiva khane ke liye koi bada ya chota nahi hota..dil ko meethas se bhar de yeh le tere dil mei bhi guitar bajne lagenge"

"gadedhi" he said with a smile " tu hi kha"

She was so lost in enjoying her stuff that she didnt even notice that some floss arranged their seat on the tip on her nose..she look at him who is already looking at her

"ghur kya raha hai khayega kya"

shiva chuckles "mai kya khau teri piddu si naak toh alreday sab kha chuki"

"shiva majak mat kar"she said and tries to rub it using her little palms but it didnt work out.

He brought his hand near her face and admire her.. the bright sun under them leaving the beautiful rays enhancing the beauty of deep hazel eyes.. her find the route in his eyes and they both drown in each other wonderland..until the shopkeeper asked for the payment.


She drag him along with her kicking every pebble in their way..they stop in front of choori stall.

"Shiva chal bata konsi choori achi lag rahi h ??"

Shiva looked at her in amusement..what is this chipkali upto,why she is been so sweet with him today??

"Aey chipkali..mujhe nahi pta, tujhe jo pasand hai usko thele m thus or chalti bann"

"This stupid gadheda idiot full bhaut tedha hai..sidha karna padhega ishe" raavi by herself

She looked at him with fire of rings in eyes which underestimate him "aey mami ki behen ki beti ghoor kya rahi h tu..tu khadi reh yahi m ja raha hu"

A balloon face filled with anger burst off within seconds. She scream in crowd but he is nowhere to seen. Shiva reached in the parking area. He wanna run asap but this chipkali has his whole freaking heart. He know she is shechu in real, he can't leave her alone in the world full of rush..after few minutes of brainstorming he went agian inside and found raavi with a guy who is their mohalla friend, but shiva hate him.

And the only reason behind that is he always flirt with raavi and want her to be his friend in some other way. Seeing him so close with raavi on choori stall and she is not denying him. Although the emotions in her eyes are completely opposite from the actions..but as soon as he saw rahul's hand extended towards her wrist. He couldn't hold it back..he drag his feet towards the bike. Raavi smells the fire and leave the place as fast as she could. She had seen the fire rushing down his body.

They both reached the pandya niwas in no time...without saying a single raavi made her own way towards house from the auto. Shiva who is noticing her is clean bowled by her actions.. "why this gadedhi didn't ask me to drop her like she always do"

Just as he is about to call her name dhara do the same, raavi turned to see her face lingering with questions and curiosity.

"Raavi dikha na teri chooriyan kaha hai"

Raavi gave death glare to shiva before moving her eyesballs on her "jiske liye peheni thi usko toh koi interest nahi h fir kharidne ka bhi kya fyda" she complete her sentence and vanish in blink of eyes.

Each words of the sentence is scratching Shiva's heart.

"This chipakali only want chooriyan to show him..how on the earth someone can be so stupid that he didn't understand thousands of hints"

"Ek number ka gadheda hai tu shiva, ab manana padega meri dobi ko"


In evening

Raavi is sitting in front oh so sweet and ofcourse her favorite companion mirror.

'Mirror mirror on the wall who is the prettiest of all and answer is always her'

She want to go and celebrate with the pandyas but what shiva did with her today he definitely need a punishment for this. She take out her bangle and took a pair of it, but suddenly it a ring of Bangle slips from her slippery soft fingers, she bent down to take it up and stunned whn she came back on original position.

"Shiva"

He was busy admiring the beauty of his pearl..she looks adorable, beautiful as nymph. The black chaniya choli with contrasting red dupatta compliment with her milky white skin.

He comes out from wonderland whn raavi called out his name this time *loud*

"Tu yaha kya kar raha hai?"

"Garba karne aaya hu...gadedhi"

"Su thayo, garba toh chowk m tha na, garba ghar par kese kar skte hai hum ..kya shiva kuch bhi..?"

He facepalmed and murmured under breath "iska kuch nahi hosakta"

His eyes fall on the accessories laying abruptly on table, he pick up the silver lining payal. He bent, hold his small feet over his warm palm.

"Shiva kya kar raha hai"

"Shh..chup kitna bolti hai,agar der hogyi toh mujhe mat bolna isliye chup reh"

"Tu kesa hai shiva..jo hai saaf bolta bhi nahi h or na hi chupata hai. Mere taraf se sb clear hai..haan yeh bhi janti hu tu kya chahta hai par bolta kyu nahi h..kabhi kabhi pata nahi kyu tandav karne lag jata hai...gadheda stupid idiot fool" raavi by herself.

He make her wear the pair of silver oxidized jewelry in such a way that she can feel his warmth breath on her face which made her shiver down the spine. He love the affect of his on her, the sharp deep breath and constricting of muscles reflects all.

Without teasing her any other second, he smoothly trace his fingers through the route of her arm and ended on wrist..holding them. He take out the box wrapped with pastel coloured sheet behind her chair and opened it one go leaving raavi dumbstruck.

"Shiva yeh chooriyan tu kese..kab??"

"Voh mei...mei.."

"Mei mei kya kar raha hai, jldi bol na"

"Arey tu bolne toh de..time lgta hai"

"Chod tujhse kuch ni bola jayega..tu yeh chooriyan mre liye laya haina kyuki tujhe bura laga ki mujhe bura laga"

'Shiva chuckles at her silly talks...how cute she is. Should i plant a small kiss on her rosy red cheek...No shiva control'

He slip the ring of bangles in her wrist.. Tears of happiness roll down on her cheeks like droplet of rain, he slept them his thumb and said 'no' through the sweet gesture of eyes.

He hold both of her hands and kiss the both one by one..leaving raavi gasped by sensation...her body is on her fire. This is the very first time shiva did something of his own.

She push him slightly and run towards door fast to hide her face which is now tomato red.

She turned.. seeing him gazing her with so much affection and depth she couldn't herself.

She goes closer to him, peck him on his cheek..noticing his sweet expression and rushing from the room in one go.

Shiva took 10min to revert back in reality..he softly touch the area where her lips touched his skin.

"Ek se hi mn bhar gaya kya bhootnath..lgta hai dandiya rahul ke sath hi khelna pdega??"

She said mischievously hiding the behind the door.

"Abhi toh shuruvat hai meri chipkali" shiva by himself

"Rahul haan ruk tujhe toh m batata hu gadedhi"


And here their Rat-A-Tat start.

His chipkali.. her bhootnath





Prompt by Barkhaaa❤😘

Sorry it's not the way you thought it would be.😭


Nikkii love yaa❤️

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mai phirst mai phirst you dobi bachhiii inna pyaara likhti hai but baatein, total gandu jesi uff kya karu mein tera.........


also, CUTESY CUTESY HAI PRE-WEDS SHIVI!


AND PHASTM LIKHO AB AAGE WARNA MUKKA MAARUNGA

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Awww ❣️

Pre wedding shivi be the cutest 😍

This was such a beautiful read!

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TAGGING COZ THIS BACHHI WON'T

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Reswa!

So cute!!! Loved that Shiva understood. Eventually. But we all know that banda is pretty slow by now, so we'll take what we get... 😆

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Really loved it 😘😘😘

Was very cute.........

Will you continue the dandiya scene of Raavi playing with rahul and shiva fuming...........

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Sakku I'd read this sweet os again and again till i get diabetes

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Originally posted by: Iktara22

mai phirst mai phirst you dobi bachhiii inna pyaara likhti hai but baatein, total gandu jesi uff kya karu mein tera.........


also, CUTESY CUTESY HAI PRE-WEDS SHIVI!


AND PHASTM LIKHO AB AAGE WARNA MUKKA MAARUNGA


NIKKIIIIII....!! POL MAT KHOL😶😶

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Love yaa and thankyou for tagging everyone😂

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THANKYOU SO MUCH..❤️

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Aww. That was 🥰. Loved this version of Shivi and pre-wedding phase! ❤️

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