MaAn OS My feelings Re-edited

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Here is my first MaAn OS


After hearing the doctor say that Anuj is critical. Anu’s world comes crashing down. She looks at Anuj through the window and gets blank and doesn’t know how to react. She then staggers to a chair nearby and slumps on it. She then holds her pallu and cries bitterly remembering all the moment spent with Anuj. Then she remembers his confession and then she folds her hands and prays to Kanha ji to save Anuj at any cost.

As she is completely in to her prayer. Someone comes and sits next to her and says “Mere bare mein soch rahe hu”. Anu then opens her eyes and looks at the direction of the voice. Seeing the person in front of her made her eyes well up and her words choke. Her heart skipped a beat and her eyes played with a lot of emotions, its just she didn't know which emotion to hold on to. Was it happiness, relief or shock, she was not sure of it. “Tum mere bare mein soch rahi ho na”. Hearing this made her snap out of her thoughts and only one word escaped from her Anuj.

Anuj smiles and looks at her while adjusting his glasses. he says "Kya hua, Anu". Anupama stares at him but doesn't answer. Anuj looks at her, snaps his fingers and asks "Kahan kho gaye ho. Anu" Anu then asks him "Anuj tum, Kaise, Kya yeh mera sapna hain". Anuj laughs at her while Anu keeps staring at him. He says 'Nahi, Yeh sapna nahi hai' Then Anu asks all confused "Toh kya tum sach mein hoon". He again laughs and says "Nahi". Then Anu in complete worry and confusion asks "Toh phir". Anuj says “Come” and forwards his hand. Anu looks all confused and slowly she forwards her trembling hand to his. He takes her to a wall mirror, makes her stand in front of it and points at it and says " Main woh ehsaas hoon jo tumhari dil mein hain" She then looks at him all dazed and says "Meri dil main" Anuj nods a yes. She then looks back at the mirror but doesn't see Anuj in the reflection.

Anu gets confused and looks at Anuj. Anuj meets her gaze and says “Jo bhi dil mein hain bol do. Mann ko halka kardo. Main tumhe pareshaan aur dukhi nahi dekh sakta”. Anu feels overwhelmed and tears starts rolling from her eyes. Anuj seeing her tears rubs it from her eyes all the while Anu looks at him. He signs her Okay? She nods in a yes.

Anu then walks to a chair and sits all tensed, Anuj follows her and sits on a chair facing her. Anu looks at him and says "Kyu kyu kyu Tumne aisa kyu kiya, Tujhe kuch ho jata toh, Pehle tumne bola ki saare paise le lo or mujhe pareshaan mat karo uski baad ek chumbaak ke liye bhi bheeg mangi. Chumbaak hi to hain, kya farak padta hai" She looks at him and sees him smiling and she feels confused. He says “Sorry, please continue”, she gets annoyed and says "uski baad tumne bola ki saare paise aur card le lo' And then she charges at him 'Ap paagal ho kya, chor ko kaun apni card deta, card to chode tum to pin code batane ke liye tayaar bhi te. Kaun karta hai aisa" Anuj then laughs. Anu gets even more annoyed and scolds him “Iss mein hasne ki kya baat hain. Maine kya koi joke maari hai”. Anuj then holds himself and says “Sorry”.

Anu then looks away and starts crying. Anuj gets tensed and goes and sits next to her again. He says “ Kya hua Anu ro kyu rahi ho”. Anu looks at him and says "the fight" and she stammers and says " Main Main bohot daar gayi thi jab us gunde ne tujhe maara, Mai mai maine maine socha ke main tumhe ha ha hamesha kiliye kho dunge. Anuj says “Sach” Anu nods and says “ Mu Mu Mujhe laga ki” Anuj says “ki”. Anu cries badly and says “Mujhe laga ki aap mujhe chod ke chale jayengi” Anuj laughs softly and says "Do you really care for me that much Anu" Anu then looks all amazed at him.

Anu then says “Haan toh, aapki aadat hai ki chup chaap chale jaane ki. Fikar toh hogi na mujhe” Anuj then looks at her and asks “Kyu” Anu meets his gaze and says “ Kyu Kyunki main” Anuj then smiles and gets up and walks away from Anupama. Anupama asks him “ Kahan Ja rahe ho” He then turns and looks at her and says “Zindagi Reth Hai haathon se nikal jayeji. Jo bhi karna hai kar warna nikal jayegi". Anu asks “Matlab” . Anuj says “Maine apni dil ki baat bolne main der kardi, tum apni dil ki baat bolne mein der mat kar”. Anu looks at him confused and he smiles and walks away. Anu follows him and says “Anuj , Anuj”. She then finds him no where and then the (PROMO) sequence gets played till she sees Anuj unconscious. Then she looks around for Anuj, tears starts rolling from her eyes and she gets scared.


Hope you all enjoyed reading it

Edited by saito - 4 years ago

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Edited. Please do share your reviews

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Lovely writing and nice relief from the heavy anguish on the show. 👏

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Originally posted by: chat_3

Lovely writing and nice relief from the heavy anguish on the show. 👏

Thank you and glad you enjoyed

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