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Okay what just happened? How did I go from blushing uncontrollably to getting teary to laughing and finally crying my eyeballs out while reading this last one?!
Just how is that possible. I oscillated. Truly oscillated. Such a range, so beautifully executed. Ah the brilliance is upon us!
“Do you want this, Raavi?”
No. She sitting on your lap for inspecting the vision of your eyes.
Men can be seriously daft and enthralling at the same time can't they? What a quality truly. I didn't expect him to keep control throughout yk? At some point I speculated he'd give into his own frustration caused by her inexperienced-hesitant touches and thoroughly ravage her like last time. The fact that he didn't was something so unusually beautiful that I smiled throughout the scene. Was it an unusual reaction? I mean maybe but I found it endearing. The way he encouraged her to go for it and take the lead because he knew she wanted it badly and the way he sensed her confidence waning and assured her was unique. Its something you don't come across easily anywhere in stories.
And that is why I gave my heart to it. It was unexpected, brutally unique and utterly precious. Acceptance between the deed? AGAIN...unusual but intensely overwhelming to read. The scene was hawt. I don't know why you were worried about it? Honestly stop worrying man. You past the worry stage. You already perfect. Why the worry?
“Don’t say anything just now, Raavi. Just straighten yourself. We’re almost there”
THIS. Oh My Lord this. I have read a LOT of stories in my 8 years on the forum, like really A LOT. I wasn't in on any DTs or EDTs before PS so considering the number of my posts yk I'm not lying. But never before do I remember this being done after an intimate scene. Stopping someone from confessing in the high of climax or post coital haze, is something I don't remember coming across any of the forums I've been through and I can't even begin to describe how excellent this felt. This was the first time probably in the whole series where I sided with Shiva and did not get frustrated over him doing anything his way. I don't remember doing this before either but here, in this portion I actually forgot about how Raavi must have felt atm. Considering how much of a Raavi stan I am this is big. 😆
Right, yeah. Earth to Shiva. End of fantasy.
I never thought she'd continue talking in the returning period. Glances? Yes of course Duh! But her coming forward and stating downright about the number #4 and #8 was something very bold and completely in contrast to the Chapter 1 Raavi and holy cow I loved it. Talk about character development throughout the series. THIS IS WHAT DEFINES IT.
You wouldn't believe it but just before I read the line above I whispered the exact same thing 'Earth to Shiva'. He drifted in his own dream fantasy land in the middle of the road and yeah I don't blame him but yikes the fantasy was- ughh- yeah- umm- insane sweltering. I blacked out because that's a sequel OS prompt right there in the middle of the chapter and I couldn't help manifesting it. I'm sorry. You called your funeral here, giving us prompts when we already have 92625 of them. 🤪
Dil ki girah khol do was playing as Shiva spun her around in a waltz and Raavi thought, how appropriate the song was.
Okay so you went on and added a Cinderella-Waltz moment apart from the list and I absolutely loved it. It wasn't unusual it didn't feel out of context, it just was. In the moment, precious as ever. Not to mention another one of the beautiful songs from your playlist. Shankar-Jaykishan's music is pathbreaking but what magic have Lata Jee and Manna Dey saab threaded into it here? Holy lord you cannot differentiate between Lata and a Koyal singing in the Sunrise. She was and will be the irreplaceable one in the industry.
He didn’t think she was important enough! He had been just toying with her! All this was still a joke to him, he had just been having a bit of fun with her. Or probably he pitied her for even having that pathetic list. He must have thought it could be a good altruistic gesture - helping poor Raavi fulfill her laughably pathetic bucket list.
I flipped here. I flipped from the giddy happy grinning fool to agonized bunny within seconds. I knew something was coming up and yeahhh-I felt the agony. Its not easy trusting someone when you've been hurt so many times. Its hard to believe someone can go above and beyond for you (even when he does) simply because you're not used to it or I'd like to say never cared for in the way you wanted to be cared for, or never had someone look at you twice leave going to lengths for you. I understand and I connect to her reaction. Leaving the venue like a mess, crumbling but still standing her ground of not letting anyone know the fragility that resides within her. Beautiful. Beautiful. Beautiful. Relatable.
“Were you crying, Chipkali?”
Ummm Okayyyyyy. I expected a tear wiping with the thumb but okay this works just fine too. 😆
I expected Raavi's outburst. It was long overdue. Felt a bit more intensity could have elevated it but then again there was comfort in what followed after so it all panned out perfect. I went all showing my teeth as if someone placed a anger in my mouth over the 'Kahan Hai Meri Chipkali?'. Comfort. Was the expected reaction heart jump? Sorry Imma weird I do opposite things always. I just kept smiling throughout yk?
Them Bantering and trying to win in a senseless argument from one another is SO SHIVI I can't even-
It is Shivi through and through, the ultimate essence. The slight Enemies to Lovers Trope mixed with Childhood frenemies is what makes them unique and I cannot find any better way to portray them that the conversation that followed after. It was natural. It was what they truly are.
“You have taken over my life, Raavi. You’ve become my world. I cannot even imagine life without you by my side. I need you to breathe!”
BAM! More tears. Instantly. I wasn't lying to you about the oscillation okayyyy? Its real that stuff was real.
How are you doing this? Turning me into a maniacal reader. Lord!
Teach me Master!! Imma your disciple.
Shavi got no pizzazzzzz. Seconded. Name your kid Shivi. 😆
“What did you think of when you touched yourself, Raavi?”
You just had to teleport me back to Bridgerton-JQ land didn't you? Just had to. I would be lying if I didn't go into the FB of the Daphne scene then came back to the Daphne-Simon scene at her admission. All Bridgerton fans WOULD definitely get a TB I'm more than sure of it. It was a beautifully portrayed scene, Phoebe did a good job with the scene, but for some reason I've always wanted them to have this as an actual conversation and not in between their 'spirited activities' if you know what I mean. Lol.
Raavi's confession, though subtle completed my wishes for sure. It was precise and apt.
#11. Kill Disha, or torture her slowly (Ideas? Roasting over an open fire? Knife-throwing while pinned to a spinning wheel? Tickling feet while tied up? Cage her in a closed room and play Himesh Reshammiya songs all night?)
This was the LAST THING I expected #11 to be. Trust me, never in my wildest dreams did I imagine her going all Ninja over Disha after having an argument with Shiva. I thought it would be related to him and I laughed very sincerely at this. Trust me.
You think we'd be satisfied with bas itna sa action? You so wrong beyond belief.
We're ABSOLUTELY incorrigible. We need the rest of the action in an epilogue. Marriage / Water-Emerging / Three-In-A-Row, I don't care what or how you get the epilogue...
WE NEED ONE. WITH FULL ACTION.
Imma being shameless and asking you straight up. Will keep stalking you / bothering you. As is my right
Tell me you're coming up with a new story please?
We can't loose you.
You too precious to let go.
PS can't loose your brilliant stuff. We need you to give us back to back content bruh.
EVERYONE WILL SECOND ME HERE.
I'm not letting you leave. NEVER. Not letting you out of my freaking sight at all. Come What May.
It has been an experience reading this and truly truly truly amazing discovering you.
I am Not Letting You go until I'm here. TRUST ME.
Keep writing.
Keep Thriving.
Keep coming up with legendary stuff.
Always will be here to read your stories. Forever and beyond. ❤️
PS : Still Mad About missing My Spot okayyyy?
Edited by EuphoricDamsel. - 3 years ago
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