Journey to the centre of my Earth (Shivi TS)(partly 18+)(pg7, 29/11) - Page 7

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Thank you Anupama❤️! Agar makers yeh sab dikhate, then I would be a very happy person indeed... But I'm sure they'll sweep things under the rug and so I decided to write Suman's redemption myself! Iss show ki fan banke mujhe kya kya karni padti hain re Baba?!!!

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Thank you🤗 Humein bhi imagine karne ko mil jaata hai Choubay's ki adbhutness digest nahi hoti🤣 Show na choda jaata hai aur na hi Choubay isse sehan karne laayak chodte hai😆

They are so adbhut beyond our thoughts🤪

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Hello! I'm glad you loved this piece, and I love your favorite dialogue too!!! Aise bhi bhaag jaate kya log? 🤣🤣

SuSu ka naak kat gaya letters dekhe, aur kya🤪?! And yes, they've taken time for themselves away from all the toxic influences and interruptions there family provides!

Also, read the second part yet? Updated it yesterday, this is now officially a TS!!! And Shivi are coming back in this part! Have fun reading it!!! ❤️

PS What may I call you?

my name is Roopa....

haven't read the next part

can't wait to read

Oh wow Sathya! What a masterpiece you’ve created! I loved the diary entry way of story telling. I loved still how you managed to get both POV! Ofc I loved the angst. The last entry made me cry with happiness at the pain, truth and hope it contained. I loved how it followed canon but had its own elements as well. I loved how you made the exact thing the show lacks. Proper POVs! Just love love love!❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥

Originally posted by: VaishnaviG

Loved it Sathya 🤗

I liked how you gave shivi their own time before returning to Pandya Niwas then how Raavi took her time for calling Suman Ma also you beautifully showed Suman’s redemption and also how Shiva supported throughout and not interfering between Suman and Raavi.The best thing was all the progress was made gradual and not abruptly, because healing takes time in relationship in real world and not happen overnight.

Choti🤗! I'm glad you loved it.... Redemption doesn't always need grand gestures in real life either, unlike ITV, and I wanted to show that with a gradual redemption for Suman.... So I'm glad you loved it!!!

PS How's real life going for you? Prep's all good? ❤️

Originally posted by: Suparna2210

Oh wow Sathya! What a masterpiece you’ve created! I loved the diary entry way of story telling. I loved still how you managed to get both POV! Ofc I loved the angst. The last entry made me cry with happiness at the pain, truth and hope it contained. I loved how it followed canon but had its own elements as well. I loved how you made the exact thing the show lacks. Proper POVs! Just love love love!❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥

@bold Thank you Suparna!!!! I'm glad you liked the format, especially because this was the first time I've tried it out either... And I'm actually a fan of stories that follow canon then diverge more than I am of complete AUs because I feel like the characters tend to remain pretty similar in them, just in different situations... 😆

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Choti🤗! I'm glad you loved it.... Redemption doesn't always need grand gestures in real life either, unlike ITV, and I wanted to show that with a gradual redemption for Suman.... So I'm glad you loved it!!!

PS How's real life going for you? Prep's all good? ❤️

Sathya 🤗

Real life is doing okay so far , just stressed a bit.The prep is going okay .

Originally posted by: VaishnaviG

Sathya 🤗

Real life is doing okay so far , just stressed a bit.The prep is going okay .

Keep calm and everything else will go well on its own. Text me of you need an outlet for ranting!!! 😆

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Keep calm and everything else will go well on its own. Text me of you need an outlet for ranting!!! 😆

Yes I would 😆

That was one superb part🥳

I loved how Raavi was polite yet she showed everyone her worth👍🏼and loved even more when Shiva supported her

I wish such a thing was shown in the serial tooo😳

Loved it dear❤️ Alot🤗

Originally posted by: Paru95

That was one superb part🥳

I loved how Raavi was polite yet she showed everyone her worth👍🏼and loved even more when Shiva supported her

I wish such a thing was shown in the serial tooo😳

Loved it dear❤️ Alot🤗

Thank you!!!! I wish we got this on the show too... A lot! ❤️