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Posted: 3 years ago
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Such a beautiful piece, just wow 👏👍🏼

Loved reading it ❤️❤️


Amrita in true sense became Pritam's humdard here.


Pritam and his emotions were so well penned down 👏👍🏼


I just loved how beautifully she tried to cheer him up by changing the topic.


And their lil banter after that regarding whether Pritam is a gunda or not is so much fun filled 😆


The last few lines of Amrita about men crying are so, so, apt and beautiful 👏👍🏼


Kudos to you for writing those line ❤️👏👍🏼


Beautifully written drabble, loved reading it ❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Beautiful masterpiece.

Loved it❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anindita91

Such a beautiful piece, just wow 👏👍🏼

Loved reading it ❤️❤️


Amrita in true sense became Pritam's humdard here.


Pritam and his emotions were so well penned down 👏👍🏼


I just loved how beautifully she tried to cheer him up by changing the topic.


And their lil banter after that regarding whether Pritam is a gunda or not is so much fun filled 😆


The last few lines of Amrita about men crying are so, so, apt and beautiful 👏👍🏼


Kudos to you for writing those line ❤️👏👍🏼


Beautifully written drabble, loved reading it ❤️❤️

Thank you so much!! 🤗

I am glad you enjoyed reading the piece asuch I enjoy writing it!

There banters are too fun to omit out hence, I try to keep their basic nature intact in my very few stories on them. ❤️

Ahh, those lines in the end by her were a last moment change but i am glad you liked

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Scribbled_tales

Beautiful masterpiece.

Loved it❤️

Thank you so much❤️🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I am not much of a fan of this couple in the show as I find them boring but this has got to be your best writing

I loved the dialogues and their personality here

Amrita tricked him😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: evilxbalaa

I am not much of a fan of this couple in the show as I find them boring but this has got to be your best writing

I loved the dialogues and their personality here

Amrita tricked him😆

I don't know why I love there vibe in there alone scenes! I absolutely enjoy their equation and banter, hence I write at some days on them. You should watch the recent track, you will absolutely love them.

But to sum up thank you so much. I am glad you liked it so much. And yes even I love their personality here too and dialogues too.

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