AmriTam Drabble: Humdard

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Posted: 2 years ago

Such a beautiful piece, just wow πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸΌ

Loved reading it β€οΈβ€οΈ


Amrita in true sense became Pritam's humdard here. 


Pritam and his emotions were so well penned down πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸΌ


I just loved how beautifully she tried to cheer him up by changing the topic. 


And their lil banter after that regarding whether Pritam is a gunda or not is so much fun filled πŸ˜†


The last few lines of Amrita about men crying are so, so, apt and beautiful πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸΌ


Kudos to you for writing those line β€οΈπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸΌ


Beautifully written drabble, loved reading it β€οΈβ€οΈ

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Posted: 2 years ago

Beautiful masterpiece. 

Loved it❀️

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Originally posted by: Anindita91

Such a beautiful piece, just wow πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸΌ

Loved reading it β€οΈβ€οΈ


Amrita in true sense became Pritam's humdard here. 


Pritam and his emotions were so well penned down πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸΌ


I just loved how beautifully she tried to cheer him up by changing the topic. 


And their lil banter after that regarding whether Pritam is a gunda or not is so much fun filled πŸ˜†


The last few lines of Amrita about men crying are so, so, apt and beautiful πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸΌ


Kudos to you for writing those line β€οΈπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸΌ


Beautifully written drabble, loved reading it β€οΈβ€οΈ

Thank you so much!! πŸ€—

I am glad you enjoyed reading the piece asuch I enjoy writing it! 

There banters are too fun to omit out hence, I try to keep their basic nature intact in my very few stories on them. β€οΈ

Ahh, those lines in the end by her were a last moment change but i am glad you liked

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Scribbled_tales

Beautiful masterpiece. 

Loved it❀️

Thank you so muchβ€οΈπŸ€—

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Posted: 2 years ago

I am not much of a fan of this couple in the show as I find them boring but this has got to be your best writing

I loved the dialogues and their personality here

Amrita tricked himπŸ˜†

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: evilxbalaa

I am not much of a fan of this couple in the show as I find them boring but this has got to be your best writing

I loved the dialogues and their personality here

Amrita tricked himπŸ˜†

I don't know why I love there vibe in there alone scenes! I absolutely enjoy their equation and banter, hence I write at some days on them. You should watch the recent track, you will absolutely love them. 

But to sum up thank you so much. I am glad you liked it so much. And yes even I love their personality here too and dialogues too.